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    Posted: 06 February 2007 at 9:27am
20Lines Into me by 2weeks today which is the 20th...
 
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SPARTA

~Ikon aka Game, Fatal aka Flash (old names)
~Thailand (in SE Asia) used to be called Siam, and they were taken over by Japan in the 1940s
~GF- Game+Flash / GirlFriend
~Battle Royale was a no vets tourney
~Fatal likes to dress his verses up, ie bold, italics etc, callgirls (hos) dress up when they work
~Last line- Ikon's 17, ie not old enough to fuck, 'sent down'- arrested/beaten





You clowns thought we'd get slammed? We're thwartin' your plan before it began
You two couldn't 'own the Siamese' if you were 1940's Japan
We won't be stoppin' till these chumps are depressed,
Valentine's day's just gone but that won't stop me 'dumpin' GF'
Kon, if ya such a great boss, then why your members quittin' ya crew?
Blank jumped to the V...ha, he'd rather be under LiQuid than you!
Shav, you can chat about your titles but I gotta doubt 'em a moment,
Cos one was minus vets, the other without an opponent!
We got clout you can't cope with, if you think you'll take us, you're wrong...
There's no place for 'Flash, Game' on LA...this ain't mousebreaker.com
An' Fatal, your skill's debatable, so don't pretend you're winning
'Cos last time it only took me 4 lines to send ya spinnin'
I'll end your grinning, you can't fuck with the best, bruh
His verses are like callgirls (why?) 'Cos they 'suck when they're dressed up'
I mean, with his bitching and moaning, no way we can respect his rhymes
Called Shade generic, an' now he's dropping shit wordplays every second line!
I know we're crew but that won't stop me breaking a brother
Fatal's had some hard losses? Ha, we got you and Ikon takin' another!
Fatal copped a lucky rank, but that's no reason to believe that you're hard
An if Kon tries to fuck with he'll get 'sent down', an' I don't just mean by our bars...

Point
 
The Opener...Dope...Fag...Smoke...Ya Shud Get It.
* - I Laf At Kon...Re-arrange Em It Says Fatal Ikon
** - Fatal Dresses His Verses. For Those That Done Know, Dressin A Verse Is Bolding, Italics Etc .

Individually They're Useless,But Together Suprisingly Dope
Coz Ones A Fag : The Others Burning Corpse Providin The Smoke
In Ya Crew Except For Sprta, Each Guy Is A Joke
So Ill Be Takin Ya Lifes Like Goods From Inside Of A Boat
Like Crippled Wrestlers, Yall Cant Reach This Tag
An Aint It A Coincidence Fatal And Game Equals F.A.G ?
Fatal Actin Like A Leader Of TD, Yet Hes The Wackest One
But Both Of You Are Clowns...Yet Mostly I Laf At Kon*
Fatal's A Dickrider,So Ya Gettin Dropped Of Course
Coz You More Annoyin On Dynastys Ass Than Tags On Boxer Shorts
Ya Cant Stop The Force, And Its True That You Lack Punches
So You Gettin Left Behind Like Bananas In Kids Packed Lunches!
An Kon Ill Bring Sparta To The Dark Side, An Rip Apart Your Crew
Coz I Can See Hotness In Everyone, But Ikontinue (I-Cant-In-You)
An Fatal, Your Rusty ? Trust Me, We Know It Dude
But If You Ask Nicely, Im Sure Kon Will Rub Oil Over You!
Fatal's Older Than Kon, So I Thought Hed Be A Bit Smarter
I Guess Not Tho,So Dress Ya Verse All Ya Want,It Wont Hit Harder**
Why Im Being So Nice? Well You BOTH Welcomed Me For A Starter
So I Guess Its Only Fair I Send Regards At Your Departure

Kindest Regards
 
Point Blank
 
 

IKON
FYI
*Point Blank no showed me because he had a pet he had to take care of Notice the animals stated in the line, his profile says Mackie : point.. he has dopest style IMO, has a rep for being a youngster on the site, so notice those jabs, and hes a fisherman
**Kurt Cobain was a rocker who thought he was gay, and also committed suicide, Sprta listens to rock mostly, and the other personals on him are evident

Fuck It...

Im clashin bars with a small kid with whippings from his moms still?!
Nah, chill! Ill make him drop sooooner than his balls will!
Askin Whos wack? Yeah, you owned YOURSLEF by doin that
Was that rhetorical? I mean, it's OBVIOUS through clues and facts!

Peeps elevate wit practice, but for Blank its not a factor
Cus for him, he BATTLES MORE, and every time has gotten wacker! (Senor's vote)

What an actor in this fuckin game, and like his skill, its such a shame
Tell me whos the bitch and seemed pussy with ya ducking game!*


Yuh,

Plus, ya tamed And Sprta, I aint even want no trouble, mayne
But you FAR from gettin heard, SO FUCK that shit above your name (accent)
This fucka playing? Tryna bark loud, yet hes muzzled tamed
Aint seen a faggot rocker wanna die this bad since Kurt Cobain**

You aint the same Since youve been recruited, havent made a hit
Now only time Ive seen you Shot Fire was with Jadas shit (Submitted by...)

That baby bitch is never blowin heat unless a cake exists
And make a wish for a fresh flow bar when you prey on fish! (hahaaaaahahahaaa)

I hate to rip crew (sprta), but I guess thats just the way it is
Ill just assume you never knew its unlawful when you play with kids! (lmfaoo)

Tag belts, hes sure of thatQuit countin chicks before they hatch
You KNOW youre wack when you gotta resort to using quotes form Mack!*

What?!
FATAL

 

 
Expos:
^Big Battle that Sparta Eventually lost to the Persians...
2. Point=Index Finger...Break Point, Snap Fingers...Get it lol
3. We Dropped PB from Dynasty For Wanting To Lead his own crew, He joined With a "lesser" crew
4. Sparta is the only one of us who's not pro
5. PB has battled 3 or 4 people here, 3 or 4 times...lol
6. If you take S and P OUT of sparta's name, your left with letters ARAT
 
 
Bomb First...
 
Quickly Flip These Bitches, My Hits Are Presice like Surgical Lasers
Shit, "Fatal Turns The Tables" Quicker Than "Murderous Waiters!"
 
Make it Rain...
We Hurtin These Fakers, Me n Kon Trainin These Kids
Im Flippin "Sparta N Point(s)" Like Ya "Name in Ya Sig!!"
Im Breakin Ya Quick, Repeat History, Leavin This Bitch Rattled
In Fact, This Aint The First Time Spartas Lost A Big Battle! *
Blanks A Snake, Switched Sides, Ya Made Me Dissapoint
Not 'Crunk', But Ill Make Ya "Snap Ya Fingers" The Way Im "Breakin Point!"
Haaaaa!!!
Now Ya Passed Up (Yup) Gassed Up, Why Ya Think We Dropped You?
Wanted To LEAD a Group...So WHY YOU JOIN A WACK CREW?!? (Whaaa?)
N Sparta? Ya Wack Too! It's Inevitable That Ya BOTH Lose!
No Coincidence, INCONCISTANCE, Why Ya Think Ya STILL Not Pro Too?
Its So True...Abuse Venomous' Recruit's Weaponry Now
Its Like "Fatals Erasing Bad Spelling" How "Im Whiping SnP Out!!"
Yall Wreckin Me, How? P's Got 30 Wins From Battlin Newbs 
Id Have Twice As Many Wins Too, If I KEPT BATTLIN THE SAME DUDES!
We Slayin These Fools, Spartas A RAT....Here's Proof:
We Takin S and P Out...What You Left Wit? The Truth...*
Comin In Second: Is YOU, Shame, Ya Wont Win This Time
Cuz Like "Heart Attacks In Races", I "Kill Ya Wit My Finish Line!"   
...Flatline...
...Fatal N Ikon...
...The DreamTeam...


ok vote up...



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2007 at 2:33pm
I could go into a long and drawn out vote, but I expected better from both teams. Some shit just wasn't hitting despite the hard trying. The flow on all 4 pieces was off, the wordplay was ineffective at times. The biggest disappointment here was Ikon. I say if Stalin would've dropped a better verse in the last round there's no way we woulda lost against this even if we half-assed it. After reading all verses twice, I figure Point had the best verse, followed by Fatal, then sparta, and lastly Ikon. By virtue of 1 and 3 beating 2 and 4, Sparta and Point get the vote. Step your collective game up tho.


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Thanks for the extra opinion there, J. And YES, I said Opinion. You're are skilled, but you can't beat me "half assin" shit... Lol @ no verses flowing either...I caaan't see that, and I'm speaking all 4 verses... Thanks for votin' though... And props on the verses... All were nice to me, and extra props for Fatal finally showin'! Haa... 1 dash 0, S & PB
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 01 March 2007 at 8:12pm
This was wack...wtf... You all had some ok ideas... I mean, ya attempts at name flips were so abstract, that in order to really make them good disses u needed to word them better than u did... And the straightup personals, the supposed "knock-out blows"... were pretty samey... shit didn't stand out enough...
 
Some individual things to point out... Point, I laf at Kon was so, so wack...so was the opener...dress line was barely a jab... I can't in you was terrible as well... you had one hot line, the oil one...then a couple average ones... Ikon, opener's played out, generally wayyyy too focused on personals, as in personal info, instead of making the shit hit... made u suffer quite a lot...ducking shit and closer were ok but shit like Kurt Cobain was terrible... he was hardly known for "thinking he was gay" so it's clutching at straws really... Sparta, LiQuid and callgirls lines were very good but the rest were pretty lame... I mean the opening nameflips? You gotta come out swinging...closer was too tame/subtle too, u need to bang with your closer... this was disappointing... Flash, also two good lines, breaking Point and wack crew...but generally ya lines didn't bomb so bad 'cuz they were at least jabbin' most of the time
 
Neither team did shit enough as a team... I ain't saying go back and forth or colour code like this was rap for faggots or anything...but just make ya attack more systematic...or at least get the feeling it's a 2 on 2... I read that shit almost like it was 4 way all-against-all type shit... So really when judging, I gotta judge on individuals and how they came and add it together, like Jehu did... It's hard... I think Flash may have won this for his team tho... purely 'cuz I didn't read his shit and cringe... he didn't swing and miss too much, u know... Sparta and Point were better lyrically but were too irrelevant or tenuous in their links between the disses they wrote and their opponents... like would either opponent read a line and think "damn, he got me"? Don't think so... whereas I'm sure Flash and Ikon made more valid points...even if they didn't word 'em well enough...they had more to 'em from a personal standpoint to make it cut a lil deeper...but all y'all motherfuckas were chicken scratching at best for real... this is madly disappointing
 
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. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 March 2007 at 6:00am
Come on...
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I Just Realised, Ther Is No Crew Votes Cry

Thats Probably Fairer Tho So I Aint Complainin

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 March 2007 at 6:49am
I think i have been slightly harsh on all of you but fuck it lol..
 
 
Sparta

You clowns thought we'd get slammed? We're thwartin' your plan before it began
You two couldn't 'own the Siamese' if you were 1940's Japan
^ Nice, good originality.. Flowed well, packed a punch..

We won't be stoppin' till these chumps are depressed,
Valentine's day's just gone but that won't stop me 'dumpin' GF'
^ LMFAO, was really feeling this.. Good shit, packed a serious punch..

Kon, if ya such a great boss, then why your members quittin' ya crew?
Blank jumped to the V...ha, he'd rather be under LiQuid than you!
^ Lmao, good shit another hard hitter in my eyes for blatent reasons..

Shav, you can chat about your titles but I gotta doubt 'em a moment,
Cos one was minus vets, the other without an opponent!
^ Flow was slightly off, first half of the punch is slightly played now.. Second half was nice but the whole bar was lost with the flow..

We got clout you can't cope with, if you think you'll take us, you're wrong...
There's no place for 'Flash, Game' on LA...this ain't mousebreaker.com
^ Love it, straight back after a slightly poor line.. Brilliance..

An' Fatal, your skill's debatable, so don't pretend you're winning
'Cos last time it only took me 4 lines to send ya spinnin'
^ Boasting kinda line but packed a punch, more of a degrading dig than a haymaker... Like it..

I'll end your grinning, you can't fuck with the best, bruh
His verses are like callgirls (why?) 'Cos they 'suck when they're dressed up'
^ Illllllllll... I seen alot of dressed up verses in my time, but none flipped like that lmao..

I mean, with his bitching and moaning, no way we can respect his rhymes
Called Shade generic, an' now he's dropping shit wordplays every second line!
^ Lmao, :D.. Flow was iffy again, but the relevance was there.. Hit well, could have been a killer..

I know we're crew but that won't stop me breaking a brother
Fatal's had some hard losses? Ha, we got you and Ikon takin' another!
^ Nah, nothing hard... Yeah its a dig but nothing serious.. Minimal..

Fatal copped a lucky rank, but that's no reason to believe that you're hard
An if Kon tries to fuck with he'll get 'sent down', an' I don't just mean by our bars...
^ Lol, i like it but again nothing major.. bad finish to a class verse..

Overall.. Some real haymakers, opening bars where ill but just fell of toward the end.. You had some nice originality and brought some new shit to the table.. The Dressed Up Line was just killer..


Point Blank

Individually They're Useless,But Together Suprisingly Dope
Coz Ones A Fag : The Others Burning Corpse Providin The Smoke
^ Nah, not feeling this boy.. Rubbish opener.. The reading is hard too..

In Ya Crew Except For Sprta, Each Guy Is A Joke
So Ill Be Takin Ya Lifes Like Goods From Inside Of A Boat
^ Better, but nothing personal.. Hits i guess.. Flow picked back up too..

Like Crippled Wrestlers, Yall Cant Reach This Tag
An Aint It A Coincidence Fatal And Game Equals F.A.G ?
^ Lmao, funny.. More like the PB i know.. Hit nicely..

Fatal Actin Like A Leader Of TD, Yet Hes The Wackest One
But Both Of You Are Clowns...Yet Mostly I Laf At Kon*
^ Arrrghh, i personally cant fucking stand it when people re-arrange names..

Fatal's A Dickrider,So Ya Gettin Dropped Of Course
Coz You More Annoyin On Dynastys Ass Than Tags On Boxer Shorts
^ Lmao, comedian.. Funny, whitty, hits nicely..

Ya Cant Stop The Force, And Its True That You Lack Punches
So You Gettin Left Behind Like Bananas In Kids Packed Lunches!
^ Nice, nothing special..

An Kon Ill Bring Sparta To The Dark Side, An Rip Apart Your Crew
Coz I Can See Hotness In Everyone, But Ikontinue (I-Cant-In-You)
^ Now thats what im talking about.. You DIDNT re-arrange his name you used it to create an ill punch.. Your best so far..

An Fatal, Your Rusty ? Trust Me, We Know It Dude
But If You Ask Nicely, Im Sure Kon Will Rub Oil Over You!
^ HAHAHAHAA, quality... Hits mega hard.. Flow was there..

Fatal's Older Than Kon, So I Thought Hed Be A Bit Smarter
I Guess Not Tho,So Dress Ya Verse All Ya Want,It Wont Hit Harder**
^ Yadda yadda, wheres the actual punch?..

Why Im Being So Nice? Well You BOTH Welcomed Me For A Starter
So I Guess Its Only Fair I Send Regards At Your Departure
^ Nice, cockey.. Hits ok..

Overall.. One of the worst verses i have seen from you.. Sorry baby but it is.. You normaly bring cockeyness, originality, punches ect to the mix but this verse was a blend on none relevant or avarage lines.. Iunno, maybe you become to "fish involved"..

 
IKON

Im clashin bars with a small kid with whippings from his moms still?!
Nah, chill! Ill make him drop sooooner than his balls will!
^ Nice but played.. Anything relating to Points age has past its sell by date now..

Askin Whos wack? Yeah, you owned YOURSLEF by doin that
Was that rhetorical? I mean, it's OBVIOUS through clues and facts!
^ Lmao, feeling this.. Good punch connects well..

Peeps elevate wit practice, but for Blank its not a factor
Cus for him, he BATTLES MORE, and every time has gotten wacker!
^ In my honest opinion this is not fact some a wack bar, Senor says "its not the Blank that KO'ed him" no-where does it say hes getting worse?..

What an actor in this fuckin game, and like his skill, its such a shame
Tell me whos the bitch and seemed pussy with ya ducking game!
^ Nice, hit well... Good flow, personal..

Plus, ya tamed And Sprta, I aint even want no trouble, mayne
But you FAR from gettin heard, SO FUCK that shit above your name
^ Huh, i understand but im missing somthing here?..

This fucka playing? Tryna bark loud, yet hes muzzled tamed
Aint seen a faggot rocker wanna die this bad since Kurt Cobain
^ Lmao, nice idea, hit well.. But as for "faggot rocker - Kurt Cobain", Kurt was not gay..

You aint the same Since youve been recruited, havent made a hit
Now only time Ive seen you Shot Fire was with Jadas shit..
^ Iunno maybe im being mega pickey but the song he submitted was "Shot'S' Fire'D'" which is totally diffrent to "Shot Fire"...

That baby bitch is never blowin heat unless a cake exists
And make a wish for a fresh flow bar when you prey on fish!
^ LMFAO, now this is better more like the text champ we know.. Hard hitter..

I hate to rip crew (sprta), but I guess thats just the way it is
Ill just assume you never knew its unlawful when you play with kids!
^ Lmbfao, i know i said the whole age gag is played but this is original and somthing new, a dig at Point through Sparta.. Good shit...

Tag belts, hes sure of thatQuit countin chicks before they hatch
You KNOW youre wack when you gotta resort to using quotes form Mack!*
^ Hehhee like it, a solid dig.. Hits well.. Good finisher from a weak verse..

Overall.. Same as Point,not your best.. My main issue was the way you used things like what Senor said and that song Sparta posted, you kinda twisted the truth to try and make a punch..


Fatal

 
Quickly Flip These Bitches, My Hits Are Presice like Surgical Lasers
Shit, "Fatal Turns The Tables" Quicker Than "Murderous Waiters!"
^ Lmao, good wordplay but unfortunally its a big up line..

We Hurtin These Fakers, Me n Kon Trainin These Kids
Im Flippin "Sparta N Point(s)" Like Ya "Name in Ya Sig!!"
^ not feeling this..

Im Breakin Ya Quick, Repeat History, Leavin This Bitch Rattled
In Fact, This Aint The First Time Spartas Lost A Big Battle!
^ Haha, i like this.. Finally hit him with some venmon..

Blanks A Snake, Switched Sides, Ya Made Me Dissapoint
Not 'Crunk', But Ill Make Ya "Snap Ya Fingers" The Way Im "Breakin Point!"
^ LMAO, love this, great flip and use of imgination..

Now Ya Passed Up (Yup) Gassed Up, Why Ya Think We Dropped You?
Wanted To LEAD a Group...So WHY YOU JOIN A WACK CREW?!? (Whaaa?)
^ Im not going to judge the first line as i was told along time ago Point didnt get dropped, he left.. Second line his hard and is true lol..

N Sparta? Ya Wack Too! It's Inevitable That Ya BOTH Lose!
No Coincidence, INCONCISTANCE, Why Ya Think Ya STILL Not Pro Too?
^ Ouch, very personal.. One of the best lines in the battle..

Its So True...Abuse Venomous' Recruit's Weaponry Now
Its Like "Fatals Erasing Bad Spelling" How "Im Whiping SnP Out!!"
^ Lmao, like it good flow hits well.. Funny..

Yall Wreckin Me, How? P's Got 30 Wins From Battlin Newbs
Id Have Twice As Many Wins Too, If I KEPT BATTLIN THE SAME DUDES!
^ Umm this is slightly played but could of hit really hard the way you dropped it.. Its just the flow was very off..

We Slayin These Fools, Spartas A RAT....Here's Proof:
We Takin S and P Out...What You Left Wit? The Truth...*
^ Now i know i said i hate re-arranged names but this is simple and effective.. Hits realllly hard..

Comin In Second: Is YOU, Shame, Ya Wont Win This Time
Cuz Like "Heart Attacks In Races", I "Kill Ya Wit My Finish Line!"
^ Generic and pointless, not a good finisher..

Overall.. Good, again i think i have seen better from you you had a few real hard digs laced with some poor shit...

 
 
Ok, this is possibally one of the worst finals i have ever read lol.. 3 real poor verses and one fairly strong..
 
Sorry if you feel i have been an arse but im only speaking what i feel.. I judged you all on flow and punches nothing else.. Cus' the ability to punch you opponent and lace it all together is what wins battles..
 
 
Vote: Sparta & Point, even though i thought Points was crap..
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 March 2007 at 6:53am
LMAO i just read Orions and Jehu votes... I didnt read them before cus' normally that sits in the back of my mind well im voting..
 
Lmao.. I thought i was being harsh calling this whiole battle wack but maybe i was'nt..
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 25 March 2007 at 12:05pm
Ummmmmmm...I'm gonna give a honest vote but not bar by bar break downs....don't feel like it
 
Sparta:  I after reading all the verses I thought you had the best.  Punches were hard hitting and consistent...Original too...The GF thing was good...valentine's day made it better...Overall a pretty good verse in my opinion...Good Work
 
Aqualad:  This wasn't a bad verse but not good either...It was okay but some of your wordplay was a stretch...Like the I laf at game or whatever it was, I was not feeling that.  Punches hit but just barely...
 
Game:  Verse was a disappointment...I feel I can argue that your verse was the weakest in this battle...You started off strong but drifted swiftly...Operner was cool and a few punches afterwards but the second half was weak to me...Also, I didn't see any good punches directed at sparta...It was like you was scared to diss him cause he in ya crew...Can't have that, gotta be more like me, I call mackie a bitch all the time...Aslo, some of your multis was forced as hell, like addin mayne at the lines end just to rhyme with cobane...thats unexceptable...Anyways, that what I felt about ur verse
 
Flash:  Good shit...Easily the second best verse in this battle.  Then again, thats not really saying much...Loved the spartas losing a big battle line...Makes me wanna see 300 again...lol...One thing was that some of ur multis were forced.  Oh yea, and another thing was you kinda helped some of their punches hit harder...When reading their fyis I noticed they both had a 'dress up' punch and I was thinking, Damn, thats mad played...then I read your verse and was like...damn, so their punches actually did hit...But other than that, good verse
 
Overall:  I felt this battle wasn't weak like others are saying but it wasn't the typical tourney final either...Kinda disappointing...I felt thie was sorta a 1 on 1 battle with point being carried by sparta and game being carried by flash...I'm sorta disapointed in the lot of you...
 
My Vote goes to sparta and point...I vote them because their verses were more enjoyable to read...When reading spartas verse, I thought it was over, then I read points and was like, dynasty has a chance now...then read games and was like, damn, he failed to capitalize and then read fatal like this gonna be close but yea, SnP GMV
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Sparta- flow was great, wordplay was good, multis used nicely, key lines where under liquid than you haha, thats funniest line in the whole battle, mousebreaker.com was hot aswell, rest was alrite, no other real KO lines, unlike the other voters, I didnt really like the dumpin GF line, it was good, but not great IMO.

Good solid verse, either hardhitting or decent punches.

Overal- 8/10

 

Point- didnt like the opener, flow was good throughout, fell off in certain places, but generally nice. Multis used nicely. Key lines where = FAG,  boxer shorts, and the oil lines. Verse wasnt amazing, maybe shud have been harder hitting personals and punches, considering its a final. Didnt like the name plays, Ie I cant in U and laf at kon. Really missed for me. bananas in kids packed lunches line missed for me aswell, there was alto of good lines in this verse, but quite a few bad ones aswell, so quite inconsistent Overall, not your best, but im sure u know it.

Overall 6.5/10

 

IKON- verse was alrite, usual flow was great. Opener was alrite, but didnt like the next bar. Next two were great, but the material was there, and with better wording IMO could have hit a lot harder. Multies again used well throughout, maybe abit too much about Sparta being in your crew .. ie I hate to rip on crew etc, should have just used every personal to get upper hand. Next 6 flowed nicely no real KO hits, liked the Kurt cobain line. lol, blowing heat bar was nice, next bar average, and closer was funny. Overall not as good as you wud expect. But ok

Overall- 7/10

 

Fatal- opener was nice, good wordplay to start. Next bar, I think ive seen used b4, so didnt hit as hard for me,  flow was great throughout.  although more multis could have helped. Key lines, big battle, breaking point line haha, that was good, nice wordplay aswell, join a wack crew was sweet. Taking SP out ARAT line, was nice idea, but im not a big fan of name/letter plays. Iconsistence line was nice aswell. Didnt particularly like the closer, could have used something harder to finish it.

8/10

 

wanted to do a reasonably long vote to make it fair. I felt when I first read the verses, that I preferred  Ikons and fatals, and I still feel that way. I think they just combined better. All 4 verses were close.

 

VOTE: ikon and fatal.
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3-2 S&P, thanks for voting everyone
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Perfecto? Cuba? Pfeif? Mackie? Frank?
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Snoopy Dogs?

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SPARTA


You clowns thought we'd get slammed? We're thwartin' your plan before it began
You two couldn't 'own the Siamese' if you were 1940's Japan
nice creative punch, first line stretched but flow was cool.. 4/5
We won't be stoppin' till these chumps are depressed,
Valentine's day's just gone but that won't stop me 'dumpin' GF'
lol funny, nice creative punch again 3/5
Kon, if ya such a great boss, then why your members quittin' ya crew?
Blank jumped to the V...ha, he'd rather be under LiQuid than you!
like this bar, goes right at him.. 3/5
Shav, you can chat about your titles but I gotta doubt 'em a moment,
Cos one was minus vets, the other without an opponent
dope flow on this n nice personal.. 4/5
We got clout you can't cope with, if you think you'll take us, you're wrong...
There's no place for 'Flash, Game' on LA...this ain't mousebreaker.com
weakest bar in ya verse so far, nice idea tho. 2.5/5
An' Fatal, your skill's debatable, so don't pretend you're winning
'Cos last time it only took me 4 lines to send ya spinnin'
cool, not feelin it to much, flow was good 2.5/5
I'll end your grinning, you can't fuck with the best, bruh
His verses are like callgirls (why?) 'Cos they 'suck when they're dressed up'
lol.. funny, nice play n multi, flow was real good.. 4/5
I mean, with his bitching and moaning, no way we can respect his rhymes
Called Shade generic, an' now he's dropping shit wordplays every second line!
lmao..dope, didn kno he called ju generic... dope bar 4/5
I know we're crew but that won't stop me breaking a brother
Fatal's had some hard losses? Ha, we got you and Ikon takin' another!
not really feelin this one too much.. 2.5/5
Fatal copped a lucky rank, but that's no reason to believe that you're hard
An if Kon tries to fuck with he'll get 'sent down', an' I don't just mean by our bars...
play is a lil off IMO... wordin cudda been better, used alot.. nice bar 3/5

33.5

Point

Individually They're Useless,But Together Suprisingly Dope
Coz Ones A Fag : The Others Burning Corpse Providin The Smoke
nic flow, punch ain hard hittin really.. ok clownin.. 2/5
In Ya Crew Except For Sprta, Each Guy Is A Joke
So Ill Be Takin Ya Lifes Like Goods From Inside Of A Boat
multi is nice, and alot ppl aggree wid the first line.. nice, 3/5
Like Crippled Wrestlers, Yall Cant Reach This Tag
An Aint It A Coincidence Fatal And Game Equals F.A.G ?
lol.. ya best punch so far, play is original, 4/5
Fatal Actin Like A Leader Of TD, Yet Hes The Wackest One
But Both Of You Are Clowns...Yet Mostly I Laf At Kon*
dont usually like rearranging letters to much, clever tho... 3/5
Fatal's A Dickrider,So Ya Gettin Dropped Of Course
Coz You More Annoyin On Dynastys Ass Than Tags On Boxer Shorts
on D's ass wudda been alot better, ok bar 2.5/5
Ya Cant Stop The Force, And Its True That You Lack Punches
So You Gettin Left Behind Like Bananas In Kids Packed Lunches!
ok bar again, nicely worded but ain really to hard.. 2.5/5
An Kon Ill Bring Sparta To The Dark Side, An Rip Apart Your Crew
Coz I Can See Hotness In Everyone, But Ikontinue (I-Cant-In-You)
dope, really original play really liked that.. 4/5
An Fatal, Your Rusty ? Trust Me, We Know It Dude
But If You Ask Nicely, Im Sure Kon Will Rub Oil Over You!
nice clowin 3/5
Fatal's Older Than Kon, So I Thought Hed Be A Bit Smarter
I Guess Not Tho,So Dress Ya Verse All Ya Want,It Wont Hit Harder**
nice.. 3/5
Why Im Being So Nice? Well You BOTH Welcomed Me For A Starter
So I Guess Its Only Fair I Send Regards At Your Departure
 lol @ you findin that link.. nice bar, 3/5
 
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IKON

Im clashin bars with a small kid with whippings from his moms still?!
Nah, chill! Ill make him drop sooooner than his balls will!
ok bar. 2.5/5
Askin Whos wack? Yeah, you owned YOURSLEF by doin that
Was that rhetorical? I mean, it's OBVIOUS through clues and facts!
ok again 3/5
Peeps elevate wit practice, but for Blank its not a factor
Cus for him, he BATTLES MORE, and every time has gotten wacker! (Senor's vote)
dope.. 4/5
What an actor in this fuckin game, and like his skill, its such a shame
Tell me whos the bitch and seemed pussy with ya ducking game!*
nice.. 3/5

Yuh,

Plus, ya tamed And Sprta, I aint even want no trouble, mayne
But you FAR from gettin heard, SO FUCK that shit above your name (accent)
liked this.. 4/5
This fucka playing? Tryna bark loud, yet hes muzzled tamed
Aint seen a faggot rocker wanna die this bad since Kurt Cobain**
k 2.5/5
You aint the same Since youve been recruited, havent made a hit
Now only time Ive seen you Shot Fire was with Jadas shit (Submitted by...)
nicely deliverd.. coo punch 3/5

That baby bitch is never blowin heat unless a cake exists
And make a wish for a fresh flow bar when you prey on fish! (hahaaaaahahahaaa)
dope.. 4/5

I hate to rip crew (sprta), but I guess thats just the way it is
Ill just assume you never knew its unlawful when you play with kids! (lmfaoo)
lol.. not hittin too hard.. 3/5
Tag belts, hes sure of thatQuit countin chicks before they hatch
You KNOW youre wack when you gotta resort to using quotes form Mack!*
dont rhyme to well.. il put that down to accent tho.. good closer.. 3.5/5

32.5

also id like to see you try rhymin mack with sumin different from wack.. just once..

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Quickly Flip These Bitches, My Hits Are Presice like Surgical Lasers
Shit, "Fatal Turns The Tables" Quicker Than "Murderous Waiters!"
 pretty dope play, 3.5/5
Make it Rain...
We Hurtin These Fakers, Me n Kon Trainin These Kids
Im Flippin "Sparta N Point(s)" Like Ya "Name in Ya Sig!!"
cool bar, 3/5
Im Breakin Ya Quick, Repeat History, Leavin This Bitch Rattled
In Fact, This Aint The First Time Spartas Lost A Big Battle! *
played concept now with the 300 movie.. im pretty sure this was wrote before those tho so nice punch.. 3.5/5
Blanks A Snake, Switched Sides, Ya Made Me Dissapoint
Not 'Crunk', But Ill Make Ya "Snap Ya Fingers" The Way Im "Breakin Point!"
Haaaaa!!!
flow came out stretched in this.. didn like punch.. 2.5/5
Now Ya Passed Up (Yup) Gassed Up, Why Ya Think We Dropped You?
Wanted To LEAD a Group...So WHY YOU JOIN A WACK CREW?!? (Whaaa?)
dope... 4/5
N Sparta? Ya Wack Too! It's Inevitable That Ya BOTH Lose!
No Coincidence, INCONCISTANCE, Why Ya Think Ya STILL Not Pro Too?
cool not really that hard tho.. 3/5
Its So True...Abuse Venomous' Recruit's Weaponry Now
Its Like "Fatals Erasing Bad Spelling" How "Im Whiping SnP Out!!"
didn like the setup.. punch was... 2/5
Yall Wreckin Me, How? P's Got 30 Wins From Battlin Newbs 
Id Have Twice As Many Wins Too, If I KEPT BATTLIN THE SAME DUDES!
nice.. 3.5/5
We Slayin These Fools, Spartas A RAT....Here's Proof:
We Takin S and P Out...What You Left Wit? The Truth...*
used the same takin s n p out before,  shudda just had this one.. cool bar tho, nice thinkin.. 3/5
Comin In Second: Is YOU, Shame, Ya Wont Win This Time
Cuz Like "Heart Attacks In Races", I "Kill Ya Wit My Finish Line!"   
...Flatline...
lol.. i actually like the flatline part more than the punch, i dunno if thats included in the score.. decent anyway 2.5/5

30.5

Sparta n point 63.5

ikon n fatal 64

IK n Fatal GMV.. just.. sparta came the best here tho



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