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*UnBorn Hype*
Newbie Joined: 12 June 2007 Status: Offline Points: 12 |
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Posted: 12 June 2007 at 2:59am |
Choke and toke till no more cig is left, i got pains in my chest Or is it just my imagination, making it like im the best till i test my memory's state of sedidation I need more medication im too stupid to realize the lies no matter if its in my face, bringing me to cries and demize I'll never take in to pressure, holding me from my dreams The demons in my room on the ceiling, driving me to screams Its really fuckd up as it all seems to be one lie after another I thought we was cool dawg is you my brother, I guess not oh well Im drowning these lyrics in the well, till all is well and fine I see you steppin on low classes stabbin backs to shine Then wehn you be falling behind, you stop rapping and whine Like i had shit to do with you stoppin, my rimes dude they mine, what is it you coppin? Uhh first drop Speak your mind let me know what i need to work on.... Upp.... |
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Outcome
Newbie Joined: 12 June 2007 Location: DuB City, PA Status: Offline Points: 3 |
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yo.. that shit was ill muhfucka hahahaha yo UBH is Outcome.. sup dawgEdited by Outcome - 12 June 2007 at 3:11am |
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*UnBorn Hype*
Newbie Joined: 12 June 2007 Status: Offline Points: 12 |
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Fuckin' chillin on this site yo get your rep up chec the battles and openmics and comment a few people they'll appreciate it
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Sejan
Standard Member Joined: 11 May 2007 Location: SunCity. Status: Offline Points: 103 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-0 Form: LWLWL |
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Nice free..
some vocabs were pretty nice either.. rhymes were aight in my opinion, overall a nice one.. though the flow was off sometime IMO.. but still nice.. Edited by Sejan - 12 June 2007 at 2:04pm |
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Laady #1.
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