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teken8996
Standard Member Joined: 16 February 2007 Location: CA Status: Offline Points: 390 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-7-2 Form: LLNLLN |
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Posted: 30 June 2007 at 2:56pm |
is there any crew who would like to have me...
these are some things i wrote resently... a battle verse against Mr. Blazin:
*last year he wasn’t here
and he had to no rep and I’m sayin he still dosent have any rep **when u drive cattle’s u have hella cows around you .......... ....... ... . This was low priority
cuz it was easy so I took longer Nite!! Wake up I don’t want to kill u when u sleepin Don’t cry now wait till u reach hell then start weepin The only time u lay a person is in textual intercourse I’m done with this kid he aint going to win this battle The only time he has a crowd is when he drives cattle** ............... .......... ...... . This is a verse that i'm improving so i can do an audio... Intro: I’m in this world to be the savior of humanity I’m doing so much it driving me to insanity I don’t remember the days when truth mattered I try to change that but I end up where I started There is so much evil around me I can’t stand it I just hope to resurrect people who might fight it Verse1: Lying awake trying to go to sleep at the night Too tired from day to day struggles and fights Thinking of the struggles and all of the beef How can I escape it when I’m filled with grief 10 days left till I give up and commit suicide Everyday I’m forced to witnessing genocide As I think of all this I drift off into a deep sleep Filled with smoke all I could see was a steep street As I walk along I see people dead on the ground There are some people like Hitler getting crowned I try to close my ears and ignore all their calls I close my eyes because I see blood on the walls I slowly stutter through the path thinking how I feel As I keep walkin I feel a knife on my back heel I throw the knife and I hear a person moan in agony I open and see that person was committing a felony Chorus: Why are innocent people dead and criminals alive I’m going to fix that I will kill everybody but five And I’ll use them to restore all the good back here I will build a world where there is no hatred or fear This is my dream and I will reach it or I’ll die Its either I win or loose there’s no room for a tie ............ ...... . Tell me if u guys think i can be in ur crew. Thank u |
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Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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First Verse Was Nice IMO...Some Good Lines, And Good Use Of Multies. Second Verse Had A Good Topic, But You Need To Work On Your Rhyming. Show Your Worthy Of A Place In Venomous Then Ill Let You In! Ill Speak On MSN Next Time You On
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teken8996
Standard Member Joined: 16 February 2007 Location: CA Status: Offline Points: 390 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-7-2 Form: LLNLLN |
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any other crew wana take me?
Dynasty? Asylum? |
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dalinquent
Superior Member Joined: 04 June 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 4687 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 29-23-1 Form: WLLLWL |
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we will discuss via msn
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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tek, were full at the moment....sorry bruh
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teken8996
Standard Member Joined: 16 February 2007 Location: CA Status: Offline Points: 390 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-7-2 Form: LLNLLN |
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its all good Fatal i got 2 other ppl wantin me..
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