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    Posted: 08 September 2007 at 9:02am

*Micheal Jacksons song..smooth criminal
*UFC's big beef vs Ken Shamrock and Tito Ortiz..it was supposed to
be a epic battle..but Ortiz KO'ed Shamrock in the first round
*In my ama/pros callout..''Fatal'' ice bustin a nut to battle dtk....Hes In Dynasty..
*He didnt check in

Il Take Advantage Of His Weaknesses,Hes Fulla Wack Flaws!
'Smooth' Couldnt 'Be All Over Me',If I Got A Brazilian Wax Job..(Hah)
BLAT BLAT
This Kid Is Falling Behind,NOBODY Thinks This Pricks Mean
I Havent Seen A 'Smooth Criminal',Since M-J Hit The Big Screen!*
I Rip Spleens,Is There A Emcee Your More Clever Than?
NOPE,You've Been Here Three Years!And Still Not A Veteran...(GTFO)
You Stop Reppin Kid! I Continue To Drop Punches I Cant Stop
This Is A Bigger 'First Round Upset' Than Ortiz Vs Shamrock!*
Peeps Thinking You Taking It?I Highly Doubt You Can Handle D
Ya Must Feel Privilaged?Ya Whole Crews Beggin Ta Battle Me! (Icez..)*
Yet What About You?You Aint Reppin Kid Better FORGET IT...
Cuz Your Afraid To Write A Check,Like You Were In Debt Kid! (Cheque)*
You Aint Tough Faggot,We Know This Bluff Cant Hack It
Its Ironic How I Put 2'Smooth',Threw Some Rough Patches!
Ya Faced With Doubt,Your Gonna Loose Just Embrace The Route
Ya Verse Is A Bad Vender,How Smoothie Leaves A Sour Taste In Ya Mouth

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Il Take Advantage Of His Weaknesses,Hes Fulla Wack Flaws!
'Smooth' Couldnt 'Be All Over Me',If I Got A Brazilian Wax Job..(Hah)
 
a brazillian actually leaves are thin strip of hair..

most of the wordplay ain come off hard, your style was much better when you went for punchs not plays.. there were a few filla bars IMO the beggin to battle me, rough patchs - they were weak, flow was real nice thru


But i dont think its PRO personally, tho its nice
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Dress has stepped his game up lately...always seems to have good fllow throughout and his transistional rhymes to aid the flow...i still think he has to improve in a couple areas before gettin close to Pro...has to work on re wording some punches so they come off more hard/aggressive or simply rewording the punch as so not being forced...also wordplay needs to be worked on...Def on of the top AMA here on the site tho...good shit dress..

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started off well... ended just average.... some of your multies are kinda forced... like they just dont match up as well as they should/could

AMA...  but keep workin
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I Don't Think Your Consistent Enough To Become Pro. Like Others Have Said You Started Off Nice An Dropped Off, Which Pro's Dont Do. You Got Pretty Smooth Flow...An Often Come With Good Plays...But Not OVerall Pro Material...Stay At It An Im Sure You Will Get It One Day
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Thanks all..Will keep working
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