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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
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Posted: 08 September 2007 at 9:02am |
*Micheal Jacksons song..smooth criminal Il Take Advantage Of His Weaknesses,Hes Fulla Wack Flaws! |
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The original comeback kid
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Mackie
Standard Member Joined: 20 August 2005 Location: MK Status: Offline Points: 1504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 45-38-4 Form: LLWLNW |
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Il Take Advantage Of His Weaknesses,Hes Fulla Wack Flaws!
'Smooth' Couldnt 'Be All Over Me',If I Got A Brazilian Wax Job..(Hah) a brazillian actually leaves are thin strip of hair..
most of the wordplay ain come off hard, your style was much better when you went for punchs not plays.. there were a few filla bars IMO the beggin to battle me, rough patchs - they were weak, flow was real nice thru But i dont think its PRO personally, tho its nice |
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Fatal
Superior Member ...Wicked Wit Wordplay... Joined: 08 March 2005 Location: Chicago Status: Offline Points: 6441 Crew: The Dynasty Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-4-2 Form: WNNWWW |
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Dress has stepped his game up lately...always seems to have good fllow throughout and his transistional rhymes to aid the flow...i still think he has to improve in a couple areas before gettin close to Pro...has to work on re wording some punches so they come off more hard/aggressive or simply rewording the punch as so not being forced...also wordplay needs to be worked on...Def on of the top AMA here on the site tho...good shit dress.. AMA
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G-Pfeif
Superior Member Joined: 19 June 2004 Location: Maryland Status: Offline Points: 2541 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-0 Form: WWWLLW |
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started off well... ended just average.... some of your multies are kinda forced... like they just dont match up as well as they should/could
AMA... but keep workin |
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"I'll put a Loss to ya name like a Mexican City" "Ill Put an L to ya EGO like them building blocks" |
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Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
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I Don't Think Your Consistent Enough To Become Pro. Like Others Have Said You Started Off Nice An Dropped Off, Which Pro's Dont Do. You Got Pretty Smooth Flow...An Often Come With Good Plays...But Not OVerall Pro Material...Stay At It An Im Sure You Will Get It One Day
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
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Thanks all..Will keep working
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The original comeback kid
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