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Mr E 
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 Posted: 30 September 2008 at 10:28pm |
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LOL i noticed that too
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King Jehu
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Posted: 01 October 2008 at 8:12pm |
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LA's full of losers, I was born to succeed
Came from people under evil but they sworn to be freed Fought against groups that were formed to mislead Many of them died if not were mourning their seed Ran till ligaments and tendons were torn from the speed And threw molotov cocktails, scorn for who leads Until we exiled the leaders, reformed from their greed This future's possible, hope you're informed as you read... Next multi for you: Writing With Purpose Edited by King Jehu - 01 October 2008 at 8:18pm |
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that guy
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Posted: 01 October 2008 at 10:31pm |
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for a while i been writing with purpose and guiding the searchless but theyre biting like serpents so im tightening the service when im citing my verses so it seems like i slide on the surface still fighting the urges to make biters hide in a furnace
and theyll still die and be worthless but im good so im flying where birds is next word: economys worst |
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direct1
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Posted: 02 October 2008 at 8:54am |
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to some im economys worst coz im out learnin
for 3 years returnin to keep da fire burnin i pay back da cash ya say i get for free so kiss ma ass if ya gettin vexed at me i study to make money and do da shit i love i find it funyy how ya hate me movin up seems dat u'd prefer me b a dealer or a thug but only fing im dealin wid bein treated like a mug to me da worst are the people pointin fingers appernetly all we do is sit around while weed smoke lingers i am a student, an yeah i like to dabble but i play hands im dealt well, like a game of scrabble was a bit shit but was a quik key while i was in uni....... next word/s = physcological warfare |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 10:05am |
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It was especially shit because you didn't follow the topic at all... it's not a cypher where you just start off with the phrase... The phrase is what you've got to rhyme with throughout your verse... Which, might I add, makes my job basically impossible with 'psychological warfare' so I'm gonna take your last phrase in your verse... It's like a game of scrabble, while I watch all the lamest babble I'm the best ever...
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 12:03pm |
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I'm really a sick fuck, but I detest leather
fallin' for the same sex.? never 'cos I'm simply the best ever Rain down on you an' watch you try to reject weather You thought you were quite hot, but you know Neps better I'm the best text repper, a literal Tec shredda' So I'll only Cap'a ya ass if its the next alphabet letter an' my words flatten ya skulls, so ya no longer egg headers now stop pissin' ya sheets up, you poncy bed wetters.... Washing Machine |
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 I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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Matt The Ripper
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 12:32pm |
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Check it..
It's ya boy.. Always fresh like new clothes comin' straight out the washing machine Y'all know i'm just doin' me, but no one's here to be watching this dream Yo, you talkin' to me? I'm mocking Clint, see? I'm not often this clean I'm walkin' dizzy while I rock a mickey, thanks for hangin' out n' talkin' wit' me First there was rhymes, then poetry, then beats n' then someone brought in history I broaden mysteries, they say God's a gift to me? Intellectual Violence Edited by Matt The Ripper - 03 October 2008 at 1:00pm |
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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direct1
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 1:32pm |
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it does stay on topic you dumb fuck, because im talkin bout the topic. because economy can be used to explane a specific type sof system ie education. and because people slag of students for wasting tax payers money wich is is also part of the economy it does make sense when i say people basically think of me as the economys worst because im spending your taxes. and jus because your too fuckin stupid to use psychological warfare doesnt mean its impossible jus means you need to think about it more. coz take a look at your rhymes what the fuck are you talkin bout you start of about scrabble and then end up just rhyming any thing with it to get to your conclusion. Edited by direct1 - 03 October 2008 at 1:34pm |
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direct1
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 2:08pm |
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my violence is intelectual like chess the game of kings
ill be makin pawn in your castle wen i rape your queen
knight comes you kiss her were my dicks been between
coz im sickening like evicting the contents of your splien
violence is creative like usin iceicles to bring your death
lungs are like tyres on bysicles punctured they lose thier breath
i dont need to use a 9 or blade i just rhyme all day
coz ill cut u deeper wen i write ma lines on page
im at the end so ill right bout pshycolgical war
it means finding something someone will fall for
your opponent does what you want but he thinks hes not
so he's your puppet on the string but he thinks their cut
you mess wth his consience and introduce paranioa
twist things in his mind like a prosecuting lawyer
one day hell crack and self destruct
and without 1 touch you made himself get mental fucked
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NepentheZ
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 2:14pm |
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You don't get it. The phrase given isn't the topic you need to write about. Its the phrase you need to build your rhyme schemes off. You've got "Intellectual Violence" but start rapping "game of king" - it doesn't rhyme with the phrase. And even further more, you've got to carry out the same rhyme scheme throughout your verse, but you don't even do that. 2 bars with the King / Queen / Between / Spleen - then you move onto Death / Breath. Its just a catalog of errors. The initial phrase in this case "Intellectual Violence" should be like so... I'm the darkest don't battle me, but I'm bettin' you tryin' it but I'm clever wit' punches so they call me intellectual violence I'm wreckin' your sinuses, the best on the site is this an' you must be half asleep to keep reppin' ya tired scripts See how its all the same rhyme scheme, using the phrase given. Wow. |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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BiggStankDogg
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 2:27pm |
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"Phrase given" The brain's livid with madness, I spit and the pain's risen amidoingitrite? No really, that's the next phrase: "Am I doing it right" |
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J.Martins
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 3:15pm |
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i question my self if im doing it right
the view is tight, but your screwed in this fight
worst comes to worst your loosing your life
and the first curse comes causing you blight
making sure you feel the knife in the depth of the night
im a sadist at site, enjoying while im viewing this sight!
" food for thought " |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 4:11pm |
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...Did he just call me a dumb fuck?
OK, first of all, who are you? And DON'T ANSWER, because I don't care. As has already been explained, you completely missed the point of the cypher. And as for questioning my skills to be able to rap to a topic... I'm former topical champ and undefeated in that field, I retired the belt... So stay in your corner if you're too fuckin' stupid to follow simple instructions in a cypher and, as if that wasn't bad enough, too pigheaded to actually pay attention to that fact when it's pointed out to you in plain and simple English (should I speak Welsh for you motherfucker? Lllewenyarrafaggotmkay)... The worst thing of all is that you continued to talk endless streams of shit sticking up for a non-existent cause like the fucking tool you are...
You're not allowed to speak anymore.
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 5:43pm |
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Look at the ignorance that dudes have brought
Making Orion try to force feed you food for though You've been caught being a dick, see what rudeness brought? Don't start with legends or you'll be leaving this feud distraught In a bad mood a lot? Don't be shrewd for naught Take some pills, PMS should conclude (or not) You weren't here when Renegades would bruise you tots Take the talented, ignore and exclude the not Taking over violently, we've renewed the plot Eating e-rappers with crackers, you're stewed in pots People talk shit, when beef ensues, we fought Make you run harder than trying to elude the cops That's why you all pursue this spot We're Viewed as hot, you're booed a lot, haters lose their shot Multi king, trying to match me? You should stop Got the balls to face me? They're overdue to drop Cheah! Next: Spittin a lot |
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direct1
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:16pm |
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...Did he just call me a dumb fuck?
OK, first of all, who are you? And DON'T ANSWER, because I don't care. As has already been explained, you completely missed the point of the cypher. And as for questioning my skills to be able to rap to a topic... I'm former topical champ and undefeated in that field, I retired the belt... So stay in your corner if you're too fuckin' stupid to follow simple instructions in a cypher and, as if that wasn't bad enough, too pigheaded to actually pay attention to that fact when it's pointed out to you in plain and simple English (should I speak Welsh for you motherfucker? Lllewenyarrafaggotmkay)... The worst thing of all is that you continued to talk endless streams of shit sticking up for a non-existent cause like the fucking tool you are...
You're not allowed to speak anymore. [/QUOTE]
not allowed to talk n e more? oh no! shit, i best do as u say! man shut the fuck up, and as for the welsh comment i aint welsh so........!!
this is what the first post sais about the topic -
I Noticed Yall Dont Have One Of These
Basically I Say A Set Of Words, & You Multi Do A Couple Bars Multi'ing It. so thats what i did, but i also stayed on the topic. i respect what your sayin nepenthez but graphic never stated thats the template you have to follow, so i didnt. so as for orions comment on following simple rules your the 1 thats (quote) "continued to talk endless streams of shit sticking up for a non-existent cause like the fucking tool you are..."
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mcwoods
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:17pm |
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someone gonna have done this after i've finish but ah well..
im known for spittin' a lot n' spittin' in spots
where writtens'd flop, if they aint ripped from the top
you'd get zipped when you stop kicked till you drop, cause you aitn seein' me like ya vision is blocked envisioned the block havin risen through shots sins forgiven n' a place for joy.. where misery stops but im from a town where the killin's wont drop not as long as theres villain's who'll pop, a sinister lot slittin' for gwop, leave average folks livid n' shocked but thats where we from so we live it... or not... blast n' seek Edited by mcwoods - 03 October 2008 at 6:17pm |
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-Orion-
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:23pm |
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That's just gay... Who blasts then seeks? Seek and blast...yes...blast and seek is just idiot talk, it doesn't make any sense... Oh and Direct child, you're still wrong I'm afraid... you didn't do a couple of bars rhyming the phrase... just accept it, it's not the end of the world. Just 'cuz I clowned you for it you don't have to get all emotional
Oh and didn't I tell you not to talk?
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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mcwoods
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:24pm |
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For fuck sake...
"diamond in the rough"....
no one do it till it passes orions spot check tho... |
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:37pm |
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...Did he just call me a dumb fuck?
OK, first of all, who are you? And DON'T ANSWER, because I don't care. As has already been explained, you completely missed the point of the cypher. And as for questioning my skills to be able to rap to a topic... I'm former topical champ and undefeated in that field, I retired the belt... So stay in your corner if you're too fuckin' stupid to follow simple instructions in a cypher and, as if that wasn't bad enough, too pigheaded to actually pay attention to that fact when it's pointed out to you in plain and simple English (should I speak Welsh for you motherfucker? Lllewenyarrafaggotmkay)... The worst thing of all is that you continued to talk endless streams of shit sticking up for a non-existent cause like the fucking tool you are...
You're not allowed to speak anymore. [/QUOTE]
not allowed to talk n e more? oh no! shit, i best do as u say! man shut the fuck up, and as for the welsh comment i aint welsh so........!!
this is what the first post sais about the topic -
I Noticed Yall Dont Have One Of These
Basically I Say A Set Of Words, & You Multi Do A Couple Bars Multi'ing It. so thats what i did, but i also stayed on the topic. i respect what your sayin nepenthez but graphic never stated thats the template you have to follow, so i didnt. so as for orions comment on following simple rules your the 1 thats (quote) "continued to talk endless streams of shit sticking up for a non-existent cause like the fucking tool you are..."
I refuse to sit here and debate this with you, pretty much because I'm right, but also because you're too far in to admit you're wrong, and so will fight every last point, and I cba with that. |
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I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying... |
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direct1
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Posted: 03 October 2008 at 6:44pm |
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for past weeks ive had to blast n seek
smash da creeps wid bad raps dey speak
ive had defeats but bounced back wid heat
you attack ma streets and dey burn ya feet
from ma past i grasp demons dat concernin me
they like ma shadows in the sun they turn on me
next phrase - pencil pusher
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