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    Posted: 11 October 2008 at 1:23pm
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Edited by Bolo - 11 October 2008 at 8:33pm
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Form: NWLNNN 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 1:27pm
smooth no-showed Thumbs%20Down

here's DTK's verse:

If you dont understand ask me or dont vote..thanks
 
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*Point no showed vs him..and hes way above swift styles in text
*Orion is also know as "O"..rest is self explanitory I beleive?
*He claimed that he made more money than anyone on the site..then Orion came in and hoe'd him by making more cash
*Works for an electric company
*He lives in California..California will be submerged due to climate change soon
*Smooth gave Kay B his opener to Ikon's verse
 
Kid You're A Weak Fuck!Battling Me?Ya Gonna Need Leverage
We All Know You're A Fruit Smoothie..And I Dont Mean A Beverage!
Sure You Made It To The Semi's..But I Wouldnt Flaunt You're Position
Cuz I Earned This Spot!You Just Lacked Some Actual Competition!*
Your Talent Is Minimal..Fuck It Il Even Prove It To This Queer Hoe
Cuz You're Biggest Accomplishment Was Beating Up A Zero!* ( O )
He's Getting Dicked In This Match Up..Like A Damn Porno With Men
An The Only Time He's Given A Personal Blow Was Given Oral To Friends!
Kid You're Under Pressure..Man Ya Knees Got To Buckle!
Ya Couldnt Look Superior Lyrically..And We Even Knocked Ya Hustle!*
*This Kids Got No Swagger,Fuck It Aint Hard To See This Knob Is Slippin
The Only Time Hes Putting Energy Into Lines..Is In His Job Description!*
Hes An Emotional Dude..I Got Him Creatin Lines In Rage
So Il Put This Cali Kid Under..And I Dont Even Need Climate Change!*
You Cant Tackle The Best..This Battle Aint Even Fair Bitch!
Ya Contribution To Ya Creq Is Wack!..You Stay Writin Their Shit!*
Im Sharp As A Razor..Just Watch Me Leave This Kid Headless
Ironically Smooth's Text Game Is Rough Around The Edges!
So Forgive Me Son, I Dont Mean To Make You Look Foolish
But I Dont Need To Be A Lawyer To Make Smooth's Ass Look STUPID
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this thread is left open for the time being for feed and comments
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Form: LW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 1:48pm
nice verse.. i didnt feel like sum punches were on point... but fersure sum were, lik the beat up a O line.. was nice, N yer flow was on threw out the whole verse.. props...
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Form: WLWLWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 1:51pm
Good personals and nameplay... apart from the poor closing line...

Congratulations on qualifying for the final against Woods...

Adios...Star
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Form: NWWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 1:56pm
LOL this is jokes.. all the best pro's are out.. and now we left with avg pro's 
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Form: WNNWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 2:07pm
Lol Rameez...

This verse looks rushed D...looks like you got lucky that smoothy pulled out...the opener was ya best bar by faaaar. but even that punch ive seen on him more than twice. If you wanna take the final, your gonna have to work ya ideas better and not use "stretches" for punches...Like i see like 3 punches that are jus stretches, like u couldnt think of anything to use on him. But yea good luck in the finals dude
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 7:13pm
Yes this was rushed to fuck..there will be a better verse vs woods trust me..
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 October 2008 at 7:19pm
Originally posted by Rameez Rameez wrote:

LOL this is jokes.. all the best pro's are out.. and now we left with avg pro's 
 
You are a joke..the end
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 8:40am
Zero? Be serious...

And to be honest, the only way you were ever gonna make the final was via no-show, as this would not have won if he had shown up
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Can't even believe he beat me in R1. This should be my final. Politics, ffs. DTK hoed up in R1 but got extended time. Boy is lucky I have a heart.






I'm so fucking intelligent, half the time I don't even know what I'm saying...
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Form: NWWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 9:24am
^^yer definitely jealous of him, its ok! try hard next time :)
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 10:21am
A classic . . .
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:04pm
Look at you kids? A zero looks like an O..it wasnt meant to mean that you have no talent you idiot..and Nep you got kocked out..stop acting like a bitch..kk thanks
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Form: NWWWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:17pm
lol @ the finger, take it and spin yer ass on it.. O looks like zero.. lol jokes. hahaha OWNED!
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 3:39pm
No really though..that was the play I thought it was fucking obvious..
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Form: WWWWNW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 4:57pm
It's obvious in the exact opposite way in which you meant it...it's as much a diss to me as it is to him, if not more so...and don't call me an idiot...
. . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
They just said that FUCKIN' with me
They didn't mean it
Nah . . .
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Form: WNNWWW 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 5:54pm
Lmao @ Rameez thinking he's one of the big boys...

And that middle finger post was dope haha
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Form: LLWWWL 		Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 October 2008 at 8:41pm
Originally posted by -Orion- -Orion- wrote:

It's obvious in the exact opposite way in which you meant it...it's as much a diss to me as it is to him, if not more so...and don't call me an idiot...
 
But its not a diss to you..thats what you're not getting..I basically played on your name..people call you "O"..zero aka "0" look exactly the same..basically he beat O aka you..OR!? He beat a zero! :O..I know very complicated
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