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    Posted: 02 May 2009 at 6:01pm
First team to 3 votes.
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Due 8th May 2009 11:59pm (GMT+DST)
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* This is Blind Drops, each participant much send their OWN verse to me by either Private Message or Email (which is in my profile).
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 10:21am
Calibra:

Should be easy enough to get...
 
 
The only way is up for Rap & S cause these nerds are pathetic
But on the bright side ya can't do any worse than expected
First for the exit, to catch me bluffin' is rare
Dealt a great hand, im Straight Flushin' this Pair
Punchin' like Tyson, don't let the fatal blows kill ya
We taking home the Gold, Rap's taking home Silber
Rap's "more than words" but numbers damage his spirit
Imagine if he just relied on his battlin' digits
Tagging in teams, destiny no brighter than before
Sil's into Grafitti so he knows the writings on the wall
And ya structure is weak, right down to ya raps
A team built up on failure is bound to collapse!
 
....Next!


Cuba:

When it comes to rap, I got the heat to fade son

This is Double Impact...they won't even make one

Needless pain spun, they're battered and beat fast

Call me Bill O'Reilly coz I'm savaging weak rap

Damaged and relapsed with meticulous range

While they got lines weaker than their ridiculous names

Over before it started...like death in infancy

So any votes these kids get will sent with sympathy

Bring style so old and frail they used to failure

So I take pity and kill SnR like Euthanasia

See these pussies scared, put panic in bunches

They been diss-illusioned coz I'm magic with punches




Rapdisup:

calibra a fuckin nobody, i'll bend this bitch who is well past his prime
a new era?i cant belive ya ment tryna make 'queers' form a 'straight' line!
I'll smack this fag with punches like Pacqiuo, leave yu Lying on the ropes
Clean u outta this Tourny like tha toon army Anti-relegation title hopes!
a tag tourney battle,these newbs killing these has beens
cuba happy wen calib tagged,cos his rymmes more confused than drag queens!
cuba 'dying' for a 'fag',an i guess calib came along
calib dying to get to tha cemetary,so ima 'smoke' Cuba like he battling Kon'(ikontinue)
how can these old timers,call there self a fuckin new era
cuba got on his own list of hardest battlers,but be real..who fuckin fears ya!?
fuck it ill boost ya ego an call ya tha damager,if thats wat makes ya happy
yet yu were tha only guy on tha site wen i was pending,that didnt attack me?...pussys(damage sum1 witout dissing them :S)

Silber:

There's no way Cuba can ever fuck with me and my raps
Cuba & Calibra winning? impossible like shooting snake eyes in a game of craps
My atrocious lyrics leave you needing more, so get ready for a relapse
after battling me,Calib quits I leave Superman permanetely grounded
Me and my lyrics are so blasphemous, even i leave Cuba dumbfounded
But wait, if im just hollaring at scholar, why is it so easy
Cuba' terrible flow and lack of skill dont leave me queasy
They call you the Damager, funny thing, I walk away unscathed
You run and hide, i find you my lyrics cut you like a double-edged blade
Can you feel me? fuck if you can feel me or not, I dont wait for Cuba to drop
Im partly through my verse, but still he begging me to stop, i ripped it
So when you find Cuba's mutilated body at the show, you know who did it
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 11:05am
Calibra:

I liked this:

"The only way is up for Rap & S cause these nerds are pathetic
But on the bright side ya can't do any worse than expected
First for the exit, to catch me bluffin' is rare
Dealt a great hand, im Straight Flushin' this Pair
Punchin' like Tyson, don't let the fatal blows kill ya
We taking home the Gold, Rap's taking home Silber" (< up until this point)

But "spirit" and "digit's" don't really blend too well, no matter how you pronounce it.
Same with "Brighter than before," and "writing's on the wall."

Just kinda fell off flow-wise for me at that point, and then came back with the closer, which was well played. Nice verse.


Cuba:

"When it comes to rap, I got the heat to fade son

This is Double Impact...they won't even make one"

Sick.

"Damaged and relapsed with meticulous range

While they got lines weaker than their ridiculous names"

Also very nice.


Liked the closer. Nice verse.



Rapdisup:


Callin' yourselves newbs isn't smart (even if it's true)!

Your punches jus' weren't workin', basically I found a lot of it to be flat-out false statements, which looked wack and desperate. 

I.e. the "who fuckin' fears ya?!" line, lots of people had Cuba on their lists. No one had you on their list. It's as simple as that.

Your closer was wack. Nice try. Stay up.



Silber:


"My atrocious lyrics?" Seriously... your atrocious lyrics? Smh. My advice is, look up the definition of "atrocious" in the dictionary.

What was with going 3 lines with one rhyme, then switching it up on your fourth and going into your fifth? That was pretty fucked up.

And I know it's a battle, but saying Cuba has a terrible flow and a lack of skill? Compared to you? Come on, man, who do you expect to believe that? 

Wack verse. No heat. Nice try. Stay up.

Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 12:50pm
is that a vote? ^^

cuba and cal - same problems and same good stuff, nice flows, nice multis, some punches where funny - euthanasia and double impact, opener for cal, some where just okay, some where played.. infancy and writing on the wall.. overall too solid verses, nothing spectacular tho, you's will have to work on better punches to advance against better opponents.

rap and silber - okay verses, good attempts to diss, but very simplistic, simple plays which could be used on anyone - fag/ smoked - may seem good, but have been used countless times before, same with drag queens, and there is no room in battles for big ups, i.e. it was me who done it, no one fears ya, didnt attack me, etc, again these can seem alright but are all lines away from attacking your opponents, good aggrssion but pretty misguided.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 12:57pm
Oh, shit, lmao

I suppose that is a vote.

Vote = Ca n' Cu
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 12:58pm
I wouldn't put it up if it didn't rhyme Matt. Who was your vote for?
 
Cheer Woods.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 12:59pm
Ca n' Cu = Calibra n' Cuba
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 1:05pm
Cheers Matt
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 1:45pm
thanks for takin time Woods an seemed a fair vote so its respected
 
matt remind me who put you on their lists? oh an how is your verse cumin along?.........
 
uppin this well dun on votes Cuba an Cal' Clap
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 6:48pm
dammit, I dropped the ball Rap.
mY bad homie
NIGGAS TALKIN BOUT ALAH THIS AND ALLAH THAT, IF ALLAH LOVES YALL WHY THE FUCK YOU LIVE IN A SANDBOX, AND GOTTA DRINK MUD, AND EAT GOATSHIT FOR DINNER B? LOOKS LIKE ALLAH LOVES ME CUS IM EATIN STEAK
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 7:09pm

no way man ya piece was cool we were jus up against 2nd favorite to win this shit so fuk it we came to tha table,at least we took our time to try an its all progression so i aint mad wit this tbh keep up Silb'

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 09 May 2009 at 9:31pm
Originally posted by rapdisup rapdisup wrote:

matt remind me who put you on their lists? oh an how is your verse cumin along?.........

What does that have to do with my vote, you fuckin' idiot?

They beat you, quite clearly, just like they said they would. Props for doin' you and givin' it a shot, though, for sure, but all that cockiness before the verses dropped was unneccessary.
Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 12:57am
The verses hit in the exact order of the place the were posted, Cali's being the best to me...

Cuba and Cal came into this knowing they were highly favored, and it showed in the verse in good ways and bad ways... I like how you two looked down on 'em, but that concept got repititive in some parts. All ya'll punches still hit... Like woods said, ya'll would have to step it up against better opponents imo... Flow in ya'll two verses were just better and more direct than the other two opponents...

Rap's verse showed potential. Lines were too long which messed up flow, but I saw some ideas that could be developed. Definitely not a wack verse... Not great eaither though. Silber... I havent read much of Silber's stuff, but the verse seemed rushed... Either that or you ran out of ideas as your verse went on... Needed to be more much more direct to compete...

Overall, Cuba and Cali jsut showed more experience and skill in overall battling... They won.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 4:13am
@ i-kon
it was both, i wrote it the morning of the due date, and as Rapdisup knows, some crazy shit been happenin with these MK's, and MLD pussies over here.
NIGGAS TALKIN BOUT ALAH THIS AND ALLAH THAT, IF ALLAH LOVES YALL WHY THE FUCK YOU LIVE IN A SANDBOX, AND GOTTA DRINK MUD, AND EAT GOATSHIT FOR DINNER B? LOOKS LIKE ALLAH LOVES ME CUS IM EATIN STEAK
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 5:05am
Aight. I understand... Things come up. Gotta handle your offline business. Props for at least showed up...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 10:02am
at ripper- this is a a battle site i aint gunna suck tha dudes off before battling,sumtimes if ya can get in ya opponents head ya can win a fight b4 it starts i used to box so i know this is true,ne wayz no beef ya vote is cool jus felt it was abit on tha harsh side seein as at least i dropped....
 
at Ikon' up most respect for how ya voted,i 100% agree wit everything you voted for so cheers,
 
Silber man its cool an seein as ya had alot on ya mind coza real life issues,an ya had like a few hours to write,ya did well we knew these guys were potentialy gunna win,but wat the hell we came wit a fight so im happy wit this....Gud luck in tha next round Cuba an Calib' well done!
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 2:09pm
^ lol...the funny thing is, we had already written our verses before you said anything...so ya, your mind games were pointless!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 2:16pm
"Mind games" lol I thought it was funny, thanks to all voters. Props to Rap & S for showing. We will be stepping up next round no doubt about it!
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 10 May 2009 at 7:22pm
Originally posted by Silber Silber wrote:

@ i-kon
it was both, i wrote it the morning of the due date, and as Rapdisup knows, some crazy shit been happenin with these MK's, and MLD pussies over here.
 
Im prob the only one who knows what your talking about lol... You must be from the North Side, if your beefin wit those gangs...
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