Open Mic: One big laugh..

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    Posted: 27 July 2009 at 9:18am

just tryin to write and hava good time on this shit.
stop takin me so serious



chea..

Im just tryin to have fun, LA actin like my disses are the worlds end..
Jus tryin to let my emotions go like a distant girlfriend
In this persistent whirlwind of distinct verbs that explore thee
Split Emotions within lifes pages something like a ripped story
But all ya’lls disses bore me, so I guess its irrelevant
That these verses mean nothing, fuckin use your intelligence
Quick to dispurse .. Hit till it hurts as im dissen on nerds..
I’m just tryna smoke a blunt and hit up La, start rippen a verse
Hold tha raquet in this bitch .. All the rest are jus served..
Do what I want on the net somethin like roger federer
Write the best on the Bord .. Best be fearin me with chalk..
Spits like spices, while ya’ll like the site .. Lyrical-As-Salt..
Trippin on these bums? .. Nah im rippen up this scum
LAs a rap Community? So I gueess we living in the Slums..

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Originally posted by JoeyNice JoeyNice wrote:

just tryin to write and hava good time on this shit.
stop takin me so serious

Why so serious?

On the real, this was pretty nice. Wasn't feelin' the beginning so much, but it got better as it went.

"Hold tha raquet in this bitch .. All the rest are jus served.."

"Spits like spices, while ya’ll like the site .. Lyrical-As-Salt.."

"Trippin on these bums? .. Nah im rippen up this scum
LAs a rap Community? So I gueess we living in the Slums.."

Nice.

Stay up, yo

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yeah.. just a little something i wrote bored idunno.. thanks for peepin
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