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-Orion-
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Posted: 01 January 2010 at 4:03am |
read Carefully . . . learn Suttin'
Now I don't Mean to be Blasphemous bro But you Better learn to Start Spellin' gOd with A Capital O 'cuz Yo, ya Expectations are deluded, all these New kids Tryin' criticisin' On for Size Just 'cuz they Stupid So finally, to set it Straight and Illustrate the Irony Opinions are like Verses: mine's On Point, yours just Tries To be 'cuz What you've Preconceived as Classic is some Wack Shyt And i Ain't hear to Tick No boxes for no Faggots You want the best rhyme scheme, best story or best clever pun But a Verse is A verse, So really You just Gotta Let it run For What it Iz, the Stuff i Spit Is like Everything You've ever Done, just On Another level, Son If anyone Could Rip it better I'd have Suttin' to Prove But now my Messages ain't understood By Fuckers like you it's Seamless Genius, that you Think's lackin' Or Iffy but I Won't Dumb it down Or Dress it up, it ain't paris Or nikki Just take Dead Prez, they Ain't drop 'Hip Hop' every day not 'Cuz they Fell Off, but 'Cuz they had Other Shit To say And with Me, you'll Always get More than Just 'something Tight' I stand behind That, like it's Tahiry in Somethin' tight so Get somethin' Right, and Call it like you got To call It Every Drop might Not be the Illest but It's still Likely Flawless you Ain't seen it Done Better, can Look but you Won't find So Don't sass me Boy, Or i'll Smack you Back Into 09 |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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King Jehu
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lmao, awesome. I love the scheme and the, well, the everything.
And yes, Tahiry is on some whole 'nother other shit with that ass.
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Insert something rappy here
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Cuba
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lol @ the capitalising...the Paris or Nikki line was slick, good shit
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CHAIN
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hOLy CoW! sO lemme get tHis straighT, u'r using Your infinite inTergallactic Skill to diss Sass becausE he felt u didn't live up to Your legendary Status?
damn you J Sass, u infidel!
...Gee Willikers! they might Edit my Post for me being sooooo Stupid TypING IN ALL CAPS!
Orion, thank u for showing us how super funky dope you are, some of those lines were truly out of this world! it wasn't really that complex but GOOD LORD
if u disagree u will get dissed!
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Calibra
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Lol @ the way this was typed, love that.
Tahiry line was my favourite, props.
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rapdisup
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ok yu win haha tis was better like tha "yours jus trys to be" at the start nice,an tha dressin u or down"paris line damnn keep droppin
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The Dr said it can't be beaten,I replied it 'can-sir'!
It aint over till I Rapdisup |
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-Orion-
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For the record, I have nothing against J Sass at all and I think it was
ridiculous how he was attacked for his caps thing (which I do find
weird...but it doesn't actually bother me) and his incorrect
spelling...none of that shit really matters... I just figured it would
be funny to do the verse that way . . .
And the point he made about expecting a 'classic' wasn't something I took as a diss or hate, but it is something that annoys the hell out of me, for reasons I think I explained well enough in the verse So it's not really a diss to you personally, Sassy J... it's to everyone that's ever said similar shit... you just happened to inspire me to write something at the end of a very long NYE, at 4am on NYD... much like what I wrote the other day (that started this whole thing) wasn't really dissing Woods or trying to show up the poor little peckerhead...or even trying to pen the best ever multis piece or anything...he just gave me an idea, I went with it, the end If someone does what I do better than me, then maybe I'll be suitably inspired to write another classic (if I have the time)...this goes for the battle field and for this place... till then, you're gonna have to make do with these pieces, even if they're not full enough of 12-syllable rhymes over 12 lines, formula-following 'punchlines' on completely untouched and obscure topics or epic stories with 22 twists... I already did all that shit, as well as or better than pretty much everyone [EDIT: in the opinions of those most widely considered, accepted and regarded as 'experts' around this place, of course -- wouldn't want anyone to think I was fabricating my own props now . . . would I?]... I'm not gonna do it again for anybody's benefit, let it go These joints, while often more subtle or appearing more obvious, say a lot more even than some of my shit that was considered 'classic' back then for ticking certain boxes of what textcees have been indoctrinated to think 'makes' a good verse . . . but there you have it Edited by -Orion- - 01 January 2010 at 1:48pm |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Sick-Witted
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lol @ Chain's comments....anywho this piece was enjoyable..it'll be interesting to see what responsives this will generate
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Sick-Witted->means
I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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Matt The Ripper
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just that.... it was enjoyable... and it would be nice to see him drop more... thanks for droppin, though... |
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Kay B
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It was iight
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I-kontinue
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Yeah, this wasn't really a diss cause you would've gotten more personal. I am sure of this. Good statement piece though... Alotta people can't flow like that and make sense... Easy.
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DressToKill
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Paris/Nicki line was dope..
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The original comeback kid
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-Orion-
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A non-Renegade understood it . . . What does this all mean? Speculate motherfuckers |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Stalin
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lol... flow was good, some real nice lines in there.. my fav gotta be the first 2 bars.. hot shit. Post more you fuck
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Big O does it again, props on the Sass Diss... and this piece lives up to everything i've read from you before i even joined here... DOPE!
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