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    Posted: 13 August 2012 at 7:57am
No point in waiting, your rap prob be worse than a practical joke
Ima burn you so bad you disappear like Harry in that invisibility cloak
Don’t even try burning me bitch, I aint even flammable
I am going at you as if I was an animal, Im a cannibal
I gather this shit together as if I was a librarian
I walked in to this. You decided to be a carry in.
You had to use the help of others on your way here
N even with them you have to fight away fear
why did you even try to make it to the top?
The bottom is where you belong, so just take the drop
I aint startin beef, just showin you who is the chief.
You tryna be thief and steal yourself some relief.
Aint gonna happen so just take a step down
Dude seriously, just stop clownin around.
Ight this is my last line for the night
So Words of advice, Stay the fuck outta my sight.


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You just got here, the fuck u venting for?

And you’re lying.  u didn’t keystyle this, that’s just a cop out
U thought about this, u wrote it down, u looked at it…twice, u  edited some things and then u posted it

U aint gotta lie to kick it, Craig

I’m just tired of seeing the ‘it’s a key style’ excuse, I’m sorry it had to be you, .but this goes for everybody saying that shit

U don’t tell a girl before u beat  “hey, I’m tired, I’ve been working all day, so I might not..u know” ..that’s what saying it’s just a keystyle means to me…just go in, if u scared and u think ppl might feel its wack, then just say u scared. We won’t think less of you 

I’m venting, I key styled this whole rant btw…

Originally posted by DWall97 DWall97 wrote:

No point in waiting, your rap prob be worse than a practical joke
Ima burn you so bad you disappear like Harry in that invisibility cloak
Don’t even try burning me bitch, I aint even flammable
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Lmao its venting ish and all i do is keystyles. It aint an excuse. But thanks for the feed
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Lol @ CHAIN

I've thought this about a lotta stuff. N it's so true lol

"Sorry it had to be you" - hahaha!! I'm laughin cuz I know you meant it. Wrong place wrong time kinda shit.


Ok DWall - this weren't half bad. Just be honest about your work bro - cuz its not like ure shit at writing.
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Originally posted by DWall97 DWall97 wrote:

Lmao its venting ish and all i do is keystyles. It aint an excuse. But thanks for the feed


You're a liar and a faggot.


That was all Keystyle btw.
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Lmao whatever you all think. I dont have the time to sit there n write n rewrite lyrics. I wrote as i thought. I aint lyin n jay shut the hell up. That was keystyled too.
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You're like 15, all your day can possibly consist of is masturbation and deep self-loathing at the inability to get a girl to touch you in your happy place.
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I may be 15 but i still can get more pussy than you.
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Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

And the award for most ridiculous comment goes to that guy

Come on son I mean, you have a 97 in your name so I assume that's your birth year. You've been 15 at most for 8 months then, how you gonna try and front like you've even seen a pussy in person (no, your own mirror reflection does not count).


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lmao age dont mean shit.
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Yes it does, don't kid yourself.

I highly doubt there's a string of 14/15 year old girls around you just aching to get their bones jumped.

I'll accept that people at that age have sex, but to act like you got pussy on tap is just hilarious and then some.
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Lmao im not gonna argue with you anymore. I may be fifteen but im one of the most mature ones you will ever meet.
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You're really not helping yourself with comments like that.

I'M REALLY MATURE FOR MY AGE it's like the desperation go to line when everything is falling apart with a girl.
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I dont know where you came up with that shit. But seriously. You are arguing with a fifteen year old over the internet. How much more pathetic can you get?
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Not really a vaild point to try and use against me, this is a forum I come to a fair amount. If someone is posting some odd shit there, I'm going to call them on it, regardless of age. The way you worded makes it seem like I'm just here to talk shit at you, which is clearly not the case.

I also like how you tried to change the subject, now you're really aware that your attempts to back up your claims have fallen flat on their face.
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No i just do not see the point in arguing because youvare so stubborn you will make up anything to win the arguement so congratulations. You won an arguement that i let you win. N clearly you are talkin shit on me. I keystyled a verse and you call me a liar and a faggot. Yeah umm no constructive criticism there. Just you being a bitch.
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The consturctive criticism would be not to lie about things.

Posting every verse and bein like YEAH KEYSTYLE, is some gay shit. Chain already called you out on it though, I was just reaffirming his point.
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Thats all i do is keystyle. As i said before. There has only been one on here that i didnt ketlystyle and the flow on that was choppy af. So i am back to just doin keystyles. And the fact that everyone thinks its not means i did a good keystyle.
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Or a really bad liar.
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Lmao right... Well im done arguin. Think whatever the hell you want. Cya.
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