Open Mic: a moment of pain

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    Posted: 28 November 2012 at 1:52pm
yea, these are words from a hopless romantic,

wearin my heart on my sleeve feelin broken an stranded.

i departed from a selfish type character,

everything i brought to ur table jus embarrased ya.

i was foolish for thinkin we would ever make it thru,

hard ta believe its been 2 yrs and i still think of you.

ive been drinkin an smokin everynight jus gettin faded,

tellin muthafuckas how i wish we woulda made it,

jus feels like time wasted... forreal,

they say theirs plenty of fish in the sea,

but none of these bitches even close to feelin me.

i dont even know whats real to me,

her walkin out the picture been killin me.

im on another level, in the booth bleedin this bass an treble,

ill renegade like a rebel, its either heaven or hell
guess im ridin with the devil.
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not bad... but the devil part kinda sounded like rednosepit's verse, the rest was good... easyread too. liked the idea and shit, props to u Ev...
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thanks man. i didnt get a chance to check out reds shit. which one is it?
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called "dreaming a devils orders", it's pretty dope!
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