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evidentz
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Posted: 28 November 2012 at 1:52pm |
yea, these are words from a hopless romantic,
wearin my heart on my sleeve feelin broken an stranded. i departed from a selfish type character, everything i brought to ur table jus embarrased ya. i was foolish for thinkin we would ever make it thru, hard ta believe its been 2 yrs and i still think of you. ive been drinkin an smokin everynight jus gettin faded, tellin muthafuckas how i wish we woulda made it, jus feels like time wasted... forreal, they say theirs plenty of fish in the sea, but none of these bitches even close to feelin me. i dont even know whats real to me, her walkin out the picture been killin me. im on another level, in the booth bleedin this bass an treble, ill renegade like a rebel, its either heaven or hell guess im ridin with the devil. |
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IZIAH
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not bad... but the devil part kinda sounded like rednosepit's verse, the rest was good... easyread too. liked the idea and shit, props to u Ev...
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~Insight The Inspired~
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evidentz
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thanks man. i didnt get a chance to check out reds shit. which one is it?
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IZIAH
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called "dreaming a devils orders", it's pretty dope!
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~Insight The Inspired~
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