Open Mic: Bar Fight (feat. Sick-Witted) |
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CHAIN
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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:37pm |
Robert...Rui...#TeamDoubleR and HG is the gang Fight! [Sick-Witted] It's been a minute or two since I blazed up a mic And submitted some new shit So I think that it's time I delivered the 2 cents That changes your life And ends the confusion Of the greatest to rhyme And if they're living or snoozing In a grave or inside An urn, cause the urge To earn that status Just burns, at my nerves Like a person's ashes So worms, just observe As I work my magic Like Merlin, and submerge This, Earth in madness And twirl and, just turn Til the world collapses Cause I'm just like "That" Dude That was birthed from blackness Evil to the core, So heed me when I call Or you'll be screaming for your Lord And bleeding from your balls With your penis on the floor Being eating up by dogs Like kibbles and bits So please don't get involved With Sick-Witted bitch Cause if it's me against yall You know how it's gonna end So stick to the script And don't give me no lip Unless it's, caressing The tip of my dick [Chain] It’s been a second or two since I flexed on a hoe Expressing the rudeness Of tes-tos-te-rone I’m etching the blueprint Of flexin’ in stone To dead the confusion Of the freshest to flow Oh Lord, Flow George Is fucking back at it My quotes are folklore For fucking crack addicts Pro-war, I’m O-Dog Tucking that ratchet I go hard with known whores On bloody craftmatics Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it I lived it, you bitches... Watched others hash tag it Sufferin’ succotash Wish I could’ve joked more Dark soul since 0-4 When Usher had classics Thugging in my ‘ Lo Sport, Hotter than the globe’s core Fronting, I was so poor But upper class lavish Ordering the crab Just to kill the perception, see… Flossing is the shit When ya scrilla’s perplexingly… Low and you’re broke And you’d kill for the recipe For wealth, needing help From the chefs ‘cause u tryna eat… Pigs, run your plate And you’re food, Bon Appétit #HG |
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Smoothtung
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This was nuts, one of the freshest collabs I've seen. Everything was absolutely absolutely on point with eachother, very well synchronized. Thanks for the read guys it was a pleasure.
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Though you never even had the chance to witness it |
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spume corrupt
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That right there is the freshest looking shitt i seen in a while
The read was mad i was really feeling the energy here Oh yay Sick it is soo good to see you doing ya thing again and trust brud I is sooo glad yo dint get shot, nuff respect Was nice to see yu come from a diff approach too Chingy Main HG Putting i down dope for us props
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DressToKill
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Nothing less than impressive, this is why I love that you guys are on my team. You guys were synced really well within this collab and it produced a HG super child of a verse. Yes non plural, it was synced well enough to say that.
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The original comeback kid
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戦闘の悪霊
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now this is what I call a fun read
from the "read" it sounds like this was made for a "Beat" pretty dope loved both of your verses, works well together. :) enough said,well done.
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仇討ち
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Jay Homicide
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Stupidly dope, props gents.
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Exoduzt
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This was nice, the rhyme scheme made it feel like a raw in your face type of vibe...very nice
Sick "An urn, cause the urge To earn that status Just burns, at my nerves Like a person's ashes So worms, just observe As I work my magic Like Merlin, and submerge This, Earth in madness And twirl and, just turn Til the world collapses"----The flow on this was crazy as hell CHAIN: Wow the flow was non stop thru out this whole piece "Oh Lord, Flow George Is fucking back at it My quotes are folklore For fucking crack addicts Pro-war, I’m O-Dog Tucking that ratchet I go hard with known whores On bloody craftmatics Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it " now you know that my type of rhyming rite there...this shit was crazy...very nice CHAIN...i liked the usher line as well lol Dope collab! |
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Stalin
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You mf's... Like I ain't here Smh
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J504
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Damn this shit went too cold.
First off, Sick is deadlier than ever. New folks that don't know about Sick will now. That's whats up. The short line style was perfect for this and yall did this so uniform and on the same page that yall come across as one writer. That shows some telpathic ninja shit right there #vibing Really loved this across the baord, shit was firing. respect.
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Matt The Ripper
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Just wow. Very impressive.
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Face it, I'm just too Rock N' Roll for you
You aint ready for this, and now you know the truth |
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Acid
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Fuck man. that went in so sick, one of the best collabs ive ever read, seriously the way the styles sync perfectly and the flow, gaah everything to be honest was totally on point, and the added tick boxes for collabs were all ticked, the perfect combination imo you should do more, it was an enjoyably sick read.
first time ive EVER liked something with short bars, this is brilliance, because you both know how to work syllables in short bars which is why it was so perfect. |
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Sick-Witted
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Thanx 4 all the feed everybody...
lol @ J5's telepathic ninja comment... and yes 戦闘の悪霊, this was written to "Ready For War" http://www.shadowville.com/122822/genres/underground-beats/ready-for-war Props to my nigga CHAIN for coming through and doing his thang, even though he aint really like the beat that much, lol... |
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Sick-Witted->means
I'm clever an ill & my best is revealed when Da pressure is buildin, so step if ya willin But testin da realest Will only lead u down a lonely street 2 ya death cuz I kill it |
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-Orion-
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This was hot... Chain you hit another level with some of those bars...this style can do good things for you...the more you fuck with bar lengths you can open up a whole other repertoire . . .
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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-Que-
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LOL...look at sick commin back from the abyss!!
[Sick-Witted] It's been a minute or two since I blazed up a mic And submitted some new shit So I think that it's time I delivered the 2 cents That changes your life And ends the confusion Of the greatest to rhyme And if they're living or snoozing In a grave or inside An urn, cause the urge To earn that status Just burns, at my nerves Like a person's ashes So worms, just observe As I work my magic Like Merlin, and submerge This, Earth in madness And twirl and, just turn Til the world collapses Cause I'm just like "That" Dude That was birthed from blackness Evil to the core, So heed me when I call Or you'll be screaming for your Lord And bleeding from your balls With your penis on the floor Being eating up by dogs Like kibbles and bits So please don't get involved With Sick-Witted bitch Cause if it's me against yall You know how it's gonna end So stick to the script And don't give me no lip Unless it's, caressing The tip of my dick Loved the machine gun format bro. Yeah yeah...we had our collisions but hands down you was always a clean writer. You went all over the place...straight insanity. Unorthodox ..good drop. [Chain] It’s been a second or two since I flexed on a hoe Expressing the rudeness Of tes-tos-te-rone I’m etching the blueprint Of flexin’ in stone To dead the confusion Of the freshest to flow Oh Lord, Flow George Is fucking back at it My quotes are folklore For fucking crack addicts Pro-war, I’m O-Dog Tucking that ratchet I go hard with known whores On bloody craftmatics Fuck it, I will even let an ugly ass have it I lived it, you bitches...Watched others hash tag it Sufferin’ succotash Wish I could’ve joked more Dark soul since 0-4 When Usher had classics Thugging in my ‘ Lo Sport, Hotter than the globe’s core Fronting, I was so poor But upper class lavish Ordering the crab Just to kill the perception, see… Flossing is the shit When ya scrilla’s perplexingly… Low and you’re broke And you’d kill for the recipe For wealth, needing help From the chefs ‘cause u tryna eat… Pigs, run your plate And you’re food, Bon Appétit First I had to take a Mark Rubio sip of water. Shit was insane. I have so many drops to feed. This is the first one. The Hash tag it line...the "Kill for the recipe line" "My quotes are folklore...for fuckin crack addicts"..LOL. I dunno why but that was my favorite line. Picture crack addicts sitting around a trash can fire talking about a legendary rock that would get them high for three weeks off of one hit.....lmao. That line was classic. Good drop Chain. |
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SwedishDope
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As I like to say, no such thing as "can't get no better, baadiing!" Gain no fame to stay the same!
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-Que-
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Niggah! Dont think I dont notice the trend muh-fukkah. You ack like you gotta say sathin after me? What you think you found a new pet to play witt? Thing is...I get weak when it aint no war.....I get stronger when theres sathin to fight for. LOL>..I'm drunk right now but I'll letchoo know....I don't mind a mindless muhhfukkah ......Yup...even though you only rapped for three weeks ...I'll merk yo ass niggah. So be kind...please rewind...and find about 4 more bars that you can debate with. I just want to fight...I don't give a fuck who I feud with. Too much shit goin on for me to deal with reality....but what can a niggah doo? I can't give up writin cuz the shits part of my breathin. |
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SwedishDope
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Hehe nice text u "party animal", hope ur not too drunk or pissed off... Since I have to say I have no idea what you are talking about? Are you meaning to say I'm following your "posts" around and making sure my post follows urs? Paranoid much dude? Chill out, maybe sleep it off:) Talk to u later when u more clear if u still want to:)
Edit: My applause post was directed to the writers of this piece and not some weird stalker fantasy, to be clear with everybody... My feed seemed abit short maybe but I couldnt come up with anything, most had been said by the other people who left their feed already Will write this though, not disrespect towards chain or nothing, but I prefer sick-witteds verse. they are very simillar in style and flow I think but sick just did it a tad sicker;P But overall. good job both of u Peace Edited by SwedishDope - 23 February 2013 at 6:47am |
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As I like to say, no such thing as "can't get no better, baadiing!" Gain no fame to stay the same!
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CHAIN
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Que, my nigga
DTK, Jay Homicide, J504, Exoduzt, Matt, Spume, Smoothtung, The Japanese guy ,Acid, Swedish Orion, you‘re right, your last drops evolved in to this structure as well if im not mistaken Stalin, we love you. Sick killed this, lived out his name...I just jacked his flow. Appreciate you sending me your verse. |
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Nefarious
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first verse was better, both were clever and fed well off of each other's
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L3PR3CH4UN
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That was sick enjoyed it, nice one!
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