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Kay B
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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 3:00pm |
Chain Kay Smoked an ounce of loud where hope’s a silent threat Deep in my chambers where no’s pronounced as yes Scoped around, depressed, I’m holding down the stress Rivers turned to blood where the locusts found my nest Cloaked the rage, I paused to post a smiley, vexed… Enough to feel offended when they joke about Tourette’s Feeling like a coward but I know about the rest Ey’ body’s Abraham till they only child is next Hypocrite, faking it, quoting Malcolm X Righteous I am not but I won’t allow my ex… To double time her man still poking out his chest Lonely, deprived of the joy known as shower sex It is not a win when I soak the couch with sweat Forced to feel the pain of a thousand fucking deaths Rope around my neck, I’m falling off a barstool Used to be the best but I’m falling off with bars too Friend once asked me "what would YOU class as defeat?" "How bout no electricity, heating wipin' your ass on the sheets?" Even after retreats?.."Glass on the floor no plasters for feet" "Or the disasters you eat, tins in your mouth blastin' ur teeth" Used to laugh at the weak, id be laughin' for weeks Claimed the heartless retreat, now in the darkness i speak Start to feel weak, grab the liquid injectin' it fast Slump back n realize, ONLY light in my life reflects off the glass Filthy walls, no family photo's on display...check Slappin' play on tape deck, thinkin' of the album i aint made yet Stand up, Walking like im sixty years old, jerky Like a child on boxing day, forced to suffer with cold turkey Fuck that, ima be rich soon, take money split it than half it staring anxiously at the hole in the wall from my last trip Dropped an ounce on the bed, shit still sits there Brushing my rough beard and my stylishly messy thick hair Mum dunno what she's talking about i livin' the life I may even go out next month, find a hot girl i consider a wife |
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Manc
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No feed??? WTF !!!
Yes yes - Kain is backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk !!! Dope drop lads - smooth as fuck !! You both gel so well together, and I dont think Ill ever get bored of Kain drops. Bravo !! |
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BIG GAME
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Kay had some real clever bars in here.
Start to feel weak, grab the liquid injectin' it fast Slump back n realize, ONLY light in my life reflects off the glass (Kay B) Filthy walls, no family photo's on display...check Slappin' play on tape deck, thinkin' of the album i aint made yet (Kay B) Fuck that, ima be rich soon, take money split it than half it staring anxiously at the hole in the wall from my last trip (Kay B) Dropped an ounce on the bed, shit still sits there Brushing my rough beard and my stylishly messy thick hair (Kay B) Yea, these were all some clever bars. Nice read. |
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Kay B
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Props on the feed guys, and thanks for quoting my bars game, but dont be sleeping on chain...dudes a beast whether you like or dislike him, he brings it
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BIG GAME
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Naw, I don't dislike him personally. I just am never impressed with his scripts. We all have our likings. Yours bars stood out to me. Pretty much all their is to it. |
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Exoduzt
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Nice I love checkin out Kains shit...yall compliment each other really well...always killing it...
CHAIN: "Smoked an ounce of loud where hope’s a silent threat Deep in my chambers where no’s pronounced as yes Scoped around, depressed, I’m holding down the stress Rivers turned to blood where the locusts found my nest " POW! that part rite there was fucking fire...the flow was flawless and the last line..hell yeah...the ending part was dope too...very nice CHAIN this was sick Kay: I like the style you brought to this.. "Used to laugh at the weak, id be laughin' for weeks Claimed the heartless retreat, now in the darkness i speak Start to feel weak, grab the liquid injectin' it fast Slump back n realize, ONLY light in my life reflects off the glass Filthy walls, no family photo's on display...check Slappin' play on tape deck, thinkin' of the album i aint made yet"---I liked this part a lot...that reflecting off the glass line was killer... "Fuck that, ima be rich soon, take money split it than half it staring anxiously at the hole in the wall from my last trip"---favorite line loved it I loved the concept and approach you guys took...Kain always gives me an interesting and enjoyable read...return the favor Kay! lol |
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Kay B
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haha will do man, props on the feedback appreciate it
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J504
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Motherfuckin' KAIN!
Y'all are a hell of a team, this didn't disappoint at all either. Y'all both had some nice rhyming in this, styles played well together as usual. That Abraham line was great. Stay up y'all. |
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CHAIN
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Appreciate the feed gentlemen.
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Kay B
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Uppin, because im an ego maniac
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J504
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Oh and Kay... You do know that you don't have to put "ft. CHAIN" in the title anymore. I mean who the fuck doesn't know who KAIN is by now?!
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Kay B
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none of the newbs have a clue who Kain is lol but yeah true
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