Open Mic: Scampi Pasta (feat. Jay Homicide) |
Post Reply | Page 12> |
Author |
Rating: Topic Search Topic Options
|
CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Post Options
Likes(1)
Posted: 31 July 2013 at 4:13pm |
Live from Ethiopia
Respect the Hunger.... [CHAIN] I’ve returned like The Mack, I’m Morrison, Mark Word is that I’m back to leave more than a mark Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc… Buchanan jackets meaning morons are marked… For death once I utter these morbid remarks As dark as a Moor, I am morgue-ing you marks Green is mi amor, I’m evil to a Mormon But for my peeps I would morph into Marx I’m taking it back to my earliest phase when… Germans were paying their mortgage with Marks Morpheus mixed with Zach Morris, I marched… With psychos who believed there were mortals on Mars They mourned over martyrs, they’ll mourn over me I’m more so unique, till Le Mort, C’est La Vie Not for vendetta ‘ cause I’m morally pristine Morgan Freeman with the bars…more than just serene [Jay Homicide] Can’t front on us, no doubt that our alignment in sharp Visionary approach, we lead the blind through the dark Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars The crew rolls deep, focus means our minds on the task We’re at the finish, y’all stuck on the line from the start This is exactly what you get when you think of greatness You can try bash us, but y’all should just see that’s aimless We’re the only crew left where every member poses a threat Not gassing, it’s me telling you what you know in your heads War with us? I wouldn’t advise it! You cunts ain’t go do shit One hit has half ya squad missing like a rough day in Munich The teams set, and it becomes clear every time that we rap The chemistry’s on point, we’re like Walter White in the lab So y’all better keep this in mind the next time that you speak We’re above and beyond the next level you’re trying to reach HG. |
|
|
|
U.N.L.M.
Standard Member Joined: 19 December 2006 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 1955 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-15-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Nice collab. I thought Chain's "mark" theme was crazy. Loved the morpheus mixed with zach morris bit and thought that this line was smooth as hell "Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc". Crazy verse. I like that Jay came with a straight up approach. Like the Walter White line and loved that opening bar with the visionary approach line. Good stuff.
|
|
Jay Homicide
Standard Member Joined: 11 November 2009 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Cheers for the feed my dude, yeah Chain's Mark scheme was insane. This will be the first of many collabs, if I have anything to say about it.
|
|
Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
This was dope guys.
CHAIN, very risky doing the 'mark' thing, but in my opinion, it worked very well. And kept the reader intrigued about the piece from the get go. You knew this wasn't going to be your regular drop. Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc… Buchanan jackets meaning morons are marked… My favourite bit personally. Jay, liked the switch up in your verse. You started with all flow and attitude, which is 'your thing' and what you're good at. However, later on in the verse, you were confident enough to let the flow calm down and throw in a few social reference punches. Which I wasn't expected and really liked. Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars My favourite bit of yours. Well done.
|
|
Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Nice collabo fellas....good shit...
Chains, I gotta say it was an interesting approach with the mark flow, but it def worked. Shit was fresh and I like the way you went about it. I actually read it twice just to make sure I was catching it right but dope.
Jay this was a solid verse. The opening was fire and your cocky type barz were spot on for this drop.
ya'll did your thang here
|
|
-Que-
Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
LOL@ As dark as a Moor, I am morgue-ing you marks
Green is mi amor, I’m evil to a Mormon But for my peeps I would morph into Marx<---That shit was clean ha ha! The language twist was sick too. Who bettah to pimp this one straight out ....MY MAN!!!! Whuttup JH!! I see HG done went into the lab and created the first AK with ether bullets. Like I said...I dig your style of rhymin Jay.....doesn't have the flash but still comes off rugged! Good work! |
|
|
|
Point Blank
Superior Member Joined: 20 May 2005 Status: Offline Points: 7234 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 92-27-5 Form: WWNWWN |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
I respect you 2 for still doing your thang in the face of adversity. Chain, the whole Mark thing was sick, the German line got me cos, just when you think your moving on to a new scheme, you swing straight back into the Mark thing (nh). Jay there was no killer plays in there which I'm used to seeing from you but you repped your crew well, flow and rhymes were on point.
Nice work fellas |
|
J504
Banned Joined: 08 June 2010 Status: Offline Points: 5385 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 25-0-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Enjoyable read right here from both of you. Definitely looking forward to seeing more from y'all. That opener was great!!!
|
|
-Orion-
Veteran Joined: 08 April 2004 Location: DisturbinLondon Status: Offline Points: 9598 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #1 Stats: 90-4-1 Form: WWWWNW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
I like Jay's message
Chain That verse was just stupid
|
|
They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
|
Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
What the fuck did Chain just drop...collabo is over, open mic is over, someone shut it down!!
Jay, worst collabo ever...you actually had a cool 'say it how it is' type verse, but you literally got solar eclipsed on this thing...someone needs to tell Chain to roll back a few levels so he's only next level |
|
|
|
The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Chain definitely a dope verse here. Although the rhyming started to get a bit repetitive IMO, the plays on it were outstanding. Very well written.
Jay your verse was solid also, just nothing standoutish like Chain had. It flowed very well and read smoothly. There was a few bars in there that I really liked also. Walter White line was nice. Enjoyable reads from both of you guys.
|
|
Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Weak
|
|
Brotha Goose
Standard Member Joined: 07 July 2013 Location: San Diego, CA Status: Offline Points: 2318 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 10-10-0 Form: LWLWLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Chain....... I had no idea the word "Marc(k) could be used in so many different context....bravo.Chain! lol
risky business but you came out sick with it! Jay.......love the haters cuz most of the time they've got yur name in their mouth and it plays on in their minds more often than it does in your own......I thought both drops were hot sounded like you had sum shit to get off yur chest, you said yur piece and you fuckin said it well fam! Edited by Brotha Goose - 03 August 2013 at 1:55am |
|
|
|
Nigma
Site Moderator Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
CHAIN da gawd
|
|
Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Chain the mark theme was nice. I felt some of it was a lil forced, but ya flow and rhymes always kill it.
loved this line.. But for my peeps I would morph into Marx killer... Word is that I’m back to leave more than a mark Morphine for marksmen with mortars in Marc… Sick fuckin flow and rhymes jay the rhymes was nice thru the verse. Some good punchlines in this. Flow was good. Fav lines.. Follow suit, the honours due from the design of our art Stellar steez better see this comes from combining the stars nice internal rhymes.. We’re at the finish, y’all stuck on the line from the start simple but a sick line. good shit yall.. weak that I wasnt included! |
|
King Canarsie
Groupie Joined: 27 July 2013 Location: Brooklyn, New Y Status: Offline Points: 68 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
CHAIN might as well be my favorite rapper here. Unbelievably dope, and a sick use of alliteration in the beginning.
|
|
spume corrupt
Superior Member Joined: 27 April 2011 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 3162 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 20-7-1 Form: WLWLLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
This really was top quality stuff
Great to see a hg collaboration looking very tight Well done |
|
|
|
Lucky D
Standard Member Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
This was fuckin' sick.
Chain--I don't really know what to say. You amaze me everytime you write something. Jay--For someone who doesn't drop often I'm surprised you can keep up with your skillz. Dope shit. OM of the month for sure
|
|
JBrenn
Superior Member Joined: 03 May 2006 Status: Offline Points: 3754 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 40-26-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
Collab was ok because of the two styles but i really like the whole piece and the way it read with the language switch up was fresh... stay up stay dropping liked the post.
|
|
|
|
H4ZE
Standard Member Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Post Options
Likes(0)
|
This was sick as fuck!
|
|
Post Reply | Page 12> |
Tweet
|
Forum Jump | Forum Permissions You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|