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    Posted: 13 June 2004 at 9:07am

CREW BATTLE : RENEGADES vs ILL-POWER

  • the second person has 48 hours after the first person has dropped their verse - no exceptions, the first person wins otherwise - and there will be a no-flips rule as well, which means you don't have to wait for your opponent to drop before you start writin' yours
  • verses are 10-25 lines long (max 13 bars)
  • votes from ALL accepted (except the two crews), and if you ever suspect somethin' wrong with a vote, PM a mod (not me, obviously), and their decision is FINAL - no bitchin'
  • all other rules are normal
  • -Orion- spits first

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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 14 June 2004 at 3:23pm

    Yo yo...

    brace this snitch in a chokehold an' lace my fists wit' chains
    scrapin' veins in his wrists wit' blunt rusty razorblades/
    break his clique wit' rakes n' shit "leavin' wounds like Vega"
    gore to tha point I'm "banned from TV" like Noreaga/
    Shaolin spits devourin' cliques like yours, ya fulla cowards
    darkest shit like martial artists hit wit' devastatin' power/
    motherfucker's got nothin' in him but adrenaline
    jabbin' needles in himself thinkin' he can do anythin'/
    veins poppin' through tha skin' an' ya lickle brain's stoppin'
    tryna take this is kamikaze like Afghan planes droppin'/
    I came croppin' the realest, you an' yo power ain't illest
    leave you buried alive in locusts "dyin' hard" like Bruce Willis/
    burnin' the odds, leave this atheist kid turnin' to God
    till you grasp spellin' and DROP CAPS you ain't learnin' this art/
    you only choose this bout so you could lose an' make excuses
    ILL-POWER fuckers all the same; don't complain when you lose this/
    Unforgiven comes online actin' like he knows what grime is
    "spits shit" like heimlichs; bitch thinks he got live spits/
    pure precision; stabbin' him in his abdomen makin' multiple incisions
    no one needs [em~pha~sis] to notice yo' amateur attempts at lyricism/
    ya not "com~plex" punches *harmless* an' I'll leave ya fuckin' nerves wrecked
    outta yo' depth like spastic swimmers, can't beat somethin' that's perfect/
    Renegades gon' rip this clique, "flip this bitch" so hard he capsize
    "Victory road's lit"; I can see it in this "cat's eyes"/
    this brat spies to get tips but he spits whack lies
    so I'ma bring lyrical claps till him an' his pack dies.../

    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 15 June 2004 at 9:23am

    i'll drop within acouple of days.. i have exams ya know.. so its hard to get the net ya know...

    so don't DQ me cuz i'll definitly drop

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 16 June 2004 at 3:17pm
    time is running out -

    i'll be generous and give you until the end of tonight to drop.

    clocks a ticking.,
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 10:33am

    Time is way up... Unforgiven is DQed... but fuckt if I'm wasting this spit... so L-Blade/Wordplay, step up for your crew and hit me back. You got till midnight tonight (GMT), as that's when Unforgiven's extended deadline was.

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 12:58pm

    hmmm can ya'll smell that???????

    *sniff sniff*...

    i SMELL PUSSY.....an thats you orion... dq'in me when i got exmas... fukin pussy bitch....must be the oly way ya ass can get wins besides battle wack kids....

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 1:16pm

    I delayed it so you could get home yesterday from your exams and make the drop, I thought about it in every way I could. You knew about it, you could've written bars over the days, bit by bit, seein' as there's no flips. You've had the best situation I could give you, and I delayed my spit even tho I was busy, by a day, I couldn't have delayed it any further, I was too busy.

    Whatever man. I'll bend the rules 'cuz I shoulda known at least one of the Renegades would be facin' a no-show, and look, it's happened twice.

    Get on with it. No more posts unless it's a verse. You've got 2 hours exactly, which makes it in total a whole extra 24hrs. Surprise me.



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    . . . Now who said they fuckin' with me?
    They just said that FUCKIN' with me
    They didn't mean it
    Nah . . .
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 2:15pm

    hahaha... cool cool... look i didn't know the sistuation you did ... sorry bro... atleast i can admit i was wrong...an my only post can be a verse here we go...

    10 to 25 lines... go's to hmm... (gotta think the math)... 5 to 12.5 Bars

    This Kid Now BELIEVIN IN HELL Cuz His Dick Ryders Have Switched Dicks An Now He's RECIEVIN AN L, Ya Can Tell Ma Hits Are Pissed Cuz I Spit Wit Fists That Connect Ta Ya Dome An Ya Just Makin Me "Sicker" When Ya Slit Ma Wrists, Renegades Are Jus Wack Men An Un's The Doctah Wit The Mack Ten About Ta Disect Ya Wit Chrome/

    Did anyone say multies???? lol...

    THis QUEERS FAKE An Ma Mic Is Screamin Till Ya EARS BREAK Cuz This Kid Winnin Nah This Dyke Is Dreamin, I'mma Spike Ya Team-In Ya Called Me Wack Fa Rhymin Abdamin An Stabbin-Him When I Came To LA An You Usem, This Kid FAT? Nah he Ain't Got No Flab-in-Him/

    Ma METHOD Make Ya Greet DEATH-WIT Ya Last BREATH-KID, An Ya LACK THE SKILL Ta ATTACK AN KILL THis STACK OF ILL/

    When I Spit No RENEGADE IS LEF (left) Cuz Every MEN-IS-LAID TO DEATH When Ma PEN-AN-BLADE GO BREATHE (spit), I Allways Sin-Sick An Why This Kid Think He "Ill" He Neva Entered A Clinic/ lol...meh its rushed...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 2:18pm

    Cheers for admittin' fault, was good of you. Nice spit.

    Votes in people...

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 3:40pm

    orion

    flow:9
    wordplay:10 ( some gr8 word play there)
    punches:9
    multis:8
    enjoyment:9.5

    unfogiven

    flow:8
    wordplay:8
    punches:8
    multis:9
    enjoyment:7

    orion - 45.5         &n bsp;       unforgiven - 40

    much prefered orions spit to be honest. better flow and punches with sik man wordplay. unforgiven i didnt like how u structured urs it makes it much harder to read. still a good battle but there was only gonna be 1 wiunner

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 4:08pm
    punches:orion
    multis:unforgiven
    wordplay:orion
    flow: orion
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    bit of a 1 sided battle orion well really ripped it but as i think many will say the structure that u use {@unforgiven} makes ur verse harder to read but even so orions verse was nice and won in most catogries
    winner orion
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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 4:48pm

     

    I feel Orion haz bagged dis!

    "Break his clique wit' rakes n' shit "leavin' wounds like Vega"
    gore to tha point I'm "banned from TV" like Noreaga"

    I luv Street Fighter games and dat Vega punch line was pure dope!

    Orion hit harder! and hiz flow was easier to connect wid!

    Unforgiven had ill use of multis! Slightl tough to chew sections in sum parts! I hate havin to decide 1! But dat's battle rappin for ya!

    WINNER: Orion

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    Direct Link To This Post Posted: 17 June 2004 at 6:36pm
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