Rap Tutorials: HOW TO VOTE/CRITIQUE |
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Thickest crap
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HOW TO VOTE/CRITIQUE
In a battle verse, when voting, look for originality, rhyme scheme and creativity. Pay attention to vocabulary and comedic appeal for which it'll win the crowds respect. Most importantly, look for the punchlines. Because it's what make a battle verse. Without it, there can't be a battle verse. A verse may be nice but if it's lack punches, it's aint' a nice battle verse. It's just a verse. When voting, you can input what you thought were the best/your favorite lines and your least favorite lines. Say and explain why you thought that person's verse was better. In a NON-battle verse, or topical verse. Make sure that volcabulary is there. Staying on topic is a must. One way to stay on topic is to go into detail to what you've just mention on your prior line. Do pay attention to the metaphor/simile. When critiquing this type of verse, be open to the content that the arthur is trying to portray. ...I hope that this will help many of you |
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Scotty32
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wrong forum - would of been best in "rap tutorials"
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Noxious
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Crap... Your telling people how to vote... and all you do is D.R your crew members anywayz... damn... learn how to vote your self... ~1~ |
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Thickest crap
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A-clipz you back again you young ass punk!
I vote just as good as the rest so fuck off and eat some ass. Hey should you not be in school learning some new skillz? And I DR my crew members? I make sure 90% of the time I will not even vote on battles that have one of my mebers in it...that way I do not need to hear puck as wansters like you open you fucking flapping mouth and make dumb as comments with no facts. Bring the facts you pussy! |
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BiggStankDogg
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Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer |
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Scotty32
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aclipz
if thickest crap voted for someone in his crew - wouldnt the vote be disallowed due to no crew votes??? and if crew votes are allowed - then hes more than welcome to vote for a team mate, long as its a fair vote and aclipz didnt you vote for symbion 2-3 times in one battle in LMS |
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King Jehu
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that was some HARD riding... told
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Noxious
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yeah... i voted twice... sorry bout that... wasnt riding or hating thou... SymBion did have the better verse... ( Jehu dont start beef please... ) ~1~ |
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King Jehu
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1. You voted 3 times You're not a biter... Fuck you. |
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Scotty32
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he is, hes banned from battling AND voting for 2months
then he'll be closely watched for one month after that it was part of the terms of him coming back |
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Rixa-Mixa
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If you flame another one of my members jehu, i will personally tell Osama to fly another plane into what ever poor ass place in NY you work, *EDIT* thank you *EDIT*
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~Rixa-Mixa~Crikey!
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King Jehu
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Didn't you two hate each other? Flame? I'll flame aclitz and your wack
bitch ass. I don't give a flying fuck what you say you wanna do. Why
are you forming a crew with two names? Can't decide on a name yet you
wanna have a crew...
Question... how many of the "black panthers" are black? Do you even know who the original black panthers were. No... You don't know shit. Try to Osama NY? You can try and I'll personally shoot your ass down. You can't do much damage with a toy plane. it's fitting that you're in australia, seeing as you're already so far beneath me... |
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Noxious
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i have to agree with Jehu on most of that... ~1~ |
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Rixa-Mixa
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The original "Black Panthers" were a terrorist group who believed that society put blacks under whites in the social world, thats one of the reasons why i chose that name. One members black, ME! you gotta problem with that?, i dont care, book yoself a flight to Australia if you got something to say, i'll knock yo seppo ass all the way back to America. Enough said if you ask me... |
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~Rixa-Mixa~Crikey!
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King Jehu
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So what you're saying is that you want to have a crew coprised of
members who want to keep you down? if the name black panter suits you,
change your name, but black pantherS is plural, and it only fits one
person in the crew.
I don't want to go to australia (it would be closer to drill a hole through the earth). It's too much trouble. I'd take you to the battlefield, but you already have two battles against aclipz you were gonna lose and you conveniently don't show up... loser. A-clipz is wack (musta bit as anon), your crew is wack, and rixa, you're wack. |
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Scotty32
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King Jehu - wanna keep it down abit
this was ment to be about how to vote- not how to flame the wack members if you wanna continue it take it to the beef forum (aka Fuck Ya'll) that goes for ALL of you - rixa, aclipz, jehu and anyone else who wants to join in on this but id rather this didnt get into a racial dispute - so leave all that out |
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Rixa-Mixa
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Jehu is a racist yanke dildo fuck, and yes, i'll battle you... and, to make it more interesting, how about for the LA champ title? or scared you will lose? |
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"racist yanke" Taste the irony kids. |
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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BiggStankDogg
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FACE.
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Fear the Bow of the Silent Archer |
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King Jehu
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Face? You mean rixa mixa's face? It won't be there long...
I'm not racist, I'm socially conscious. You think I'm racist cause you're ignorant... and you can't rap. Stick to beat-boxing. That and selling your ass are your last resorts. Dont' battle me, Clipz embarrased you already, and you never even responded. I'll make you look stupid. oh shit. too late. |
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