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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Topic: Chase Cash vs concrete Posted: 29 October 2013 at 11:35pm |
Cash Win. Jackpot.
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wreckless
Standard Member Joined: 23 October 2013 Status: Offline Points: 562 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-2-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 29 October 2013 at 1:46am |
Errr vote - Cash, haha typed wrong name.
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wreckless
Standard Member Joined: 23 October 2013 Status: Offline Points: 562 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-2-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 29 October 2013 at 1:45am |
concrete ..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some ok opener 5/10
ehh....ok 4/10
decent, liking the concept, the first line was awkward to say though "a bit" should of been left out 6/10
big step back down 4/10 swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts decent close 6/10 Cash You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. decent opener 6/10
ehhh ok 4/10
ok 5/10 I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, ok... the set up was fucked though 5/10 My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, decent closer 6/10 Decent battle with some alright concepts. Decent punches and wordplay getting used. Flow seemed hit or miss for both on a bar by bar basis. Real talk both verses were damn close to each other. Concrete 25/50 Cash 26/50 Vote - Concrete |
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 28 October 2013 at 11:33pm |
We both requested some vets to give the decisive votes, so it's up to mods to decide if the last 2 votes should count, if they do count then congrats to Ca$h, great cla$h, dawg
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FuckButter
Banned Joined: 17 October 2013 Location: Fuddruckers, LA Status: Offline Points: 149 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-1-0 Form: LW |
Posted: 27 October 2013 at 8:07am |
MCGT Concrete
Concrete came with better jokes, like I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED. Cash's best line was The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! which was too little too late. They both brought style to the table, but MVGT Concrete for some good jokes that tipped the scales in his direction. |
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Sureal
Groupie Joined: 25 October 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 115 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: WLWW |
Posted: 27 October 2013 at 7:57am |
The asphalt line was a far fetch.. Didn't come together nicely
And then the assault part seems redundant because it was only Made to serve purpose to the asphalt part.... Weak sauce sir.. Nonetheless my vote goes to you simply because you had a more so Complex rhyme scheme as well as a flow that remained afloat while Cramming lines down his throat. Ha .. My vote goes to you. The other guy.. I honestly Stopped reading and then went back to it You could have had it if your verse was more Intricate and held strong punches as well As hard personals But .. |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 27 October 2013 at 7:51am |
i agree... can we get a couple vets to votes? or just 1 depending lol ;)
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 26 October 2013 at 9:22pm |
aight, no phat lady is singing yet, appealing to the experienced guys for the final n decisive votes
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 26 October 2013 at 7:52am |
My bad lol i forgot first to 5, i don't know what i was thinkin...
4-3 uppin' just a couple more votes at most guys!!! |
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Psychlone
Groupie Joined: 17 October 2013 Location: Jordan Status: Offline Points: 86 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-3-0 Form: LWWLL |
Posted: 18 October 2013 at 1:48pm |
I vote cash
I won't pretend I can analyse the bars as good as some of these guys, but cash's wordplay was on target, especially with the concrete idea verse and the ass-ault and ass-fault play was just damn good. Concrete's verse was pretty good too, but I felt cash more.
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"Yeah they call me pshyclone, cuz my words hit at a psychological level,
When I was just six, I was taught a hundred ways to kill with a pebble" |
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hanGing
Veteran Not to be Fucked With. Joined: 28 October 2003 Status: Offline Points: 5008 Text Rank: #8 Stats: 30-10-6 Form: NNWLNL |
Posted: 18 October 2013 at 8:35am |
2 last votes... (or maybe 3)
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 18 October 2013 at 6:47am |
C'mon y'all... it's a 3-3 battle that's been open since the middle of September!! Can we just get 1 last vote n finally shut this battle please?! Much appreciated!!
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 12 October 2013 at 7:51am |
uppin
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 08 October 2013 at 8:13pm |
aight then, 3-3, dramatic
ncredztozevoterz |
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Titu
Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:46pm |
CONCRETE
..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund It was a decent opener.nicely played. It stumbled a bit in "flow",but an ok "so called" personal was present. The concept was cool but wording could be better though.. you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting Here, i liked how you took it to the second bar. This bar was generic but flow remained tight. Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED This is what I wanted to see. Nicely played personal which did the job pretty well. Flow was hot aswell. a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war Nice flip. decent concept.did its job well.. swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE more than good as a closer plus flow was also good. Chase Cash You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. Aight ,listen, this personal is too "old".If im not wrong, Zinaii used it first against him.Always try to think outside the box. creativity is very important in forming punches.Besides that, flow was just good. Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! Not a banging personal but it was decent.nicely worded. flow was aight. Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. A decent line.good concept.but could be executed better. flow was nice. I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! well, nicely executed. It landed harder than ya other lines. My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! Concept was thr. But its a bit awkward the way its worded. overall, i liked reading both verses but concrete had more better personal attempts than chase.he had a better flow too... so MVGT CONCRETE STAY UP HOMIES.
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 04 October 2013 at 7:01am |
3-2 still...
up up |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 27 September 2013 at 6:48am |
Thanks for votin' guys, appreciate the feedback for sure
3-2 good battle concrete! |
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Josh DeRock
Newbie Joined: 26 September 2013 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 20 |
Posted: 26 September 2013 at 2:49pm |
Concrete-I liked it. Each bar was an attack and I liked the "fronting" punch. Your name flips were pretty witty too, without seeming like a stretch to connect. I'm very sure I don't like punches being explained tho, I don't know if that's usual around here or just a few that do it, your punches didn't need explaining, let them hit or miss on their own merits.
Chase-your punches seemed a bit forced, not much stood out beyond the "waste of bars" line, (which was a wasted bar) and the concrete idea line, which had some solid humor to it. I liked your flow better, more lyrically inclined, but the punches didn't hit any harder for the poetics. Vote-Concrete for a consistent and witty attack as opposed to some filler and stretched concepts from cash.
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
Posted: 26 September 2013 at 2:27pm |
concrete- first of all this was a solid verse love the liquiidation line n the web browser line u came wit some solid punches an good name flips
cash- ur opener was great an fallowed wit some good solid punches as well while u took a more lengthy approach i thought u pulled it off well an did enough to edge it out this was a really close battle guys could go either way it really is gonna come down to personal prefrence n i was feeling cash's verse just a lil more either way this type of battle is a win win u each brought the best outta eachother but mvgt cash
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 26 September 2013 at 5:44am |
Thanks for taking some time to vote!!
2-1 Still uppin' please these are 2 decent verses.. |
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