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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Topic: Chase Cash vs concrete Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:16pm |
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1st to 5 votes (3-0 TKO) No Flipping Due 6 Hours from the time the last person checks ins |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:17pm |
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 06 September 2013 at 8:29pm |
check, but I request that Klean isnt allowed to vote here as he obviously has a petty grudge against me.
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 07 September 2013 at 1:39am |
aight, the people demand personals..
..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE Fronting ass people = Haters LIQUIDATED 1, pay; change into cash 2. destroy, dissolve WAGE 1. Payment for labor or services 2. To engage in CACHE\CASH
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Titu
Superior Member Joined: 04 July 2013 Location: 🔥 Hell 🔥 Status: Offline Points: 4522 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-19-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 07 September 2013 at 12:34pm |
Bump for chase
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 07 September 2013 at 2:03pm |
please drop a$ap
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 07 September 2013 at 6:01pm |
Lol damnit I went to bed before you posted, but i'll drop in the next hour. You can decide if you wanna accept the verse... lol stupid 6 hour rule
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 07 September 2013 at 7:25pm |
Alright look...
You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat. I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! - Asphalt/Concrete should be self explanatory - Wastin' Barz/ Xanex comes in bars - concrete's name isn't capitalized - concrete is hard and you lay concrete, hence "soft as a bitch" "never get laid" |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 08 September 2013 at 4:56am |
uppin votes!!
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 08 September 2013 at 9:54am |
dope verse cash, ass-fault\asphalt was just used by umlv though
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Concrete
Standard Member Joined: 02 September 2013 Location: Oslo Status: Offline Points: 1418 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 33-6-0 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:24pm |
Up for legit votes, I will return the favour regardless of who you vote for
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:49pm |
Yes we do demand personals....
Concrete - very impressive verse, sharp writing style, get to the point quickly and deliver witty punches that do a lot of damage to your opponent, Even your second bar which was generic was still nicely written, very cleanly executed. I basically really enjoyed this verse, only thing to say is your rhymes could be a bit more intricate...but, that said, you had a flow that worked really well & excellent rhythm to your verse, so actually, all those things are primary to having more complicated rhymes for the sake of it. Very solid verse, will be difficult to best. Cash - ooooo, this is an impressive verse as well!! Interesting! Longer line style, so not as crisp as concrete...but that also allowed you to develop some pretty advanced concepts later in your verse. Opener was cool, liked how you weaves it intricately...but I think this lacked impact, the punch was weaker than the wordplay you had going on...next bar was generic, better rhyming that concrete but I thought yours was kind of filler-ish, ended up being an ok jab whereas his generic bar was a sharp jab. Next bar was a lot better, your filler was a bit ehhh, but the actual punch concept was quality, really liked that as a punch...you then stepped it up from this point, again, filler line could've been better...I liked that you were using 'oneupman' style comparison, but that's pretty dated...so good technique, but needed an updated reference...but the punchline was absolutely awesome, like a perfect punch to respond to his verse...really really high quality! Similar criticism on the next filler, "tight as a braid" is a played concept (doesn't hurt you as much because its not a main aspect to your line, but still, you need to be sharper with your imagery...you show you understand the technique, just need to execute it better)...but yeah, the punch for the closer was another dope one So yeah, you both really impressed me...obviously both know what you're doing & must have a lot of experience. It's actually a tough one to vote. I think Cash had a style I really appreciate, sharp, concise, consistent hits, clever...Cash came back with a wider variety of weapons, his verse had more elements in there (partly a function of having longer lines & therefore more content)...I think he could've been sharper in the way he executed his imagery & wordplay at times...but equally he had the best punch of the battle with that "concrete idea" line Very tough, I think Cash started weak but really came back into...my instinct would generally to go with concrete because I really liked his approach & style...but ultimately, this is a close battle and I think I should go with who had the most heat, and this time Cash had the best punch of the battle & therefore it tips it slightly in his favour. Sometimes you can say "your inconsistency cost you", but don't think that would be valid in this case Vote = Cash...great battle though guys |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 09 September 2013 at 9:38am |
Thanks for fully explaining your vote Cuba!! It's always nice to get some valid feedback on what you can work on and do better! Good verse too concrete! I didn't see that line otherwise i definitely wouldn't have put it in my verse lol!!
but thanks again Cuba and uppin' for more votes!! 1-0 |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:06pm |
uppin still!!
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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:28pm |
..tellin me to investigate this trash, to get some
but if any effort was invested in Cash, I would demand a refund ehhh this coulda been more effective the wording was off to me but it was a decent concept 2/5 you want beef son? give me the grass you smoking I'll rotate your backbone just to keep your ass from fronting this was light but it was effective got the job done imo 2/5 Cash is stomping? I ain't gonna act a bit intimidated I'll bring value to this battle, Cash gets LIQUIDATED this was a nice nameplay flow was dead on syllable wise good line 3.5/5 a simple fact is implicated, you're a fake ass whore you're chasing cash.. cause you obviously can't WAGE a war this was another decent flip not hardhitting but very effective 3/5 swiftly break your jaw, it's time to face facts call me a fucking web-browser, I just erased CACHE this was a nice closer best line of yours very good way to end the verse 4/5 overall this was better then ur other battle verses u got the concept of flowing and syllables down keep working on those nameflips r definently heading in the right direction 14/25 |
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Zinaii
Standard Member Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2957 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-27-10 Form: WLNNNL |
Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:39pm |
You a blind man that's bout to get beat, on a paved road to defeat.
I'll catch an ass-ault it's this dumb ass-fault (asphalt), yea I blame it on concrete. first off i see u were catching flack for the asphalt line but i dont believe u purposely read sumbodys battle and bit i think when u hear concrete thats one of the first things u wuld think of is asphalt. Now on the other hand learn from that because on here u have to be creative and think outside the box bring new angles to old ideas. as far as this line it wasnt to hardhitting but i see what u were trying to do. 2/5 Let me take over this make over, I'll even let you place your scars, All this effort yet I'm facin' tards, you'd think im givin away xanex the way im wastin' bars! this was decent nothing special good use of multis 2/5 Your family was too broke to get you circumcised, your life's been wrapped in lies, I'm slippin...this could've been your big day, but "concrete" can't capitalize. another decent line better then your first 2 lines a decent personal 3/5 I'm like the lord of the dark side, you more like princess leah, ima get ya when I see ya, I think you bit that verse, cuz although it was tight, i didn't see 1 concrete idea! this was ur best bar i felt this hit harder then all of the other lines first line was filler tho 3.5/5 My flows as tight as a braid, my tongue as sharp as a blade, and you should be afraid, The irony of your name, cuz you soft as a bitch and you don't ever get laid! this was a decent concept the line had potential but the way u worded didnt give it any sting we like to stab ppl in the neck and brutalize the opponent 2.5/5 12.5/25 overall this battle was actually a pretty good read and it was close i slept on chase cash but u didnt lay down u brought it and made this battle actually worth breaking down line for line. concrete ur almost there, just work on personals and nameflips u have a lot of potential to be really good on this site. chase cash ur one of the better noobs ive seen on here. work on cutting out the filler in your setup lines. i think ur best bar was prolly the concrete idea line and the capatalize line. crete i liked the cache line cash had slightly better disses overall but i think u edged it out with a better flow and ur haymakers were harder imo. Great battle guys i enjoyed breaking this down concrete gmv |
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:57pm |
1-1 thanks for votin Zinaii!!
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 16 September 2013 at 5:16am |
1-1 Still uppin on votes..
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DressToKill
Superior Member Joined: 27 June 2006 Location: Canada,New Brunswick Status: Offline Points: 6872 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 78-62-0 Form: LLWWWL |
Posted: 19 September 2013 at 12:58am |
1-1 upping
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The original comeback kid
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Chase Cash
Groupie Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 92 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-3-0 Form: WLWWWL |
Posted: 22 September 2013 at 7:29am |
Can we get some damn votes?? this battle has been open for like a month now lol
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