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Brotha Goose 
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 Topic: Quick Verse'n IntertalsPosted: 09 September 2013 at 6:34pm |
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Back alley-cat , so im New Jack.....gritty. Give'n pitiful kitty's a dribble of cat nip, Kill'n a dog quick turn'n Kibble to Bits. Teach'n poodles to SIT, they're learn'n it propper, Call me the walker, grip'n on multiple collars. Sicker than Clockwork take'n asylum at Danvers, Chime'n with twice the verse Ben strike'n a rapper. Strain'n brains, im cancer, drop'n more value then Yen do, Lines fly'n on prop planes, over ground crews....the HS2's. Pointed at mad hater's, scope'n with lasers from Leupold, Got aim? John Booth...got no range, teach'n you Gun Contol. Bullet Magic, I'm Oswald, window blank'n im BANG'n Grassy Knoll, Classy flow, floss'n subliminals, kill'n a Fagan im defend'n my castle. Make'n them walk a Green Mile to go visit with Miles Davis, I'm Billy the Kid, "I can make you famous!" Rent style and flo Avis. Turn'n names to shit synonyms, like racsist switch'n with Will Smith, Now try this, "not gas" but "came anus", leave'n you shit in semantics. Edited by Brotha Goose - 09 September 2013 at 6:40pm |
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Manc
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Posted: 09 September 2013 at 6:45pm |
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Loved this!! Some nice internals thrown in there. To be honest, I was more impressed with the way each line had a transition to the next, and how they all tied in. Wordplays poppin up ere there n everywhere lol Im a HUGE fan of plays that transfer a few lines past where they were first used - so a LOT of this hit the right spot for me.
Nice drop B |
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Cee-Jay Outlaw
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Posted: 09 September 2013 at 7:04pm |
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Impressed with this one BG! Loved the internal and transitions as Manc Said, some plays were happening right here!
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 09 September 2013 at 7:28pm |
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thanks fellas.....cat play with mice.....Goose play with food.....lol
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Posted: 09 September 2013 at 7:44pm |
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Another one?
Damn brotha you been getting these type drops here perfected That multiple collars thing was thuggish The yen do was funny An that whole flow was stylish |
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:12am |
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Thx partna! Glad you guys liked it...took a walk across the culture barrier
and found myself walking into a good ol' LI luv fest....lol |
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 12:56pm |
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per-umpa bum bump....
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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 7:02pm |
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Clever stuff right here, Goose. I see you showing how versatile you can be, that's always a plus.
Nice work on this, stay up. |
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 5:31am |
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Thx for yur time J5!
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 5:37am |
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"Got aim? John Booth...got no range, teach'n you Gun Contol."
Good shit here BG...definitely some swagger in this verse...your internals didnt come off forced...verse ran smoothly...had some decent concepts in this also...stay up my man
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Posted: 11 September 2013 at 6:27pm |
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Swag like a tomcat, snack'n on rat city, Back alley-cat , so im New Jack.....gritty. Give'n pitiful kitty's a dribble of cat nip, Kill'n a dog quick turn'n Kibble to Bits. Teach'n poodles to SIT, they're learn'n it propper, Call me the
walker, grip'n on multiple collars Keep swaggin on these niggas dayum!!!shit was flamez from beggining to end,i like where you place your syllabbles to give ur verses that fresh coast feel |
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Brotha Goose
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 12:57am |
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thx fellas gud looks
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Posted: 12 September 2013 at 1:27am |
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Some sick plays in this goose my fav would b between the grassy knolls bar n the four line stretch wit the kibbles n bits poodle dog walker play good shit u find a way to incorporate that cali swag in each drop good shit homie i dont think uve had a drop latly i havnt liked
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