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Scotty32
Site Owner Speaker of Wisdom & Truth Joined: 18 October 2003 Location: North West, UK Status: Offline Points: 10489 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-4-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 4:08pm |
5-3 to Cuba
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Cuba
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Unlucky man, was a good one
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The Law
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lol Old timers coming out of the word works..
Good battle Cuba. Close this up.
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J Sass
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well I thought the law had sum noce ones...towards tha end they got real crazy...um like that Cu Ball line and shyt like that....you was goin off....but I felt like cuba was more consistent thru his whole verse...
I think what took away from your verse Law, is that your lines where stretched but they really didn't invite me in....like if ou gone stretch ya lines like that you gotta make me feel invited to every word...and I drop verses at times where my lines can stretch to....but what you do is, throw them multies together better...lines like that.tha wordplay and punches shoulda been crazy as hell... but I think yall both did a good job... MVGT Cubes HG)Sass
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The Law
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if cube's is okay with that then it's 3-4.
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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Good battle here, battle of the month!
Tbh though I felt Cubas verse was just all personals with a couple good punches. The fuck off bar and Ben wade were my favorite in your verse but had a few weak hits Law I feel was consistent with his punches, liked your first two bars, the big game bar to was nice the ice c punch was cool to Mvgt law |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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The Law
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2-4 bump.
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The Law
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2-4 cuba
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Rapper T
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It felt like The Law wasnt being direct enough here with the core message of the verse overall in that there were some dope concepts and punches in there but some felt out of place e.g. The last line ending in Llewellyn didn't read as a killer punch, something about the little lamb look of the word or something, it felt like the whole verse needed to be tied together with one concept or something though it was a good read and a close battle
Cuba you're rhyme scheme was pretty sweet throughout your verse I like it that in a lot of your third lines you have a multi for the end of the first and second iykwim. Direct and murderous lyrics in your battle made it a more interesting read and your punches felt more ruthless and direct MVGT Cuba |
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The Law
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2-3 cuba
up..
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dalinquent
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not voting cause I havent been around long enough to get most of the personals but I wan say props to both... dope battle... uppin
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INK.
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The whole time you dick rode me, never meant we wouldn't be squaring it off
So I must be 'castro', the way "Cuba" was acting so scared of The Law Ending on Self hype isn't a good thing to do against a top tier battler bud. Cause technically he is better than u on site statistics tbh.. squaring it off sounds forced for multi/flow sake kinda expected this flip tbh could've done better with it. Use the embargo trade they have with the usa or something. And the only way he has a chance to win a battle is flipping dudes in his keys But I'll wear em out until cuba's "Flip-Flops are buried" and I ain't talking shoes at the beach ehh not feelin the flip flop..creative but forced here. Like the set up better than the punch that was delivered. Good personal just not executed nice enough. this shouldve been one of your haymakers bro! This feeding issue is the only way your texts can win with quick plays He's Bitchmade! More 'Flipped-out' than a van of angry mexicans with switchblades ur just recycling the same joint again. SHould've came with a new personal here. Not feelin this one either bro. seems like u don't have any good flips to use for him. and Since He got crushed by dress and started whining through the views of a cradle The Champ!!.. he' used to be labeled, so he tried to "team up" and move through the tables But "Point Blank" still proved to be "FATAL"!!(his old tag partner) This is really choppy..stretched too..this was cool though nice shot just filler in here and wording issues doesn't read in a natural manner. I came to knock him out and I'll put him in a Coma to prove it Leave "Cube more puzzled" than Soma and Rubik's this was a good one no complaints good shit I got the "punches" that would Seize your lines and induce sleep From so many "hits" Cuba's 'mind' will end up like Bruce Lee's (avy) nah...u could've really flip this joint into a movie title of his or something this seemed like u didn't know how to flip this into a proper haymaker. He Bitched and moaned when losing his title.. Yet, was ignoring his reply and shit plays Then won't battle unless he has the advantage, pst… Your just a glorified Big Game nah this is a statement...theres no real sting for me here..tbh ur set up is the punchline should've swapped this bar around idk what it is but ur lacking the wording to make these really hit hard man. It's a Big Shame, That you have no originality. We all have seen this bastard tactics and "Cube's would never stop flipping" unless it's Gymnastics Practice cool carry that multi scheme over nice transition..Alright dude this is gettin out of hand with reusing the SAME PERSONAL.. But I'm still gonna 'light ya bars up' like pool hall tops and at the "breaking point' we still wouldn't see Cu Balls' Drop (Cue) NICE no complaints You came with no 'pressure' so I see what this Goofball Rocks Couldn't "pack anything behind his punches" at a U-Haul Shop ehhh forced imo...u didn't set up u-haul at all tbh...u just threw it in there randomly..set up didn't really set this up for me tbh..could've used a moved down from a higher plain to a sad state! <---now u haul play works "Flip" the switch…. Cube.. Gonna Freeze up in his syllable game As he' "Bytes the Dust" and gets stuck in this 'Digital Frame' (Bites) alright nothing harsh lands tho It's the winter time, so with colds hands he couldn't throw any Visual Flames Cause I came to "Ice C" quicker than his Original Name alright cool I'm Ruthless with a Rude Temper, I'm a Cube Bender That will leave "-O- In A Wake" with Mourning Crew Members (Owen, Morning) alright cool see u buildin up momentum now Cause from the start of this verse, within seconds I was wrecking this felon and left "Cu dead in the collision" like Desmond Llewelyn (Q) not bad here cool I throw cancer at vogue chancers, you've no answer to generate This was ok..personal flip on an old loss this isn't heavy but lands. As for Vis? That bromance'll never fade so I smash an imposter So when we're saying Fuck Off Law, son, we ain't ranking ya roster lol this was nice flip on his crew... And while we're on that team shit, Law's already been a target of mine... Yeah, he got knocked the fuck out last time we were Partners in Rhyme ehh this could've and should've been flipped better bub. but this is alright. nothing heavy more of a jab tbh Then Guy laid you out!! I ain't even gotta tarnish this failure Your fortune's ran out...not even the Art's gonna save ya!! lol ok...this was aiight u fucks an ur hyper links You've built ya rep off cheap wins against pathetic opponents So I guess this here is a shot of "taste your own medicine" dosage this was choppy on ur punch...meh this ehh a reach Rustling his act, the way I out-law like the guy is Ben Wade* NICE So he'll diss me for quick plays?! He's obviously stupid... Reading that bullshit I don't know why we bothered to do this... no wtf this isnt a punch lmao I'm robbing him ruthless, smashing his slack imitation Till he's "what was I thinking" like that Clash for the Cash invitation* This was ehh...u need to make punches count bud.. For years I been brutual, bombing guys senseless So I'll take 100 from the Law like a quadruple homicide sentence this isn't really tough bro.. The way I bridge tracks is dangerous, my mechanisms squash fakes NAH...statement This ain't Braveheart to Bruce, flex my weapons when I'm thrashing EHH ur kinda strengthening his flips... Need I resort to thug shit, screaming "I'LL CON-TORT THE DUMB BITCH!!" Coz the Law ain't been appealing since the fucking courts of justice!! NICE I don't doubt I'm superior since I've spoken my shots While you've been in two minds like your last open mic drop ehh..lol u need to make these into haymakers.. Flex a wrecking ball of premise, end a fraud with relish The way I'm laying down the law harder than a senator or sheriff I'm a fucking firing squad, with a line I'm expiring them all So with one sentence my nameflips send this guy to the WALL* cool SO The Law used a crutch which annoyed the shit out of me.. "he only flips others lines!" i get it..but u need to be more creative, u relied too much on the same personal that really hurt u in my eyes and shows me u need to work on expanding on punchlines. U had some punches that were actually statements bud.. Cuba U did alot of stating than actual punching wordplay isn't a punchline. I use wordplay in my punches to strenghten the sting. Wordplay its self IS NOT A PUNCHLINE lol..u had more angles different flips which was refreshing after reading the law use the same personal flip through and through... V/ cuba by a hair...fresher angles less of a crutch too me. Both did good, glad to see this happen love to see it again with law not relying on the same personal |
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The Law
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2-2
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Rameez
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THE LAW
His name is Owen- His original name on here was IceC The whole time you dick rode me, never meant we wouldn't be squaring it off So I must be 'castro', the way "Cuba" was acting so scared of The Law\ the castro punches been played out.. but still a bit of new concept here.. it was cool play And the only way he has a chance to win a battle is flipping dudes in his keys But I'll wear em out until cuba's "Flip-Flops are buried" and I ain't talking shoes at the beach I see the wordplay here.. the only problem was the personal wasn't executed properly, so punch didn't land for me This feeding issue is the only way your texts can win with quick plays He's Bitchmade! More 'Flipped-out' than a van of angry mexicans with switchblades eh too fillerish and Since He got crushed by dress and started whining through the views of a cradle The Champ!!.. he' used to be labeled, so he tried to "team up" and move through the tables But "Point Blank" still proved to be "FATAL"!!(his old tag partner) its like you're dissing PB more than Cuba.. weak punch... I came to knock him out and I'll put him in a Coma to prove it Leave "Cube more puzzled" than Soma and Rubik's played I got the "punches" that would Seize your lines and induce sleep From so many "hits" Cuba's 'mind' will end up like Bruce Lee's (avy) that avy isn't Bruce lee it's from legendary assassin movie. He Bitched and moaned when losing his title.. Yet, was ignoring his reply and shit plays Then won't battle unless he has the advantage, pst… Your just a glorified Big Game the only problem here u had was.. you're setup is better than your punchline.. you should done it the other way around.. and the punchline is so weak it didn't land.. It's a Big Shame, That you have no originality. We all have seen this bastard tactics
But I'm still gonna 'light ya bars up' like pool hall tops and at the "breaking point' we still wouldn't see Cu Balls' Drop (Cue) You came with no 'pressure' so I see what this Goofball Rocks Couldn't "pack anything behind his punches" at a U-Haul Shop this was decent plays nothing hard here in these 2 bars. seemed too indirect.. the nameplay is just too weak for me "Flip" the switch…. Cube.. Gonna Freeze up in his syllable game As he' "Bytes the Dust" and gets stuck in this 'Digital Frame' (Bites) not landing It's the winter time, so with colds hands he couldn't throw any Visual Flames Cause I came to "Ice C" quicker than his Original Name this was cool play here.. had a punch there I'm Ruthless with a Rude Temper, I'm a Cube Bender That will leave "-O- In A Wake" with Mourning Crew Members (Owen, Morning) Cause from the start of this verse, within seconds I was wrecking this felon and left "Cu dead in the collision" like Desmond Llewelyn (Q) weak punch here... just the play was good but delivery didn't land hard enough for me CUBA I throw cancer at vogue chancers, you've no answer to generate ???did he lost from renegade before? that's first thing I think when I read this..
this had punch but weak... good personal punch not the best choice of choosing personal.. kinda weak for me.. coz it was general conversation good play here. but punch was way too decent... good punch here.. nicely done with references ok, not landing hard enough weak hit this didn't land for me.. not feeling the delivery ok a bit better.. average hit.. I can't read the entire article or listen to entire story for one punch concept.. it's annoying for voters.. and it's bit too generic for me.. this was a good flip punch.. this was good punch here.. lol this was funny. punch was average cool concept, delivery was average.. clever nameplay here.. I liked the closer.. ended nicely here Overall: Law: one of the biggest mistake I seen is that your personal are in setup lines, instead they suppose to be in punchline.. some of the punches aren't too direct and they tend to be more in generic form.. Cuba: I don't see you battle quite often, you had some nice punches and I left enough feed after each bar where you went wrong.. As a result this seems like one sided battle, cuba had more and better punches than law. Vote: CUBA |
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Zinaii
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Ima drop a vote im on a touchscreen laptops broke it wont b as long as the othee votes but ill try to get my point across
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The Law
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They are sleeping on us cube.
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The Law
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ight cool.
2-1. Get the votes rolling.
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Point Blank
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Fixed your link Cuba. Dope battle
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The Law
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That makes this 2-1.
Bump for the votes and for a mod to fix his link.
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Cuba
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Fucks sakes, the one time I drop a punch that relies exclusively on the link and the link doesn't work...
http://news.stv.tv/east-central/272353-worker-who-died-after-falling-from-the-forth-rail-bridge-should-never-have-been-on-walkway/ Could a mod change the 'forth loss' link to the one above? Should work now... & I'm including the tag loss as the third defeat, just to be clear... |
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