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    Posted: 18 December 2013 at 4:20am
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Check
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 18 December 2013 at 4:20pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 December 2013 at 10:20am
Mine is done wreck, will drop after you
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 19 December 2013 at 5:08pm
Homey you called me out, drop whenever you're ready.  lol Trust me I see no reason for me to no show against you. I'll do my verse up shortly. 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 9:55am
◇Another go first bitch◇


Not even a veteran test, I'm still too much for Wreck, but nevertheLess,
Im better nd fresh, what's a word for 'smashin wreck'? Get the thesaurus. (The 'Saurus')

I'm wild in sex, he record me fuckin his girl like, 'Come on what's next?'
Fuck on the desk! He take notes, jack off, and name the vid P90-REX. (Wreck's)

I SPLIT NECKS! Throwin jabs dont mean you FIGHTIN TO WIN WRECK,
I spin text, cause ball sacks the only 'sighting' ya 'CHIN CHECK'.

He got a weak ass start, Wreck only battled newbies and 'played it smart',
Then got a fleet of heart, tried to groove like a painter, but got BEAT BY ART.

I been smarter, if that's a crime, this is more or Less, a MAN SLAUGHTER,
I spit sharper, sorry Wreck but these "!" don't make ya punches hit harder...




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1 - A thesaurus is used to find another word for the same meaning / the 'Saurus
2 - Instead of a 'check' he uses 'chin check' in most of his battles
3 - self expl
4 - he always puttin exclamations on the end of his lines

Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 10:07am
Typo on expos...

1 - A thesaurus is used to find another word for the same meaning / the 'Saurus
2 - This site often refers to me as a dinosaur hence, -rex, P90X is a popular workout video in US
3 - Instead of a 'check' he uses 'chin check' in most of his battles
4 - self expl
5 - he always puttin exclamations on the end of his lines
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 8:51pm

SMFH... pussy you're done.... You called me out when I was gone from the site and I'm the bitch?? Fuck outta here.... say good night kiddo.

EXPLANATIONS...


1- Nigga you battled arthur too but you got ko'd...Chris Bosh used to play for the toronto rapters... then left to go play for the miami heat with lebron james... lebrons nick name is king james

2- his sig.. "allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin"... ya punches basic son... fuck outta hear with those nursery rhymes

3- flo offed...dead...flow off... if your flows off you can't stay on a beat...

4- brush in ya mouth/brushing ya mouth... bullets entering his mouth...floss from my teeth..after i ate him... dental floss...brushing... hygiene... 

5- http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/wreckless_topic28825.html

In his original post he waited till I was gone from the site to call me out then claimed I ducked him... Chip Kelly was the head Coach of the college team the Oregan Ducks, but left after controversy with the team to coach the Philadelphia Eagles in the nfl 


Now that that's out of the way.... time to die lil nigga.


Get smoked n I spark ya, at least I got a vote against Arthur! How you gonna explain this lost?
Dispatch geeks it would seem! My town? This "raptor'll catch heat from this king" like Chris Bosh!

Based on ya "rhymes n lessons, Your childish!" I'm priming weapons, cinders spark n reach ya!
Look pussy, I'm erasing minds! This kid spit the most "basic rhymes" like a kindergarten teacher!

Ya heaviest done! Challenge me? It's Russian roulette wit the deadliest guns! So play n get reaped!
Homey, I slay with the heat! My tools will leave "Flo offed" like you couldn't stay on a beat!

Brought a K to compete! Start busting him now n bullets "brush in ya mouth!" My team ends him!
My power eclipse! Wreck "devour this bitch," then "pick floss from my teeth" like hygiene cleansing!

Wreck "hiding from floss?" Na! My lyrics sharp, blades drive in you boss! My scripts heavy!
Murdered and finished, all ya "words are diminished!" I'm done with this "duck talk" like Chip Kelly!




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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 9:32pm
Flo opener flowed good then it just ended awkward wit tthesaurus. Idk if u had a diff pronunciation in mind or what but saying it the regular way it doesnt work. Second bar was coo i was digging it. U set it up good and threw a name flip in the second. Good. third bar wasnt good i dont really like the gay plays cuz theyte overly used...and using sighting ya chin check was kinda awkward. Fourth bar ok coo personal shows u did sumhomework on him. Closer was decent shot over all a decent verse. Imo i would work on inners and multis and more complexity. U got concepts but they dont slways hit as hard as they could because of the wording. U gone say im hating but im really just givinf my opinion. so please dont start with the hate vote shit.


Wreck nice concept in the opener that was slick how u tied that together. Second bar concept pretty basic but the use of multis carried the ounch all the way through. Third bar i was digging coo name flip and i havejt seen it used against him. Fourth bar was decent ive seen alot of floss plays and this one wasnt spectafular but it was a decent shot nonetheless. Closer made me lol u ended here on a good note.

Wreck gets this he was the more seasoned writer. Floss keep working and writing get that wording down to carry those concepts through and ul b a problem.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 9:35pm
flossaurus: My favorite verses where bar 1 & the 4th line
i liked ur word play with the thesaurus    



MVGT wreckless for better word play: "duck talk" Chip keelly, Cris bosh (ect) flow and stronger punches ( bar 1 & 5)  i loved the last line especially

you both did good :D 


 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 December 2013 at 11:44pm
word that's 2-0... upping for ko 


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2013 at 2:15pm
Ya wreck had that...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2013 at 2:47pm
^ need to break it down.... the mods won't accept that vote and neither would floss, and frankly I wouldn't.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2013 at 3:15pm
Wrecks lines and rhymes wer alot tighter and streamlined.he stayed in topic wer i kinda felt like other dudes was prewritten.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 December 2013 at 7:22pm
I think Wreck won because he used great punchlines, great flow, alot of complexity that makes it sound sweet. Flawsauras or how ever u say his name was good but his flow was off and he didnt have as much great punchlines and complexity than wrecks. basicaly his rhymes were mostly simple.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 9:28am
↑↑↑ Fuck all them votes
Allow me to retort, you cowards is just learnin the shit we been teachin
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 10:09am
Floss bar 2 and 5 were nice. The opener imo was more self hype than a punch bar 3 and 4 were decent attempts but nothing hard hitting

Wreck bar 1 was sick I liked it. Bar 2 3 and 4 were ok but seemed like some played concepts maybe a better flipto make more eeffective bar 5 was nice to.

Overall I gotta say wreck got this only because floss's first bar was pretty much self hyped and wreck was consistant enough to hold ya off good cloae battle

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 10:57am
Is it done?
Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 12:25pm
That's up to floss... its 4-0 me with all votes but I know like masta G's vote is pretty shitty... so that would make it 3-0 me if the other votes stand. Up to him I guess what stands.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 11:16pm
wreckless wins better play on words, smoother rhyme schemes & cleaner wording. Saurus was kind of filler/statement plagued imo, would be up to battle either of you folks. 16-20 lines, but yeah wreckless just was much more of a stronger punch and very polished. This was onesided imo.

v/ Wreck
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 December 2013 at 11:52pm
Good shit.... I believe that should be a wrap... thats 5-0... some of the votes were questionable at best which I don't mind disallowing them but INK's Zinaii's and J Scott's should be fine. Up to you, otherwise thats a KO. Mods check votes and close if all is good? 


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