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Titu
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Topic: [horrorcore] Titu -vs- Anonymous lyrics Posted: 08 January 2014 at 7:07pm |
10 lines horrorcore. Due in a day. All fair votes count. House rules.
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Anonymous lyrics
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Posted: 10 January 2014 at 4:25am |
Sneak around ya window looking in while you sleepin'/ im about to break in but the alarm starts screechin'/ Jump behind the couch/ got yo ass stampeding/
I grab you from behind/ with my knife in my left hand/ slit your fucking head/ wearin it like a headband/ I grab a fucking seat/ push you down into it/ took a piece of ya brain then I made ya chew it/
Ripped off your fucking fingers then I fucking glued it/ I started up!/ the damn skillet/ im bout to cook it/ I grabbed the damn camera imma save the footage/
I look at your damned face as the shit is poppin/ I Grabbed your fucking hand then I start the fucking choppin/ Then I saved some for ya fam/ yea they in the boxes/
/ fuck with me fuck with the enemy/ im a entity/ all signs of enmity/ im medically terribly/ hilariously / addicted to Hennessey/ im endlessly /chopping ya to pieces its my fucking weaponry
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When the darkness holds two white eyes, the anonymous has risen
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Titu
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Posted: 10 January 2014 at 8:34am |
Aue- forgot about it. Check
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 1:39pm |
I told you several times before,Kid, you betta watch your mouth, Now watch me punish you for being the kidΒ who called me out,
Nailed yo palms to the stretcher,rub yo eyes till they rough, Chop yo fingers one by one and stick them up in yo butt, Ill keep on stabbing yo eyeballs till they bounce outta yo skull, And later fill those empty spaces with chilli sauces and mud, Corrode yo teeth with the crusher,Β rub yo tongue with the Β tar, And When yo mouth fills the blood, ill make you swallow some salts, Dip yo body in alcohol,till it gets fluffy and soft, Then match yo existence, burn yo corps right on the spot,
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 10:25pm |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 17 January 2014 at 12:49am |
Smh
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 8:41am |
Anonymous, the //////// was OTT, focus more on getting the rules right, it took imagination to try to see 10 lines in your written here. Your fuck words were effective in some places but a little excessive and it came off as filler in that other words could have made it more horrorcore whether with multis or less 'hilariously' words. I liked some of your story telling going on though
Titu the size of your verse really let it down, it was compactly gruesome but it was nearly a close battle cos you only put up a wicked wing when I was keen to read a zinger burger iykwim, would have liked to see some more thought out multis and descriptors going on but the imagery in yours felt more horrific and easier to visualize
MVGT Titu
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Titu
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Posted: 22 January 2014 at 8:57am |
Thanks rapper. And i couldnt have more than 10 lines in a 10 lines battle. Haha
1-0 T
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 24 January 2014 at 3:20pm |
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 1:51am |
Anon: A bit simple if I'm honest...you cut off this, made him eat that, and then your last line/bar/run-on setence was a complete self-hype of how crazy you were (really not relevant IMO for this type of battle)...You gotta focus more on painting a gory scene or getting really sick with the situation...Cutting off fingers is simple, gotta take it to the next level in horrorcore (like peeling off the nails of the fingers and sticking it in their eyeballs..i don't know lmao, anything different)...
Titu: I wasn't much of a fan of this one, seen much better from you...granted it was only 10 lines and you wasted the first two IMO...The gruesomeness was a bit lamely worded "stick them up in yo butt" lmao...Still, I thought you attempted to be a bit more descriptive and tried to think of different sick shit...Plus, the structure helped you I think as well.
V/Titu
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Posted: 25 January 2014 at 9:04pm |
Thanks bro... Really appreciate yo feed and tge vote. 1-0 T
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 26 January 2014 at 9:48pm |
2-0 T
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Titu
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Posted: 28 January 2014 at 12:33pm |
Vote peeps
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Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.
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Posted: 04 February 2014 at 7:56pm |
3-0 Titu - as the other verse was 1) fucked on line limit and 2) as scary as cheese.
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"Sicker Than Thou"
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