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    Posted: 10 February 2014 at 1:22pm

https://soundcloud.com/user848796520/vstituaddicted
was vs Tits but the battle got scrapped
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I liked your flow and thought a lot of your inflections were really cool. Thought you were hard to understand at times. Maybe you were too quiet compared to the music, or maybe it was a side effect of the flow and delivery (which I liked). 

Good shit.
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I can tell you can ride a beat... But turn the track down a bit and you're vocals up a tad and you're golden overall nice hit!
                     
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote key3 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2014 at 2:49am
i like your style bro whats your email? i'll send some beats
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Titu Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 11 February 2014 at 8:55am
First of all, i apologise for not getting my audio up. Was crazy busy lately and it wasnt expected or otherwise i wouldnt set up a battle. Im extremely sorry, brother.

Coming to the audio, very impressive. Beat was sick as fuck... And your flow stayed real tight.

As for constructive feedback, i think you should raise the vocals volume a bit... But it was still good.
Can you pm me lyrics as few words were hard to understand but that was just me and my accent..lol.
Overall, it was a real tight shit. And im following you on soundcloud now...
And yo wassup with this beat? It was Very catchy. Did you make it?
Fuck That Fat smelly cunt Donald Trump, a racist asshole who is fucked in the head.

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thanks ppl. Yeah il throw the lyrics up when I get home, on the vocal levels it seems fine but I guess we all listen on diff devices I use headphones so don't dealt know what it sounds lime out of speakers if I still have all the files il crank it up a bit. Ty for taking the time proops
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i cut holes in my wrists just to suck the poisen out
rub that powdery ointment all round my mouth
till my lips are numb, this elixers fun
itll finish a little quiker now
if i need to simmer down, i snap a whole branch off
an lance off half a cigar top, but i still cant stop
so ill scribble round till the pen melts 
and the mess becomes letters, or they send help
they think im fucked up, i think im open minded
iv never been offered a drug an not tried it
or liked it, rhymes are the same for me
so i pace i the street with the rest of vagrant fiends
collecting coppers hoping to pay for peace
i pray for a new line or a weighty key
i wreak of my remody, with my yellowy teeth
cause im readily throwin up 
on these on these mellowy beats
i developed these steez by enveloping heat
sittin in the underpasses
 for shelter from breeze
the elemental dissapointment, 
rages an screams
like i gave a fuck i play a paper drum, 
and i busk for jus enuff to stuff my nut 
with a new track-marks on my eyelids
burnin scripts with the flames from my lighters 
cause writtens burn brighter
when they shine like mine does
ill make a map of midas's laybrinth with
a post it note an kilo of mind dust
an use it to skin up amazing spliff an rhyme stuff
rap thats my drug, if you think thats strange
i guess you kind of right cuz
how the fuck did i get so addicted to this mic?


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Yur flow is soooo fuckin smooth cuzzo....seriously....quit bullshit'n and make sum moves
Yur sick as fuck bro
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cheeersss goooose ty
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Lol @ open minded line...like how you switched it up to talk about rhyming, standard, to be expected really quality wordplay from that point onwards.

I like how you don't shy away from your accent but equally you don't overplay it like some of those rude boiz...you're cutting a pretty cool little niche there. Would like to see you get a bit more emotion / aggression into one of your tracks though...once you get that then you can get a bit more 'rise and fall' in there rather than sitting back on apt he sidelines like you do a little bit at the moment

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I could tell the flows good, delivery seem on, lyrics are dope but vocals definitely need to be higher you if your having lots of trouble with the mixing just send your acapella and beat to ophwhite203@gmail.com and then pm me. I'll mix it.
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safeee ill def get at you on my next one man. 
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NO SHIT THIS IS LIKE LISTENING TO A BRITISH NAS!!!!!! OLD NAS!!!! this was sick FO....
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like the flow you used for this one, fits the title of "Addicted". a nice juxtaposition of a mellow beat but quite explicitly theme lyrics.

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Originally posted by fuckoff fuckoff wrote:


https://soundcloud.com/user848796520/vstituaddicted
was vs Tits but the battle got scrapped


why the fuck aint you on BET nigga?!?!?!?!?!


god damn!!!!!!!!

this is my nigga right here!!!!

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This was dope man, chilled as fuck. I love how you used the topic of addiction with a drug theme but ended it with you being addicted to rapping. I agree that your mic should be a bit louder but I'm glad you've got it sorted now cos you sound a lot clearer and easier to understand. Keep em comin
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good shit man... enjoyed it
U already know...
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This is dope man, production aint all that but you got skills for real, I love the "lazy" flow style, sounds sooooo fuckin cool. Holla at me if you ever wanna collab, north meets south sorta tings ;)
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Gud shit man....
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