Open Mic: Keyn some shieeeeet
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    Posted: 27 February 2014 at 12:11pm
Imma hit the site with i quick key
But i godda make it a guicky
I only got 15 min to next class
So i need to get off my Ass

Rode in this game on a Donkey
Talking like a race conduzed money
And somhow got a pass
To write and talk with all this Sass

I came in this game to get honey
And no, that's not a clever word for money
WonnaBES that make 2 fiffties clash
Get a dolla with a penny mass
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Form: WWWWWW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote U.N.L.M. Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 February 2014 at 8:14pm
Yea, tbh this is the type of thing you jot down before your "next class" but don't post here...There's really nothing to feed...Short and simple...I'd suggest working on something more complicated and posting it here...Then, we could give you some more constructive feed...
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Form: WWWWWW 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Exoduzt Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 27 February 2014 at 8:48pm
i hate reading keys.  They have no substance.  Seriously why would we want to read something you put no time and effort into.  Sorry to be so blunt about it but damn.  take ya time and write something that the reader would actually be interested in. 

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Form: NL 		Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote MC4 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 28 February 2014 at 1:55am
You have a good sense of humor, but you gotta work on your flow
I think a 'AAAA' 'BBBB' rhyming pattern would work better for you than 'AA' 'BB' Wink
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