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    Posted: 12 April 2014 at 12:45pm
"Impossible is a word to be found only in the dictionary of fools"- Napoleon Bonaparte


It's all enmity, behind me is a crowd of men with impure energies
From the mighty blade of my sword to the gallows I slay my enemies
The guillotine heads them off to the world where dwells the kennedys
Well skeletons hang in the dungeon of those charged like a set of batteries
It's constant in combat that the tip of my sword slashes a couple of arteries
As I ascend in power, not a thing can pull me down, not even gravity
Right beside of me where my queen be, in honey combs she placed my heir
It's a joyous face I bare when my people respect and praise my chair
I was never soft or raised to fear, a traitor with swords drawn is erased from here
Torture for Punishment, no option of abolishment, they share the taste of tears
Live by the sword and die by the sword, what's a pen in the battle field?
Ink's for the novice, cowards fight from an office but still get many killed
I dine of many uncanny meals, food for thought to the starving
A plate of wisdom and knowledge if it's the mind you're depriving
Just try surviving when the walls of the castle have been breached
And an assassin starts attacking but your sword of defense is out of reach
Not a chess game but it proves in action, the outcome of an assassination
is the death of all his people, because to kill a king is to kill a nation.



"A king should die on his feet"- Louis XVIII
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote nomedic Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 13 April 2014 at 1:51am
Yo boss lol you made your own version of trizz and mancs collab and to be honest it was awesome fam this bar was one i liked alot

" Right beside of me where my queen be, in honey combs she placed my heir It's a joyous face I bare when my people respect and praise my chair"

Word play was nice

"I dine of many uncanny meals, food for thought to the starving A plate of wisdom and knowledge if it's the mind you're depriving"

Solid concept this bar caught my eye as well

"Not a chess game but it proves in action, the outcome of an assassination is the death of all his people, because to kill a king is to kill a nation."

Closer was proverbial and factual nice shit brethren dope piece over all instead of two kingz u entitled it uno king dont know if its a diss but it definately was hot

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It aint a diss lol, but Thanx for the feed bro, stay up.
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