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The Law 
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 Topic: Crew OM FeedbackPosted: 10 July 2014 at 4:09pm |
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There has been so much going on in the OM that pieces are bound to miss feedback. I thought we should have this in the crew forum though. Basically just post up your OMs when you drop them so the crew knows about them firsthand and doesn't miss them in the OM madness.
Even if we aren't getting feedback from the other members on the site, crew on crew feedback is definitely something we need to have so post them up and whatever members haven't read or left feedback on the drops. I and I am sure the rest of you will encourage the crew to do so. This goes for audio as well.
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Scotty32
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 4:28pm |
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 4:40pm |
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Lol who would have known scotty could actually write
 . You should write more. and I didn't know you were a part of VM lol.
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Scotty32
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 4:57pm |
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As someone once said, "I'm member of all but a member of none" or something like that.
Thanks for the feed, much appreciated. *edit* I know I'm a sick ass writer if not the best, but I'm not quite sure it deserved 4 stars compared to everyone else. |
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 6:13pm |
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Once I drop vs. nomedic I'm gonna do a round of feed, I missed a lot while I was away for a week so my bad on that. I might even feed yours Scotty, maybe we should have a rematch one day
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 7:00pm |
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scottys VM for life, i heard he got a tattoo and everything
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 7:12pm |
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Yea, Scotty is in awe of me and any crew I lead as I somehow KO'd him once which is probably my greatest achievement on LA
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 8:35pm |
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There was a tournament battle straight after the regular battle Point.
I remember you tellin me on MSN how you'd definitely lost after I dropped, yet KO'd me
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Posted: 10 July 2014 at 9:06pm |
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Posted: 12 July 2014 at 12:33am |
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I've fed a few but I'm tired so I'll feed a lot more of them tomorrow (even yours scotty!)
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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 8:28pm |
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yo, I conjure images of fire and flames
i'm that haze when ya visions filled with violence'n rage light up the stage, i'm the anger in a man on a mic after a fight, i'm the blood that's on the haft of the knife I'm the thrust in lusty husbands as their bangin their wife And the roughest hookers' fuckin to the flash of my light I'm the hate from funda-'mentals' at the passion of christ I'm the "see me" from ya teacher when ya facts wasn't right I'm the lacking of ya balance when ya reeling in debt i'm the blinding pain ya feeling when a beating connects I am the nation that brought us Yao'n we were blessed with many Dreams On ya colour wheel I sit across from secondary Green I'm that nasty 'angin' twat shit when ya mam's on the rag And the colour of the footie shirts that anger my dad I'm the charging of the bull, a blown cape and an ole I'm the flushing of the skin of a cold face on a snow day starting flag in the starter's hand that's waved at the boat race The sufferer of road rage as he claims that he won't wait The light before his eyes that holds his vehicle in park The pyrotechnics at a Maiden show for Fear of The Dark I'm the cloak upon the shoulders of a king with great wisdom And the light depicting standby on a VHS system Along with purple I'm the sweet that all the kids wanna eat And the velvet on a 60's cinema seat?....that's me Ayo, I'm the rawest vet, Y'all distraught but it's my calling, and jaw is set I could smash you up and leave you on the floor instead But I know you got the colour there they call me *SHHHH*
This is the lyrics from my topical against FO that I'm about to record in a few mins, won't be posting the lyrics for feed so just wanted feed from crew members (though I won't be changing anything, just droppin it quickly before I log to record) |
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Posted: 14 July 2014 at 11:20pm |
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http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/chain-freeverse-lyrics_topic33325.html
And also this, a verse I'm spittin tomorrow over a chain beat, a bit of a monster but just playin with flows and licks.
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 12:55am |
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@SS Just read the first verse. Shit was pretty tight. Im going to go out on a limb and say that the top was "I am the color red". Assuming that is true, this was a pretty fucking creative way to attack it. From a content perspective, it lacked any real emotional connections (except the few passing references that triggered nastalgia.) But concidering its for an audio battle, Im sure you can compensate with a more emotional delivery. Packed with imagery. Literally. Literally a rollercoaster of visuals. Great job in that reguard. As always, the flow was there. You can always distinguish a polished rapper by that notion. A very solid verse bro.
Ill get to the other a bit later. Thanks for feeding my drop earlier, too. |
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 2:35am |
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and yeah mine was a rather blatent "I am the colour red" haha, I struggled with this one, and not having time to record stressed me out, but i like the way I spit it. VM fuckin killin the audio he fuckoff's a monster.
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 8:49am |
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Yea I listened to that audio when it dropped and this line made me laugh
Along with purple I'm the sweet that all the kids wanna eat So true haha. Dope battle, I couldn't call it |
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 1:48pm |
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In about 6 months when it's been voted we'll see I guess haha.
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 1:52pm |
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I'll get round to it soon enough. I'm off now until Thursday night. Going to graduate from university brb
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 1:53pm |
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Haha you gonna throw your cap in the air 90's movie style?
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 1:57pm |
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Yea apparently it's tradition and we have to for a group photo, I better fucking find it again amidst the 200 other caps though otherwise I ain't getting my deposit back. £40 to rent or £200 to buy #fuckoff
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Posted: 15 July 2014 at 2:13pm |
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fuck me 200 squids for a square hat...i'm in the wrong business. lol
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