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XanexBars
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Posted: 02 August 2014 at 4:57am |
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This going to be quick tho, your spits blow, fuck your raps....nympho..
Bullets leave your cheeks pushed in like a dimple! / Quick diss, keep it simple - rip shit n' stay basic.. The way I *burn nig* got me feeling like a racists / Fuck it, make it public when I'm ripping on nigma.. Only way you see *I* is when you getting a *stigma* / (I=Eye) X'll even X your kiss bruh, fall back n you can live boy.. Xanex will make you chill, you ain't ready for the big boys! / |
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XanexBars
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That's what you get for leaving some whack ass feedback! People put time and effort into their drops so have some respect bro!
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Nigma
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im sorry that i hurt your feelings
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The Law
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He said it, and he meant it. High Five!! |
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levy420
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Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ransom
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Well well well.... Probably be really easy to bate this one into a battle an execute him... nice bars though... better step up your replies nigma lol
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~Lyrical Death Dealer~
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nigerchu
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Aight, aight, cool bars in there. 1 or 2 made laugh.
LOL at Nigma
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Ghul
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The second coming of the Ransom/iLL beef? I hope so!! Good diss you had some nasty aggression and good punchlines
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XanexBars
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Thanks for all the feedback people!
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Trizzy Tre
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This was pretty cool, you had some nice punches and we'll rounded but it should've been longer. Dropping a 4 bar diss is kind of a waste IMO. Although what you dropped was good, more material I feel was needed.
Keep active here man. |
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XanexBars
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Anyone seen Nigma? Lol
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daydizzle89
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Ouch, I hope Mr nigma can put out lol
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XLNC
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He moves like A vaMpire on the hunt...slithers but remaIns silent....aNd then....BOOM...feaR the bow of the silent Archer....lol he must be getting himself A drink....
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iLL ScriptureZ
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I gotta be quite honest, idk if all if you are reading the same bars I am. Do we just say anything is hot anymore? Seems like expectations in quality have plummeted dramatically. Now that is not to say this is piss poor but really is it on any respectable level? Where's the honesty anymore. Moving forward. I can tell you have the general grasp at text writing and battling. Also, from reading other posts you may be an old vet that came back to the scene recently. I felt your burn Nig like was your best, but it could've been executed better. the I/Eye shot was plain whack. Can't even front on that. Closer wasn't good either and you had a weak opener. That's honest, take it or leave it. I refuse to boost egos or give dap to shit I don't deem worthy. With that said, everyone has their own opinion. Keep writing
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Trizzy Tre
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Wow, you're really upset over this. Odd. It reminds me exactly of...........nah forget it. lol smh |
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nigerchu
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lol aight ^^ I agree with iLL and I think I said that in my feed. This wasn't great but it wasn't bad.
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spume corrupt
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Really? I don't think he would hide from this, shitt was average at best Props on sticking up for yourself though Best advice would be to stay cool in your early days |
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Upset about what Tre? Not every verse on here is hot. Guess your standards are lower than mine
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Exoduzt
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I gotta agree with Ill Scripts on this one...do we just say everything is dope to boost our ego's? I mean I want real feedback so I know what to do different so I can improve as a writer. If people just lied and said everything was hot or dope how would anyone ever improve?
I feel this drop wasnt very good at all...it was way too short and just too basic. Nothing really stood out to me. I'm not hating on you at all XB. You do have potential. But im not gonna lie either. Just keep writing and keep trying yo improve...think outside the box
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Jay Homicide
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If he doesn't like honest feed back he's gonna hate the fuck outta me. You think what Nigma said was raw? Man, I go to brutal extremes.
You gotta take it with a pinch of salt though, and remember what they're saying it for. (most) People don't give negative feedback to be an asshole, they do it so you know where you need to elevate. I've not once said a bad word about a drop with the intention of just bad mouthing the writer, it's always with the purpose of letting them know where they need work. At the end of the day one piece of negative feedback pointing out some holes, is worth a million 'Dope piece bro' bits of feedback. |
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