Text Battle Archive: Scripture vs King Jehu...

Rules: 20 to 30 lines; first to 5 votes; no KO; all votes accepted; anyone spits first...

Good luck, gentlemen...

Adios...

New Rule:
Norvile/TeC and Perfecto MUST vote... 

lmao at this i didnt even no this shit was happening but ight

 

ight man lol that coo il spit in a sec

Right right...

King Jehu... hot damn, you haven't come this hard in a while... The multis were crazy, at times a bit forced though you still managed to make them effective (e.g. A B Cs...terrific!), wordplay was nicely included and helped a lot of the punches, and you punched as much as you could... The decorated bit really killed it, was feelin' it a lot, flow was good... 8.3

Scripture... I can see what you're coming with, but I don't think you brought it to its full effect here. EVERY BAR was the exact same structure, multi, multi, lead up to punch (usually w/ wordplay) punch w/ final multis... when you use that 1 line = 1 bar structure, for me, you have to mix it up a bit, throw more rhymes in, and wordplay at different points, etc etc... otherwise it gets boring. No hate, but SymBion's battle against P-Man is the sorta thing I mean (it's in the archives on the first or second page)... wordplay was good, quite a lot original which was impressive, and you punched more or less every bar, but didn't really attempt any personals (King did, despite not knowing you), though the King Solomon one was iight I guess. Multis were long, but you had at least three bars about guns, which got old... 7.8

Good shit from Scripture, but it got too samey, need to mix it up a bit and make the bars a bit longer, 'cuz when I see one-line bars they're usually longer than that, so fill it out some more with some QUALITY... I know you said quality not quantity, but the lack of quantity in each bar affected the quality IMO... Tec's shown me a lil bit of your shit, and I know what you can do, but Jehu came his best in some time here and your spit didn't have enough variety for me...

VOTE: King Jehu

thanks orion ahwell

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second what the fuck shut up Señor Perfecto explain ya vote mofo and wtf is an MSN verse stfu explin ya vote i dont care if ya still vote for him but explin it...............................................now thats something they do in MSN groups

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No hate Jehu

 

ok.. its a tough battle to vote on... but.. i have to agree with what orion said....

both came wit good multis .. and a good flow.. but Jehu's flow was better... and... i thought scriptures verse got boring... i mean.. they were good lines.. but it was the same repetitive thing over and over again... it got boring.. .i thought Jehu came wit more personals.. .and some harder punches.. although both verses were very good...

I just had to vote JEHU becuase his flow was a lil better.. and it was more entertaining to read (being as Scripture's was VERY repetitive)

Senor hates explaining votes Scripture... what he means by MSN is basically what I said about your structure, and yeah that bar you just showed ^ was a better example of that structure... Though I see what he means (Perfecto) I can't count the vote as it's unexplained, so it's still 2-0.

Yeas.

ok,

jehu, good multis, punches.

Scripture: alright, like g-wateverthefuckhisnameis said, got boring because of repedidness.

VOTE: Jehu...