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Elite
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Posted: 29 October 2014 at 7:52pm |
WELCOME TO THE FINALE.. Time to dine, the highest shrine of pharaohs here to top your lines WE DON'T KNOW WHY YOU KEEP SPITTIN', N' THERE'S NO NEED TO SHARE YOUR REASON
Big ups and special thanks to H4ZE (you especially for being a part of all 3 drops), Red-B, Ill ScriptureZ, The Law, Beans, Nigma, JBrenn, Smoothtung, and Zinaii for being apart of at least 1 of the 3 PS pieces. This series was dope as shit, and I'd like to show my appreciation to everyone who helped me make this what it is. Props y'all.. EL1TE PHARAOH SEASON. Edited by Elite - 29 October 2014 at 8:23pm |
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daydizzle89
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H4ze, flowed like butter and multis were hot. Good shit
Brenn, opener was hot shit luol. Played right off haze Ill- swag tasting like butter. Tight vocabulary Nigs- loved the rhyme transitioning hhere.dope shit Eli- multis smashed brothaman. The first two bars were sick as shit. overall dope drop guys. This was heat. Yall know you level of skills |
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Elite
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good looks on the quick feed D, props, ik it was a long piece haha, this was suppose to be a 10 person collab as a matter of fact..
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Nigma
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Haze, dope verse verse man you definitely stepped up and showed you could write with the big dogs. Really impressed by your flow start to finish, quality verse all around.
Brenn, damn some of those bars. "A noob is death in my eyes I'm ra(raw) I'm sonning(sunning), Anubis death in my eyes is just another god i am gunning!" around that was gnarly man. Your battle orientated wordplay gives a refreshing shot to your lyrics, dopeness.Scriptz, rocking that one rhyme scheme throughout and pumping out some CONTENT. Flow deff met expectations and every let had a different image or dope concept in it, well done. Elite, youre takin that newly grasped perception of flow and really building on it, getting concepts together and becoming a complete writer. Props for your elevation as of late and also for putting this all together. Dope collab fellas, turned out awesome
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Elite
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good looks my man, ima drop some proper feed for yall in a bit..
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Beans
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So this was sick fellas.
Haze loves the multis everything flowed nicely, brenn I see you! Nah u stayed right with it one of your best verses I've read tbh. Shit was fire. Ill's verse was sick some dope references in there prob my favorite of the bunch. Nigma came hard on this piece tbh. Especially towards the end. And elite I felt your verse was dope man. Haven't read your verses in here for a minute and you've deff elevated man bit ups to you. This was a great read fellas stay up |
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Red-B
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You know I got to feed this piece haha!
First off I want to say that every verse was top notch shit I got the vibe that you all put your absoulte best foot forward and really smashed this shit to pieces! And so I start... H4ZE- you opened this collab up and really went all out I felt the energy from the beginning and end your whole verse was pretty dope and I really got the whole pharaoh season vibe... Your schemes were fire and I noticed some of the clever words or "word play" you added all around this was dope haven't seen a better opener! JBrenn- I actually favored your verse as one of the best your word play was pretty funny and clever I'm referring to the mario references that was pretty dope the fire from H4ZE's verse carried over to yours and you deliverered a really good drop to the collab and te ending was also pretty dope! ILL scripts- your read was pretty complex in terms of rhymeing but your flow was butter smooth incredably more smooth than the rest almost like this could be an audio... You had a pretty dope verse but like I said the flow was amazing on this one dope shit man Nigma- I may be wrong but it looks like you researched and used the history of "Pharaohs" In this one?? Either way Dope shit man your shit was consistent and was fire all the way through the rhymeing was also top notch good drop on this one man Elite- your rhymeing and multis and internals in this are pretty wicked fam this shit was hot IMO you delivered well and closed the entire thing with a huge BANG! You also had some word play I noticed and it all came together pretty well. Good shit man Overall- you all had things In Your verses that you really shined in over all Id rate this collab 10/10 this was truly an amazing piece and really closed things up. Props to everyone in this drop you guys have amazing talent and deserve feed as this thanks for constructing something of this callaber for me to read. Special thanks- thanks elite for making this seriers I know I was only apart of the first one but it's been truly fun to read and I can speak for the rest of LA when I say that... Like I said with the last one I wish I could have been apart of it but at them moment school is a priority and after homework I try to relax. I'm excited for the group mixtape and Honered to be in GTE! Stay up |
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Elite
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that's some dope feed right there ^
props B, glad you enjoyed it.
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H4ZE
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preciate all the feed guys.
dope collab everyone came at this hard asf. H4ZE- dope fucking verse, you killed this. Lmfao. JB- damn, def has to be one of the best verses I've seen from you, I expected the dope wordplay, cuz you always come fresh with that and your rhyme schemes were nice man. ILL- that flow tho!! Haha, you killed this Fr. Rhyming was great, flow was fucking amazing. Keeping the same rhyme scheme throughout a verse gets hard sometimes, but you pulled it off perfectly. Def could see this being audio. You had some dope references too haha. Great verse nigma. Your verse was dope asf too Mann haha. You always impress me as a writer. Your rhyming and flow was dope. Definitely killed your verse and carried on the fire that ills verse brought. Great shit. Elite, has to be one of the best verses I've ever seen from you. Your rhyming is fuckin crazy now Man. Flow was smooth asf. Def killed your verse in all aspects. You've stepped up tons as a writer throughout the past few months and you deserve props for that in its self. Great verse man. overall this was an amazing collab. Really had fun with this one and I enjoyed working with elite through the whole series. Everyone did great. Props
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JBrenn
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All is good people. I will be back on my grind after I get some shot handled but I owe you all feed!! Good drop fellas!! Lol@ beans you my boy beans!
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Mission
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OMG. I wish i had time to give this a proper feed.
H4ZE - You had a pretty good flow and a great rhyme scheme, my favorite bar "E knows it, B knows it, I'm spittin like it's a freak show bitch I rep GTE, if you're as dope as us than we'd notice!" Great opener, very aggressive and a good pass off to J. J Brenn - I havent seen you spit to my knowledge so this was fun. You did a great job of continuing H4ze's aggresive energy and keeping on the topic. Of course my fav bar has to be "A noob is death in my eyes I'm ra(raw) I'm sonning(sunning), Anubis death in my eyes is just another god i am gunning!" Ill - "Pussy rappers hymens is gone, the rifleman with silencers on" super dope wordplay like everyone has to agree you had the best verse lots of great multis and your flow was perfect. I really enjoyed your verse. Nigma - Tight flow. Your bars were creative and very much battle-like. Best bar "See the scenes? We hit ya till the clips are gone, then roll the credits Know you bitches botch it. Outta split the loss like co-defendants". Great job of shifting the energy from generic bars to personal promotion, being as you're a pharoah. Elite - Man bro, you really shined. You took this out with a BANG. Perfect flow I would say yours was as good as Ill's. My fav bar out of many -> "Skies filled with the gods of hop while y'all are jockin' E's style.. Y'all freaks wild... dissin' cats with half-assed bars n' keystyles". You finished strong and closed it out well. Overall great work guys. This is the most amazing text collab i've seen in some time. Did honor to the series. Honestly i wish i coulda been on this. Best verses imo -> Ill. ELITE. and its too hard after that lol
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Elite
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Aight, lemme get some feedin goin.
H4ZE - Dope shit my man, thought you had a dope verse with some nice punches and a few nice inners in there. Clear elevation, pretty soon you'll be at the top of the OM's if you stay active enough in them. Brenn - Haven't seen this much lyricism from you, ever, I believe. You seem to normally write with simple schemes, reduced multis/internals, but you brought it lyrically with this one. I was feelin the Mario references too man Ill Scriptz - Dope shit bro, inners were on fire and your flow was top notch. Dope my man, stay up. Nigma - Likin it, had some nice multis and a hot flow. You showed why your a top OM head with this one here, props. Overall this was amazing to have yall bring closure to my series in helping out by dropping bars. Major props to yall. yall put great closure to the series and im more than thankful that this piece ended up the way it did. Stay up yall
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iLL ScriptureZ
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Wow, first I’d like to acknowledge the fact that this was
going to be a 10 person collab. Frankly,
I’m happy it turned out to be as is because it was one of the dopest Oms in a
while. Thanks to everyone who gave me
feedback. I really appreciate the
comments. Now it’s my time to feed
everyone else’s work. H4ZE – You’re rhyming was relentless. From how you opened and how it transitioned
into the “E knows it, B knows it, Freak show bitch” scheme. The biggest thing I took out for your drop
was the delivery of your bars. The
execution was spot on. The way I spit
it, it just came out non-stop and at a rapid pace. I don’t know if that was your initial intention
but when I was going at a faster pace the lyrics just seem to flow even better,
which, helped that already strong delivery.
The content was appropriate for the collaboration. I think it was imperative that your verse was
the lead. It really draws in everyone
and keeps the interest intact. Usually,
if the “weakest” verse is first, people tend to lose interest. Luckily, in this collab we didn’t have the
problem. You’re verse was flame and
really gave the vibe of what was to come.
Excellent work. JBrenn – Your style is different to me. I apologize in advance if I’ve read a
previous verse from you and fed it, but I can’t recall that I did. Moving along, you have good concepts. And they are all over the place. I mean that in a positive way. You took, porn and mixed it with a kids show
network. It worked. I think it gave it more “umph” if you
will. I thought that your rhyme scheme,
with the internals and externals matching were similar with H4ZE to which they
were consistent. I’m pretty impressed
with your work. I’ll stop being lazy and
check out more pieces of you in the future. Nigma – You were the first person to hit me up for a
collab when I first got here. Since then
I’ve always became a fan of your work.
You sir, are always consistent.
That is one of the biggest compliments I can give when it comes to music
and writing. In this industry, I’ve learned
that you’re only as good as your last drop.
Whether it be audio or written.
That “Back you out like protruding spinal fractures” was awesome. It gave me a sick visual. “I pursue the
kinda magic that made Zeus the titans master Hold the fuck up… I don’t know what you’re on but I want
some. That shit was pure. “Beef with me? Ya dealin with more shit than a behemoths
spleen What the actual fuck… this verse is phenomenal man. I really have nothing else to give you. Elite – Like it or not but you have some
SwordedStyles in you. Just the way you
constructed the verse and approached it.
Brought the collaboration full circle screaming Pharaoh Season Collabs
are not to be fucked with. Your
elevation from when I first crossed paths with you ‘til now are leaps and
bounds. This is what happens when you
take time to perfect yourself instead of just dropping plain old shit. You’ve grown in all elements of your
writing. Whether it was flow, delivery,
schemes, multisyllable transitions, internals, externals, confidence, concepts,
etc. Great work E, should be proud of
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Trizzy Tre
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This was dope as hell fellas!
Elite well done putting this together and my bad for not getting my verse to you in time. Been busy as hell, but nice way to close out this series. I'll drop more indepth feed when I get a chance later.
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Elite
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Im just gonna say it, this is probably one of, if not the best OM in the past few months.. ngl, just wanted to give another round of props to the features on this, yall did ya thing..
good looks on the feed ill and trizz
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JBrenn
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Haze- the best part of your style is the flow. I get a laid back feel from this but you always have some good bars you and you consistency is what makes your a good writer. This was just another example of that.
JBrenn- hi. Ill- this was complexity mixed with punches. It came out dope! Nigma- I'm a huge fan of your shit your brain just worked different from everyone and it is always a joy to see what you come up with. Elite- great touch good closer overall best drop I've seen from you. Great work was a cool topic. Keep dropping everyone!!! |
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Elite
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hell yeah brenn! keep do ya thing homie, it was a pleasure having you on this shit
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Mission
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By Far the best OM. I would say of the last 3 months without doubt
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Elite
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preciate it
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Elite
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