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the lyricist 
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Joined: 10 July 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 120 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-2 Form: LLNLN |
 Topic: [Text] the lyricist vs ibesick (1-5)Posted: 25 December 2014 at 1:59am |
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10 bars no flippin was the deal |
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the lyricist
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Joined: 10 July 2014 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 120 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-3-2 Form: LLNLN |
Posted: 25 December 2014 at 2:02am |
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I think ibe smoked too much poison ivy thinkin he sick
Point is Don't call guys ebola if you're stupid name brings it U think ur game sick with religious nameflips Now I seen it all unfold God heal my soul tell me what u profit from vain name droppin prophets to defeat a troll We're noobs u thought ur the best took a shot at the vets Dawg with no needle u 'll be put down actin like spoiled rotten pet dawg 3 battles at 1 u troll or is this satire u lack patience like u study med LA not hospitable for suckas lookin for room in a coffin like 2 vampire having sex U think u hot spittin bull to garner beef don't let ur father weep U'll be diced up thinkin winnin horseshoe ur as hard as me I promise I'll leave u in broke spirits cuz the pace is hard to keep And I'll leave a broke spear it's left wid ur heart to keep On net u think ur meta's cool but if we met at school u wud be in a helmet thinkin ur all special Ur brains miniscule thinkin about giant heads u need aids not the medical think ur hard and sick in L.A a retarded crip who started shit is dropped at the police With clothes and garments ripped soul in tarnished bits head blue and bruised like avatars dick while he repeatedly pleads to the police no please (he lost it) Bloody like vorhees He has his life in jeopardy cuz we planted on the hoe keys on some farmer shit I'm heartless with bad deeds we planted it so be a pleasent peasant and harvest it Expo's only obscure references First the David vs ibesick battle Second dice,horseshoe throwing =lucky also dice from horseshoe gang Third there is a quote you harvest what you plant 4th jeopardy gives you cars |
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Ibesick
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Joined: 19 December 2014 Status: Offline Points: 24 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-1-0 Form: WLWW |
Posted: 27 December 2014 at 5:34pm |
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they told u that u sick?, haha shit.. that's a negative, dude
N thinking u gon win is like ur battle score... it's a negative TOO! Now let's look at this fool, he's reacting fast n flops it worse I'm also a quick dude dropping him faster than he dropped his verse U can't stop these verbs, I desTroy now see the Trojan strike My verse is the golden type, but urs?.. 'It's Nothin' ..like ur open mic! I wrote him these smoking rhymes, he's choking today A fucking loser he is, out here rocking LL like he's Cool J Fuck what you say you stay soft and you're wack, serious That's why it's so easy for me to break down Lyric like rap genius Fact My verbs hideous, yours cutes but you spit prattle Ur initials, T upside down 2 L's back to back, that's 3, end of this battle I'm the ill and skilled mental, your skill is just not gravy Cos when we eye your verse, we can see De-Fault like ur Avy The crazy shady lady, or maybe a lazy baby always shitting Who're you're kidding? Aint a Lyricist with that bull waste scripting Killed my vibe with your verse, now you sparked the vengeance B'cos only Time ur name comes 1st is when we use it to start a sentence Struck the entrance with rap fundamentals n rare puns That's why when I punch, my arms go through T like I'm tryna wear one |
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Proctologist
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Joined: 21 August 2013 Location: Lowell Ma Status: Offline Points: 158 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-2-2 Form: WLWLQQ |
Posted: 30 December 2014 at 12:56am |
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dope battle guys both had some decent lines and punches and was extreemly close
Flow=tie structure=tie punches=the lyricist felt he was swinging a little harder personals=tie kind of liked be sick a little more he attacked with a few lines creativity=the lyricist=felt his lines were more witty and clever complexity=tie entertainment=lyricist opener=tie closer=lyricist mvgt=the lyricist like i said it was close battle and could see it going either way i just felt this dude had the better overall verse |
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Rutter knows best
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Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 31 December 2014 at 4:58pm |
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Lyricist - you gave it ago. You formed a couple of concepts in there but didn't execute them very well. The first half was okay. It the second half went to pot really. Structure and attempt at punches went out the window. A few of the fist bars were okay tbh but mostly misses.
I've sick - ups and down. You had a nice few punches in there amongst ya flips. Not very creative but you had the format down for most of it. I was impressed in parts and overall you did a decent job. You incorporated some personals in there and was mostly quite a direct verse. Can see you've listened to the feedback or atleast looked at what makes a decent punch. Much ibesick for a more polished and better executed verse. |
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#bananas
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AxyRocker
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Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
Posted: 01 January 2015 at 4:22pm |
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Lyricist : You had better flow and structure was fine, punches could have been stronger. Concept could have been better executed.
sick : You had some punches but your flow seemed to break. Verses weren't very creative. Some parts did well but at last it fell weak. MVGT: lyricist
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UKK
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Joined: 16 July 2014 Location: Russia Status: Offline Points: 22 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-1-0 Form: WWL |
Posted: 01 January 2015 at 7:11pm |
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you guys on this website r sick
Lyricist: I honestly see why thats your name, you r on point with them rhymes and the wittyness of your bars, my only problem is the personals and the build to your punchlines a tad-bit long Ibesick: Dude your name is correct, your delivery was on point and you def got flow and i felt the punches but my problem once you had alot of self hype and barely or no personal Russia's vote goes to: Ibesick |
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 02 January 2015 at 10:10pm |
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Voting is at 2-1 ibesick.
Proc's vote does not count, just cat's and a winner doesn't constitute as a good vote. You have to explain your vote in a bit more detail, category votes are frowned upon on LA anyways.
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black
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Joined: 30 December 2014 Status: Offline Points: 64 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-4-3 Form: NNLLLN |
Posted: 02 January 2015 at 11:28pm |
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Lyricist-Your punches were not direct, you could've tried to attempt more personals, your verse didn't hit, adding up more content to those rhymes.Spme of those lines can be used against any rapper in any battle, be specific in your choice of words to hit.
Ibesick-You did the direct thing, your punches hit, they were personal, so you had the upper hand in this battle, MVGT-Ibesick His punches actually hit.
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AshleyKaos
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Joined: 11 October 2013 Status: Offline Points: 2511 Crew: Tha Syndicate  Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 28-63-3 Form: LWLLNQ |
Posted: 07 January 2015 at 3:11am |
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OK battle here. Kind of easy.to vote on though.
LYRICIST- dude .... your verse was cool don't get me wrong but you had no personal punches and your concepts were so randumb and all over Tue place I could barley pick out where the meta & word plays began & ended. You really need to reign in on those concepts and make them more relevant to eachother & precise so you come harder andmore aggressive at your opponent. You need to make your shit flow together in one smooth smooth not only with rhyming & word choice but with concepts as well. IB- nice work here my dude. Nice personal with that open Mic line and you had alotta other good punches in there to. You were aggressive ad added a little style to it to. I think that you are elevating quickly and this is probably. The best I've seen from you so far. Good wording and rhyming through out I feel like all your punches set up lines were very well done here. I liked your opener to nice choice. Keep elevating Obvious win here MVGT-IBSICK |
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NUMBER 1 FEMALE MC TILL THE DEATH OF ME
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Lucky D
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Joined: 17 November 2008 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 1528 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 17-21-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 08 January 2015 at 12:46am |
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the lyricist- This wasn't a great verse. Some of your bars had potential. Flow was hard to follow, it should read smooth, not have to start and stop during line. The stretched line on the second to last bar really was outta place.
Ibesick- Not a bad verse. Nothing special either but it didnt need to be. Opener was good, and so was the 3rd bar. After that kinda fell off. Overall- Ibesick took this with a better verse.
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The Law
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God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 08 January 2015 at 2:13am |
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5-1 ibesick wins.
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