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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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Posted: 18 February 2015 at 9:57pm |
It's time again, for LA to be flattened like pancakes Ya'll fucked around and made me go on a rampage!! It's a mess right now, as ya'll worshiping the flops Seeing more fuck yall's than verses getting dropped Just whining, bitching, seeing what you can actually scam on You pussies need to stop borrowing ashley's tampons Time for you guys to reach down and pull out the string Cause the truth that's coming is bound to sting!! I was going to start off dissing scotty, but I brought it different Since the members of LA don't deserve a 'pot to piss in' Brenn & spume are like some lame operators Dial in to close a battle or two just to say ya'll moderators Spume hasn't wrote in ages, so he ain't about the pen but he must've been in it with barry to vouch for him Brenn? Why you dropping verses that levy could body Thinking you have the heat cause you've seen sweaty iraqi's?? Pst.. It's no wonder why LA ain't fixing' to break you respect Military wondering why didn't eddie ray take you instead!! and Shankley, No, I didn't forget That you were helping empire and trying to keep them two hidden When you really should be going back to delete what you've written Cause the fact that he sucks isn't news to ya'll He's had over 70 battles and hasn't improved at all!! Hell even my old crew is up to shenanigans My vote for EVP had nigma panicking "Pm'in me asking me to delete the vote dude it's house rules and your apart of my crew" Shit, you don't think you could have did better, yourself?? Fuck you, take the constructive votes like everyone else!! Thinks he's dope cause the vocab he's writing is big, enflamed But the only one 'fighting for nigs'.... is CHAINS!! Shit even DTK has got a shit for brains No patience, or motivation to continue helping the text on the site As soon as alliance got hard, he just left? Ain't that right?? He's suppose to be mr strong man, mr look at my muscles but he couldn't even handle a couple of rooks with some trouble Even the people I respect most is just here for the fighting You'd think they be rhyming, but see cuba in more F' Yall's than writing Acting like he's the voice of reason, Who left you the monk? just saving your 'shots to yourself' like an undercover drunk Fuck, Even tried to get some good battles going, bring the dope stuff Set up a nice ass tag team, then it took exo a month... jesus The whole site is just sharing a fucking see-saw Don't even getting me started on the arrogance and retards ^Empire is full of em, spreading like the black plague Their Walls covered in cum stains if you take a look back stage Corrupting members even when they leave your crew candid Look at ransom, another 'scared to post first' bandit I get a vote and he's cry minutes later cause it lessened his chances And the shit I found on him is straight up embarrassing He'd probably leave and I'd be hated on for sharing it..eeesh! That wasn't a mission joke, raise his shit mind Your just lucky, the rules saved ya this time And beans is probably the most weak and insecure Scared to drop first, scared to get hit, scared to lose for sure So he battles the weak, stays away from those who can handle him yet every post I see from him, claims he should be champion.. pst.. And if he does venture against someone with shit that is flowing You'll see fuck ya'lls and conspiracies of him bitching and moaning But that apple doesn't fall far from the tree Cause beans is everything tre wants him to be A hypocrite, a litte bitch, someone that can't handle the heat and if the truth is brought forward it's just scandals we see Tantrums, and crying acting like two year old children Posting pics and saying your leaving to get someone to feel em!! I ain't gonna lie, I thought rutter was improving and dope Don't know why he's choosing the jokes, he's losing his hope The sad part is that VM ain't reaching better Disappearing and taking cheatin' measures I left VM and Point blank, now I'm just crewless and open But him, he aint' busy at all.. Truth is he's homeless No showing battles without internet cause he couldn't afford to buy any So if he gets on la it must've been through apple stores and libraries and it's a shame ill scripts is cheating to win Guess that shows the weakness within but what's fucked up is that he still did right Came back, didn't complain and brought an OM to life That's just the truth of it, but it ain't over for the abuse ya'll get Rather be babies and argue than choose to spit Trolls running around rampant and people provoking it Then those same people are seen posting revolting shit.. pftt.. Mission is the biggest of those fucking retards He thinks he seems hard but... That's fuckers been making me bored Claiming he runs a game website but can't find the ranking in forums If your site's so good, why don't you go back to owning it No members, or no site? which is the reason your here back to trolling shit?? But the real truth's unfolding, if old vets don't lay it right How you expect the new guys to obey this site Stalin showed he was just the same as those fucks Don't know the rules & scared to lose, shoulda stayed holed up Honesty, I'm just sick of the act in it, all of this faggot shit Sick of the trash that's spit and the whackest scripts I have personals galore, and none even managed to punch me Wanted a sandwich with cheese, but couldn't handle the lunchmeat ^ Since you can't even show relevance, I'll give you help Since I'm on a fucking rampage, I'll just diss myself "Damn.. Law you don't deserve respect or love dog Paying for tournaments just to become mod When he gets called out.. It's odd he ain't barking Always looking for the save so scotty does all the talking It's weak.. he claims he's dissident but so many bad incidents, I see him as a hypocrite He gets mad when people don't write for his own raffles but can't even show up to his own battles.. Pst. How's that look to the other members, when your suppose to be a role model ^^ Shit I was gonna keep giving myself shots, But I'll just down the whole bottle" Give ya'll a chance to get some more personals Hopefully you'll use it in the OM this time, and throw a word or too Cause I'm not here looking for the love dawg I'm here to put a stop to the fuck ya'lls... |
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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damn Law,
This was straight nasty. Each line had me gaffing. I would give this a bar for bar break down but I don't have three hours to spend doing that lol. Flow- This came off really battlish. Like you were speaking into a mic and not rapping. I liked a lot. Vocabulary - I don't have to go there with this piece. You know and LA knows your top notch with your wording and grammer. Nice shit here Punches - there is too many to pick one that stuck out. This is insane. Much respect. Length - I read the whole thing and not once did I get bored. You fit a ton of people in this shit. Much props. Overall- Rampage 2 was fucking nice. You killed it and kept it real the whole way through. sick ass shit here man. gonna get some heat from this and I don't think you give a flying fuck. 0 FUCKS Like the last Rampage THE LAW - 2 LA - 0
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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This was nice. To many quotables. Some simple stuff which I thought was cool but like
How u addressed everyone. Subliminal and non subliminal. |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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iLL ScriptureZ
Standard Member Joined: 13 May 2014 Location: NJ Status: Offline Points: 2477 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 11-5-1 Form: LWWLWW |
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Longggggg ass drop. All in all you too shots at everyone. And it was done pretty well, I expect shots back at you. I just hope your ammo wasn't wasted on one verse. Your writing is done well, can see you're comfortbale in your own style. I think some bars were wordy and others were spot one. So it did dipped here and there but that's kind of expected with such a lengthy post. But your bars were pretty direct and I dig that. Lastly, you owe the 100 I should've won in that tournament. Lol
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Ransom
Standard Member Joined: 30 June 2014 Location: 7 Citys Status: Offline Points: 911 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-0-0 Form: WW |
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props on the snake verse Law... can't take you private eye work from you.. well worded
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~Lyrical Death Dealer~
"The Mike Myers of Papyrus" |
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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lol I am sure by the time a new cash tournament happens. If it does, this will have been long passed over anyways. Glad you went about the shit the correct way though. Shows class.
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Ricaul
Banned Joined: 16 January 2015 Location: Suid Afrika Status: Offline Points: 345 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-7-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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"and Shankley, No, I didn't forget
That you were helping empire and trying to keep them two hidden When you really should be going back to delete what you have written Cause the fact that he sucks is not news to yall He has over 70 battles ang hasnt improved at all" ^ this was it...shank a goner lmao..can't wait to see his response to your diss honid... ... And the Nigma part was funny as a motherfucker honid, yeah there were some parts where you came off basic but yo this brought some life in the site man, probably now people will stop opening fuck ya'l threads to bitch about shitty stuff thanks to you honid... But the part about Beans, i think that one is a bit played cos i think guy is dope, saw the drop against Stalin? Heat... Plus if you and him went at it, without "flips" think he'd knock u though... Anyway This was dope all around. |
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It's NOT REAL!!!! it's A SITE!!!! The only place faggots can talk Shiite without get'n their asses kicked... so bro..... just be cool like Ric. |
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
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All my extra bullshit aside, I was really feeling this. You went crazy on everybody in the process of getting your rocks off. I support this. |
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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thanks for the feedback, i will return the favor in a little bit.
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Yo dude this was straight fire, it's not L.A anymore its a tucking burns unit. Lol you son of bitch I read this yesterday and that opener made me laugh out loud on Tuesday it was pancake day so the timing of that was impeccable. You had you highs and lows in this which is understandable especially in something this long you'll always have bars that shine a little more than others.
and Shankley, No, I didn't forget That you were helping empire and trying to keep them two hidden When you really should be going back to delete what you've written Cause the fact that he sucks isn't news to ya'll He's had over 70 battles and hasn't improved at all!! Like this section here I don't really know why but I'm not really feeling this am much as the rest but seriously this was nice, good to see ya fired up enough to drop again. You don't drop a verse often but when ya do it is an OMOTM contender, nice job Bro. Keep me coming |
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E.V.P.
Standard Member Joined: 05 September 2014 Location: Toronto Status: Offline Points: 535 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 7-4-0 Form: WWLLWL |
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Hell even my old crew is up to shenanigans My vote for EVP had nigma panicking "Pm'in me asking me to delete the vote dude it's house rules and your apart of my crew" Shit, you don't think you could have did better, yourself?? Fuck you, take the constructive votes like everyone else!! That's jokes. Loved how you were straight to the point in this OM, I'll be back later with more feedback.
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dalinquent
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This was a dope read... Haven't been active but this pretty much filled me in on whats been new with the site... Good shit law, flow was good, personals good, and i made it all the way thru which is saying alot!
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A-one AR Royalty
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Great Diss verse. The way you delivered in this was unique. I study and write alot. And you taught me something that in time I will add to my arsenal. AR
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E.V.P.
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Ya'll fucked around and made me go on a rampage!! It's a mess right now, as ya'll worshiping the flops Seeing more fuck yall's than verses getting dropped Pancakes, bro.. I thought this was an awesome way to start a diss, certainly wasn’t expecting half of what you dropped to follow it.. But the - “It’s a mess right now, as y’all worshipping the flops.” - that was a nice touch. But the only one 'fighting for nigs'.... is CHAINS!! Shit even DTK has got a shit for brains No patience, or motivation to continue helping the text on the site As soon as alliance got hard, he just left? Ain't that right?? He's suppose to be mr strong man, mr look at my muscles but he couldn't even handle a couple of rooks with some trouble
And beans is probably the most weak and insecure Scared to drop first, scared to get hit, scared to lose for sure So he battles the weak, stays away from those who can handle him yet every post I see from him, claims he should be champion.. pst.. And if he does venture against someone with shit that is flowing You'll see fuck ya'lls and conspiracies of him bitching and moaning But that apple doesn't fall far from the tree Cause beans is everything tre wants him to be A hypocrite, a litte bitch, someone that can't handle the heat and if the truth is brought forward it's just scandals we see Tantrums, and crying acting like two year old children Posting pics and saying your leaving to get someone to feel em!! I ain't gonna lie, I thought rutter was improving and dope Don't know why he's choosing the jokes, he's losing his hope
The sad part is that VM ain't reaching better Disappearing and taking cheatin' measures I left VM and Point blank, now I'm just crewless and open But him, he aint' busy at all.. Truth is he's homeless No showing battles without internet cause he couldn't afford to buy any So if he gets on la it must've been through apple stores and libraries and it's a shame ill scripts is cheating to win Guess that shows the weakness within but what's fucked up is that he still did right Came back, didn't complain and brought an OM to life That's just the truth of it, but it ain't over for the abuse ya'll get Rather be babies and argue than choose to spit
Trolls running around rampant and people provoking it Then those same people are seen posting revolting shit.. pftt.. Mission is the biggest of those fucking retards He thinks he seems hard but... That's fuckers been making me bored Claiming he runs a game website but can't find the ranking in forums If your site's so good, why don't you go back to owning it No members, or no site? which is the reason your here back to trolling shit??
But the real truth's unfolding, if old vets don't lay it right How you expect the new guys to obey this site "Damn.. Law you don't deserve respect or love dog Paying for tournaments just to become mod When he gets called out.. It's odd he ain't barking Always looking for the save so scotty does all the talking It's weak.. he claims he's dissident but so many bad incidents, I see him as a hypocrite He gets mad when people don't write for his own raffles but can't even show up to his own battles.. Pst. How's that look to the other members, when your suppose to be a role model ^^ Shit I was gonna keep giving myself shots, But I'll just down the whole bottle"
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nomedic
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part one was sick but here shit just became more personal you were scolding alot of folks by the looks of it and you might've held back last time esp regarding your ex clan mate but you went in hard here your punches were all used well flow was top except for the few ones you put transitions on that looked slightly stretched but have to give it to you this was mean man totally hardcore
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Trizzy Tre
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614 views............. and Law is 587 of them.
Dope verse tho. |
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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Thanks for all the feedback I have received on this.
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Exoduzt
Superior Member NaCl Joined: 08 April 2006 Location: Long Island Status: Offline Points: 5331 Crew: Elision Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 41-7-5 Form: WWWWWW |
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This did exactly what it was suppose to do. Get a rise out of people. Overall this was well written with a lot of truth to it. There were some parts that I thought the flow was off and should have been worded better but you obviously got your point across. This was a lot longer than I thought it was gonna be but thats not a complaint at all. I'm glad you hit on these topics. I also was a fan of how you dissed yourself at the end. That was a dope way to end it.
good shit law
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Cuba
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Yeah it was dope, good way to lay it down rather than paragraphs...
Couple of rhymes were stretched & I think you kind of ebbed and flowed in terms of tenacity, but equally, when you drop that many bars it's hard (or basically impossible) to keep that venom at a high level...was almost old school style unlimited lines style drop, which I respect. Best thing about this is you take no prisoners, you get at everyone even if you like them or not. Good shit. |
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The Law
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Thanks for the feedback Exo & Cuba
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