Text Battle Archive: [Text] Geeza Vs Rutter Knows Best (0-3)

RUTTER-
Liked it . i think that you had some good punches with the amount of material you had to work with , which was not much given a guy with only 68 posting points. i think that your most creative bbar was your second and your best punch of the battle :

"That relatable enough? I guess you don't think - you just babble first
Cuz you don't see the point in dissing, and that's consistant with ya battle verse"

Mabye should have closed out your verse with this one i feel like your closer could have packed a harder punch but it   was still good-over all good verse

GEEZA -

I think that your lines were short and basic and poorly delivered, i see that you tried to do research on your opponents but you used any information that were able to find poorly, you need to be more creative and add some multis and metaphors , similie's and some internals to make your bars a more interesting and better read, Visit the elevation center and practice.


for a better verse overall with better and more creative flow and punches
MVGT _ RUTTER

RKB: I liked your verse I liked your opener i thought that was clever, a nice personal utilised quite well, the set up i think could have been tightened up word wise i feel it was a little too wordy but the punch was nice.  the other highlight was your 4th bar that was another nice personal very well used. It had a nice flow and the punch was funny. the rest was nice but nothing to write home about, the letter to momma (3rd bar) was okay but the wording made the punch lose some of it impact but yeah like i said nice verse man, nice job.