Text Battle Archive: [text] AxyRocker vs Thryjoe (3-0) |
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Shankley
Superior Member Joined: 03 September 2013 Location: Leeds, England Status: Offline Points: 3369 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 37-43-1 Form: WNLWWL |
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Posted: 28 April 2015 at 3:58pm |
Axyrocker wins 3-0
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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This was a very weak battle
Thry Joe bro this was in no shape or form a battle verse u gotta pick a concept an attack your opponent go for throat my advice go to the elevation center to better understand how to construct a battleverse stay up an keep at it you will get it Axy youre verse wasn't any better but at least u tried to attack him an showed u had a better idea of how to create a battle verse like I told him u gotta pick a concept an go for throat or throw in a sick name play anyways u did enough to take the win here Mvgt axy for a better battle verse |
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ch3kkgame
Standard Member Joined: 03 July 2014 Location: Atlanta Status: Offline Points: 1145 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 14-2-1 Form: WWWWWW |
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Thyrjoe - Your verse was not a battle verse to be straight to the point. That was you rhyming and making a failed attempt at being funny. You should go to the elevation center and read some of the tutorials. Read more battles, even hit up youtube and watch some battles. You have to get the feel for a battle verse. How it's directed. You should keep dropping, you most certainly have potential.
AxyRocker - Your verse was a better verse, but only because it was more in a battle format. The content wasn't that much more impressive than your opponents. I understand you did just enough to win, but put more into it next time. Keep dropping and elevating though. M.V.G.T AxyRocker For having an actual battle verse.
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
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I know this battle was shit but its just 3 bars, please give this one some votes , I'll make sure to make my battle with mission sick !!
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Ricaul
Banned Joined: 16 January 2015 Location: Suid Afrika Status: Offline Points: 345 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-7-0 Form: WLLWLL |
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T your verse was nice for an open mic but as a battle verse it was far from being that. sounded like more of a peace maker Mac, I don't see in anyway where you tried to attack your opposition. try to think out lines that can hurt guy, not stuff that'll make him sad. this was far from being a battle verse, that's all I can say man. other than that you already got the flow or rhyming skills. you just gotta be a bit provoking.
Axy not a nice verse at all. you AT LEAST made am effort to attack your opponent, flowise you were bad pal, not going to be harsh cos I also think I'd have keystyled too. Overall - Guys I think this was disrespectful to not make the effort of taking a pen n paper and prepare a verse to us guys who were eager of Scotty to open the battlefield. This is the type of things that cause the guy to wish to close this marafaka. so, next time make the effort bras... mvgt Axy. for attacking the guy. |
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It's NOT REAL!!!! it's A SITE!!!! The only place faggots can talk Shiite without get'n their asses kicked... so bro..... just be cool like Ric. |
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
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Fuck this was easy.. Keystyled this shit-- *Callin everyone out and showing them the guy giving free wins* Ima destroy you like that open letter proving this thry-joe just another ho You can't rhyme rhyme Rocker with heart in your motherfuckin bars Its like you got Erection problem so you 'need your time' before getting 'hard' No wonder you battled axy, while I look at your sig, you wanted to be down a tier(tear) Thinkin emotional shit will get you some respect but look - you got none here Expo Emma Watson - Feminist and in that letter she was proved wrong His OMs - 'I need my time' and 'hard'
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thryjoe
Groupie Joined: 09 April 2015 Location: ur mans pants Status: Offline Points: 289 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-2-1 Form: LQL |
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G'luck bro!
Look at his shirt! This guys got tits! And he still thinks he should be in the battle of wits. Not saying I'm good, I've known that since a long time ago, starters when I was barely five I wasn't here to survive but to thrive this lone journey, or to truly earn me. I'm not like you, ya look like Bruce Jenner 'cept even more femininer. Not telling lies I'm only telling what I see before my eyes. Just bitching around having fun with Rocker (that *motherfucker) You little poptart, you're too soft in your heart. *Say it like 'Motherfocker' with a long O. |
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they told me it was reality, but it's really all in your mind.
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AxyRocker
Standard Member Joined: 16 November 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1297 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 23-40-1 Form: LLLLWL |
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3 bars
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