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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:02am |
Yo.. hip hop been a part of my heart
Mixin words with a purpose, carvin an art Old era, new era, which is better is worthless Only thing that matters is the message in verses Ive said it before this, never get it distorted La will survive even if all the vets are dispersin La's a community, we've weathered the curses A place to explain ya pain that others are forced with The message gets set and, forever its stored in The same community as the cleverest wordsmith Stupid beefs, usually, together we all click A place where a father can send a letter to their kid Lost my brother, my brethren is sure missed Trapped in a fire, upsettin we lost Sick, i wept when i saw it Soldier to the fullest, blessed wit his service Wish he escaped the flames to show his text is just perfect Peep and read, leave some feed, let it restore him One of the most underrated, wish i couldve expressed it in person But we carry on, share a bond, Ss has explored it But he can only keep going if hes got the rest of us workin an overseas flow from me the streets is cold airplanes youtube debut roach spray Rest in peace brother. Edited by Stalin - 03 June 2015 at 5:54am |
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Nigma
Site Moderator Joined: 25 March 2013 Location: Canada Status: Offline Points: 4077 Crew: Elision |
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Nice one. Technically sound, relevant content and heartfelt shout out to sick. Gonna give those verses a read. Nothing stood out but this sort of verse doesn't require home run lines. Nice light read, good to see you dropping.
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SwordedStylez
Superior Member Joined: 16 August 2007 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 4921 Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 3-0-1 Form: WWWN |
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Yeah this was dope man, nice to see you dropping. Your flow is pretty much perfect to be honest, experience shines through when people have been doin this over a decade ad your word-choice is so concise that it's a pleasure to spit/read your work. Great sentiment and touching when you talk about Sick-witted. All in all just solid work. Oh and thanks for the shout-out.
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Ink - Always remembered, never forgotten (as a fake as fuck piece of shit who tried to steal 2 persona's) |
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Sky Scrapur
Standard Member Joined: 21 October 2014 Status: Offline Points: 1133 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Audio Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
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"La will survive even if all the vets are dispersin"...interesting line, ofcourse LA will survive but IT WON'T BE THE SAME. Nice tribute to Sick.
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A-one AR Royalty
Banned Joined: 19 February 2015 Status: Offline Points: 123 |
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Stalin this was a sick drop. I learned a few tricks of the trade from this OM. Nice work keep it coming. AR
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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Thanks for the feed everyone. Appreciate it
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Kay B
Superior Member Joined: 28 June 2005 Location: Watford Status: Offline Points: 9428 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 58-32-0 Form: LLWWWW |
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Just popped in and see this...nice verse an a real nice tribute, you already know my opinions on your stuff, didnt dissapoint
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
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This was a great sentimental and remembrance piece. Whether you care about the technicalies and flow those were on point. However, the main thing was the emotion and getting it across that we must miss and carry on the member that we lost. Great om man.
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I.R.A.C.
Groupie Joined: 06 June 2015 Location: L.A. Status: Offline Points: 43 |
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Loved the drop fam being from L.A. Myself gave me all types of pride flowed well got to the point and made it so clear very nice open drop
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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
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Sup big homie! I know you've been ducking me for years now, but I'll catch up with you soon lol Anyway, I haven't been able to pen a single line about Sick. I just can't. It still doesn't feel right. But this right here was dope. You were always ill at channeling these type of emotions. You still got it, man. And I have to keep it one hundred my eyes got wet when Jay and I decided to end the whole NLEI/HG thing. Maybe it wasn't our decision to make but we felt like it was the right thing to do. @ Stalin |
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
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Win for Stalin
This was fresh brotha. I think you hit this with the perfect approach. Relevant as fuck and I enjoyed every line/bar. Nice to see you drop a piece. The last segment is too real. I don't think I could have wrote about the situation like you did. Still man, NICE WORK
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
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Thanks for the feed everyone. And upping so people can see what Sick-Witted was all about!
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+Sick-Witted+
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
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This was dope flow was relentless emotions was pooring every witch way stay up stalin never got the chance to politic wit sick dude was a beast with the pen though rest in peace
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