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Cuba
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Posted: 21 September 2004 at 9:08am |
Aim at the singular but all you lames appear the same
I'll kill you at Point Blank Range like the video game
Fake facade in this fickle world is easy to control
Even I'm effected, why else would I rap bout con-soles?
Only difference is I mean a casket when I say X-box
My texts hot so y'all sit eagerly anticipatin my next drop Lost parental guidance so my style is far from gentle
And it isnt religious when the nines next to ya temple
Im the sites most underated, ya defeat is fated
If not then why did you accept that I'm anticipated?
My every spit is a protest to show you the demonstration
I am constant growth so fuck any mention of elevation
I am the Judge that you Dread, that slug to ya head
Something you miss when its gone, the lover thats dead
People hate on my drops coz they say my names played out
Its subliminal, ya whole mindset telling you to obey doubt
My wordplay advanced yet you dont give it a second glance
Shit even the church says everyone deserves a second chance
And they corrupt as Hell, see children to touch and delve
Preachers reaping benefits from kids that are fucking twelve
It makes me sick that there raping quick and fake as shit
Society gets fucked from behind and yet they're taking it
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King Jehu
Veteran Joined: 23 January 2004 Status: Offline Points: 6088 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #4 Stats: 54-18-1 Form: WLWWWL |
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22 lines to follow that heat (continues where Ice left Off): I'm labeled sick but always caught up in major shit |
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Insert something rappy here
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BiggStankDogg
Veteran Joined: 22 May 2004 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 1832 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: #7 Stats: 35-8-0 Form: LLWWWW |
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Snaps, y'all... Ice, your spit jumped from topic to topic like Super Mario on crack, but it flowed well, and suited the verse overall. Not your best verse, but that's your own fault since you set your own bar so high. Structure was on point, and I agree with just about every point you made, except for the under-rated bit... Jehu, I told you on MSN, and I'll tell you here: there may be people on this site that are better than you in one category or another, but you have got some of the smoothest, easiest to read shit that I've ever seen. That said, the verse was a little jumpy with the subject matter, but it suits the helter skelter nature of the verse. All told - this wasn't the hottest shit either of you have dropped, but even at that, it's good quality shit. It's a shame that it's been slept on. Same for -Orion-'s shit. I guess peeps are running out of compliments... Peace. |
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