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Abstrakt 
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 Topic: Spit...Posted: 08 October 2004 at 12:10pm |
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I only touch the mic and recieve mad props
Like brainless female presenters liftin up tops Shockin spectors by the flock wit the shit i drop Im fuckin Hip as thigh get, wit one leg yall couldnt Hop You cant wRap a present so leave the past alone Hesitant to invent a rhyme, pass that microphone Step by step I seperate your blown up rep to half hated Your cheese aint 'great' wit 'metal' instrumentals ya love is tainted.. Sniffin charlie calmly even wit manson as a cellmate theres no escape Get raped and call me huntley cus bitch your just 'jail bait' Step up and fail mate, i mail fate, causin death wit posts Ya couldnt make a dope WAV if you recorded on jamican coasts! |
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 12:27pm |
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Dam you have great word play in this...love it!
"Im fuckin Hip as thigh get, wit one leg yall couldnt Hop" "Your cheese aint 'great' wit 'metal' instrumentals ya love is tainted.." Tight shit! 
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Abstrakt
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 6:06pm |
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Cheers TC 20 views no replys eh?
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 6:25pm |
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Wordplay was on leaps an' bounds from anythin' you've ever done before. Rhyme scheme could do with switchin' up but one thing at a time, and wordplay is more important. You need to work on wordin' it right etc to get it across but there's a lot of hidden meanings in there, I like this. 1
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They just said that FUCKIN' with me They didn't mean it Nah . . . |
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Abstrakt
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 6:27pm |
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Cheers man, thanks for the f33dback..
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 6:38pm |
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I liked it. You've made a dope return to text. I'm liking it. Keep workin' on your flow for when M1C kick innu' action.
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Posted: 08 October 2004 at 10:38pm |
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Nice return to text... Overall solid drop, but I'm lliking the last bar the most at this point... moods.. it might change.
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Insert something rappy here
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