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 Topic: StrightUpPosted: 17 October 2004 at 4:33pm |
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Yah this is my 3rd Audio called StrightUp.
Tryed to take all yah feedback and work it into this track. Hope you like 
Its the 3rd on called "StrightUp" StrightUp Track #3 |
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Posted: 17 October 2004 at 4:43pm |
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Its tight... ya flow needs a lil work though...
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Posted: 17 October 2004 at 7:01pm |
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Thanks.
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Posted: 18 October 2004 at 3:49pm |
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any more feedback on this....
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 6:12am |
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nice...was good.out of ur 3 so far i still like ur first 1. nice work an keep'em flowin
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 11:01am |
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Thanks SDC.
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 11:28am |
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Keep at it bro try and improve confidence and emotion
I know what its like in front of the mic being stuck for words |
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 11:38am |
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lol
Thanks Raptor....I did try to put more emotion in this one....as I get that feedback most of the time.... I'll just keep @ it. Cheers,
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 1:37pm |
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ooooooh bigger business :) cassidy killed this shit.
really abstract style, "ya end will be pending", "I run life like a drug in a cartell". "im spinning fast like an u.f.o". haha @ dayglow. "music in my blood flows" , "got to be stone cold"..this a very interesting beat choice for this kinda topic.
"you just a rookie, this is my profession". "cease fire". you kinda remind me of ne dubbz vocally. similiar voices an what not. "tit tat tit tat tit tat" haha.. "style of spice".. you have alot of nice lines, but this is an odd beat choice for this kinda style. "better hope its fiction". "one on one on the court side". hah @ the reversing at the end.
overall I liked this, but the beat didn't suit you at all. you're more of an abstract mc, this beat is more so for a straight up punchline track. Althou you had punches, I wouldnt consider your style punchline mc, ya know? anyway, keep doing it, get a different beat next time an knock em dead, holler. |
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Posted: 19 October 2004 at 2:11pm |
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Dam Neek thanks for putt'in all that time into yah
feedback.....I agree 100% with the beat...was just trying it out.... Happy to hear you did like some on my lines as well. Much respect Neek.....thanks 
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Posted: 29 October 2004 at 1:32am |
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Flow was kinda off but yah ^^^ beat didn't fit wit words ... "darkness i defend..." da beat iz aboutta makin money and gittin bitchez... lol but rhymes are tiiiight... i like ya voice and flow but u needa betta suiting beat .... lika dark-n-twisted 1 i think that'll fit u good and subject matter.
and you really acentuate your last rhymes some pplz like some pplz dislike i think you could jus flow it a lil better without stretchin da last rhymes... i like da fillers when da beat went off... "3d-full of spunk tit tat tit tat u hear that?" nice... some rhymes are kinda vocab/filler... make it all more concrete ... but shitz still tiiiiight... TC gittin on da audios u needa do sum audio battles...battle me or Neek cuz Neek got illy skillz but TC u gittni there mayn FIYA .. lyrically.. gitta better beat and ur good to Go |
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Posted: 05 November 2004 at 7:57am |
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BEat is fuckin dope wudnt of chose it for a topic like this but its still hot Flow..aint bad needs abit of work but u have it man..jus keep roundin the edges on it and u will perfect it soon. Emotion..Tip! Memorize ur lyrics then spit helps emotion a shit load man believe me.. Lyrics..are interesting not bad sum nice shit funny lines in there... u need 2 work on breath control man..its not bad but u can catch ur breaths on certain parts on this where u missed n then u cud hear u runnin low overall nice ish 8/10..Keep working on this |
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Posted: 05 November 2004 at 1:14pm |
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wow thanks 20theTruth & Shadow much respect for
your feedback, helps me out tons.......and the ego
I will make sure I add the help you have told me on the next drop.....I will do some battles soon as well....but I just do not have the battle fire in my blood, its the 1 main things I need to work on. Thanks again for listen'in to it and putting time and thought into your reply. Cheers,
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