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    Posted: 20 March 2016 at 5:17pm

Death to the trolls getting low like a squat rep
Racists sneakily prick holes in wasp nests.
Hotbeds for swastikas & schizos in cop vests
Praying for Imans to get shot on a mosque’s steps.
Puppets tryna kill you like Terrorist Achmed
While the ventriloquists are somewhere on a yacht deck.
Arian supremacy; the K-Klan box set
They are going public with their views, they’re a Fox sect
...
It is not a myth like the monster in the Loch Ness
It’s a thot hiding hickies underneath a mock neck.
The beef has turned into a different kind of ox flesh
The bull’s the cash cow of their next project.
Right wingers world wide acting like the GOP’s pets
Shit is getting ugly like a Mogwai got wet.
Tryna get our credit right when there’s no gwap left
Locked up for Glock theft in cell block F.
Swap threats for what? on this one I’m Barack X…
Peering out the window with a 52 shot Tec.
It is like the riots in Watts when I’m not vexed
Half a 16 will get you ate like an octet.
Channeling the Panthers to make it more Pac-esque
Run up in their office to spit on Murdoch’s desk.
S.W.A.T. sheds blood for the ones who got hedge…
Funds out the butt who won’t re-stock meds.
They ain’t got bread for all of their Iraq vets
Keyboard Trumps getting louder than a rock fest
Word to the hooligans shouting with the Scotch breath
Cussing out their wigger offspring with no prospects.

Arm chair Hitlers wanna paint the block red
Satanizing niggas just for being potheads.
…  
Whoever said my people ain’t gorgeous can drop dead
Popping mad shit like Storm Front shock threads

 
I'm out
I had a good run
*2006-2016*
 
Peace
 


Edited by The Law - 21 March 2016 at 10:18am
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 20 March 2016 at 9:02pm
Dam chain going out with a bang for sure this was A+ material the flow was magnetic so much substance packed in a short bar piece crazy hope this really ain't your last om though

Praying for Imans to get shot on a mosque’s steps.
Puppets tryna kill you like Terrorist Achmed
While the ventriloquists are somewhere on a yacht deck.
Arian supremacy; the K-Klan box set
Crazy right here

Right wingers world wide acting like the GOP’s pets
Shit is getting ugly like a Mogwai got wet.
Tryna get our credit right when there’s no gwap left
Locked up for Glock theft in cell block F.
Swap threats for what? on this one I’m Barack X…
Peering out the window with a 52 shot Tec.
It is like the riots in Watts when I’m not vexed
Half a 16 will get you ate like an octet.
Channeling the Panthers to make it more Pac-esque
My two favorite parts you did your thing on this one raw as fuck stay up
I'll explode at the drop of a dime like proximity mines
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2016 at 1:29am
Dope as ever.

I'm officially the last gun slinger of HG now.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2016 at 3:24am
Get at me chain. That's an order.

As far as the verse, you already know. This piece is dope. Flow, rhymes chemo is all classic
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2016 at 8:03am
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Salute homie its been an honor serving HG aside of you
As far as this piece goes dawg you were able to gimme grief from the content but also gags from how you put it together but for a last piece homie I didn't see a call back that's my only beef with this but over all I clearly enjoyed this peace man
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2016 at 9:08am
Sucks that this is your last piece, man. This piece was filled with truth, and Im a sucker for social conscience pieces like this. The part though that stuck on to me though was this line right here

"Satanizing niggas just for being potheads."
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Man, this was nothing but the truth right here. I just seen
an episode of "Weediquette" and this dude named Bernard Noble
out in New Orleans is doing 13yrs for having 2 marijuana joints on him.
He want get out until 2024 when he is 58yrs old. The shit is fucked up.

But overall I loved the whole piece. Btw, I like the pic; very symbolic.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 March 2016 at 6:55pm
As ever,this drop was Ripe,and I can't believe this is
your last,but all the best though CHAIN..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 March 2016 at 3:42pm

The opening to this was really well worded. I definitely
liked that opening line. The next line that followed
was dope. Your ability to use abstract multis is dope as
fuck. Your flow is always above par and your assonance here
really shined. Nice The imagery and and vocabulary really
setting a tone here. Great opener and your message is being
consumed easily. Mock Neck? I felt this to be a little stretched
or maybe i dont understand what you mean. Nethertheless this
just keeps getting better as i read. That beef turning into ox
flesh line was hot as fuck. using Gops was a clever use of the
word and it worked well when reading this. Overall, this was
a really dope piece. I enjoyed this beginning from end and i
loved how you kept the same end rhyme assonance and your message
stayed on point throughout. That is what makes you a top tier writer.
The message you came here with was onpoint. i might not agree
100% with it but we all have our opinions. Alot of it i did
agree with also. I know you have your differences with me and shit
but on the real. that isnt going to change of what i think of you
as a writer. Nice piece and hopefully you can find it in you to
stay on LA. Good work here Brothaman
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 March 2016 at 5:42pm
This is being slept on... homie that opener was FIRE especially the Achmed line... extremely clever scheme you got going on there.

The flow was retarded, multi on multi on multi... throughout the verse you had more quotable's and clever lines... damn shame you're leaving.. now I can't collab with you.

Peace brother.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 23 March 2016 at 7:04pm
dude...that was freaking fire from beginning to end...I just joined the site today I wish this dude was still around :L

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 29 March 2016 at 3:45pm
First off cool pic with the black panther vs captain America. Very fitting.

Well this was dope tbh. The content and vocab were great throughout. To me it came as a social commentary piece with a cross over to how you feel about l.a to a lesser extent. Could be the other way round idk lol. I don't think many could have done a better job of this, you can tell it's a subject matter your passionate about shit was real here and as usual the execution was on that other level.

Hope it's not the end....

Would be a shame for this to be your last and to bow out over the shit that went down.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 04 April 2016 at 9:54pm
Yeeeet bro this cant be your last OM. Lol. I really hope its not man fr.

This shit is really dope homie, your style has always been crazy to me man. The way you put rhymes together is mad crazy. The flow is dope as always. The content is dope as well, i love pieces like this.

You've always been one of my favorite writers on this site and it sucks to see you go. I hope you're pullling a hopsin lmao.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2016 at 12:29am
Fuck it!... This shit right here had me noddin my head. Line after line spewed truth. Controversial undenying truth.
Fire Fonze!!! Fuckin FIRE!!

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:27am
Bro, "Half a 16 will get you ate like an octet." This whole piece was just amazing. The content was deep, and the flow butter smooth as usual, this was a great way to go honestly. Hate for it to be your last, but farewell man, you killed it again.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:00pm
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:32pm
Nah nah nah nah nah nah.. You can't drop shit like this, as i'm getting back active, and just leave. You're gonna have me like the bitch in Titanic, clinging to a the OM's like it's a door - I'LL NEVER LET YOU GO CHAIN.

In all seriousness, the fuck is this:

The beef has turned into a different kind of ox flesh
The bull’s the cash cow of their next project. 

You're disgusting, too disgusting to hang up yet, not until we've had one last collab anyway. You selfish piece of shit. The rhyme scheme in this is why you're at least top 3 OM writer of all time. No questions.

Keep up, and inbox me.

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:22am
Opener: Not sure of what it entails but when it comes to flow and rhythm, you were riding it here.




Content: I only managed to grasp few of what this piece is all about; Somewhat talking about bad governance(unfair judiciary judgement). Wish i could understand this fully and throw more light on it..





Rhyme scheme; Always the beast when it comes to aspect, guess that's what usually makes your OMs earn much respect: Achmed/ yacht deck), really shocking how you came about with that rhyme man, delicious multiz, even throughout the whole verse.






Flow: They already said it and you already know it, very tight!





Vocabulary: You're the 'Dictionary' man!





Closure:



Whoever said my people ain’t gorgeous can drop dead
Popping mad shit like Storm Front shock threads



Hope i'm not the only seeing this?.. Gor/Stor, Geous/ Front(the 'o' sound had effect), Drop/Shock, Dead/Threads. Much respect for this work..





10 fucking years? No wonder you are always killing it and by 'Last OM', that doesn't mean your 'Last collab' with people, right? Cause i'm Still hoping to read more from you honestly.
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