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CHAIN
Standard Member Joined: 14 November 2006 Status: Offline Points: 2769 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-4-0 Form: LWWLWW |
Topic: Media Blackout [My Last O.M] Posted: 20 March 2016 at 5:17pm |
Death to the trolls getting low like a squat rep I'm out I had a good run *2006-2016* Peace Edited by The Law - 21 March 2016 at 10:18am |
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levy420
Superior Member Joined: 22 May 2013 Location: San Antonio TX Status: Offline Points: 3443 Crew: Tha Syndicate Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 39-33-4 Form: LWWLLN |
Posted: 20 March 2016 at 9:02pm |
Dam chain going out with a bang for sure this was A+ material the flow was magnetic so much substance packed in a short bar piece crazy hope this really ain't your last om though
Praying for Imans to get shot on a mosque’s steps. Puppets tryna kill you like Terrorist Achmed While the ventriloquists are somewhere on a yacht deck. Arian supremacy; the K-Klan box set Crazy right here Right wingers world wide acting like the GOP’s pets Shit is getting ugly like a Mogwai got wet. Tryna get our credit right when there’s no gwap left Locked up for Glock theft in cell block F. Swap threats for what? on this one I’m Barack X… Peering out the window with a 52 shot Tec. It is like the riots in Watts when I’m not vexed Half a 16 will get you ate like an octet. Channeling the Panthers to make it more Pac-esque My two favorite parts you did your thing on this one raw as fuck stay up |
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Jay Homicide
Standard Member Joined: 11 November 2009 Location: UK Status: Offline Points: 1329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 9-3-0 Form: WWLWWW |
Posted: 21 March 2016 at 1:29am |
Dope as ever.
I'm officially the last gun slinger of HG now.
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Stalin
Site Moderator Joined: 24 November 2003 Location: United States Status: Offline Points: 2587 Crew: Renegades Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 34-12-2 Form: LNWWLW |
Posted: 21 March 2016 at 3:24am |
Get at me chain. That's an order.
As far as the verse, you already know. This piece is dope. Flow, rhymes chemo is all classic |
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+Sick-Witted+
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nomedic
Standard Member Joined: 11 January 2014 Location: South Africa Status: Offline Points: 1578 Crew: Hunger Games Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 35-25-0 Form: WWLLWL |
Posted: 21 March 2016 at 8:03am |
Chain
Salute homie its been an honor serving HG aside of you As far as this piece goes dawg you were able to gimme grief from the content but also gags from how you put it together but for a last piece homie I didn't see a call back that's my only beef with this but over all I clearly enjoyed this peace man |
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IsaiahtheGreat
Groupie Joined: 01 September 2014 Location: Mississippi Status: Offline Points: 288 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
Posted: 21 March 2016 at 9:08am |
Sucks that this is your last piece, man. This piece was filled with truth, and Im a sucker for social conscience pieces like this. The part though that stuck on to me though was this line right here
"Satanizing niggas just for being potheads." ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Man, this was nothing but the truth right here. I just seen an episode of "Weediquette" and this dude named Bernard Noble out in New Orleans is doing 13yrs for having 2 marijuana joints on him. He want get out until 2024 when he is 58yrs old. The shit is fucked up. But overall I loved the whole piece. Btw, I like the pic; very symbolic. |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 21 March 2016 at 6:55pm |
As ever,this drop was Ripe,and I can't believe this is
your last,but all the best though CHAIN..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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daydizzle89
Superior Member Joined: 23 July 2014 Status: Offline Points: 3805 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LWWLLW |
Posted: 22 March 2016 at 3:42pm |
The opening to this was really well worded. I definitely liked that opening line. The next line that followed was dope. Your ability to use abstract multis is dope as fuck. Your flow is always above par and your assonance here really shined. Nice The imagery and and vocabulary really setting a tone here. Great opener and your message is being consumed easily. Mock Neck? I felt this to be a little stretched or maybe i dont understand what you mean. Nethertheless this just keeps getting better as i read. That beef turning into ox flesh line was hot as fuck. using Gops was a clever use of the word and it worked well when reading this. Overall, this was a really dope piece. I enjoyed this beginning from end and i loved how you kept the same end rhyme assonance and your message stayed on point throughout. That is what makes you a top tier writer. The message you came here with was onpoint. i might not agree 100% with it but we all have our opinions. Alot of it i did agree with also. I know you have your differences with me and shit but on the real. that isnt going to change of what i think of you as a writer. Nice piece and hopefully you can find it in you to stay on LA. Good work here Brothaman |
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
Posted: 23 March 2016 at 5:42pm |
This is being slept on... homie that opener was FIRE especially the Achmed line... extremely clever scheme you got going on there.
The flow was retarded, multi on multi on multi... throughout the verse you had more quotable's and clever lines... damn shame you're leaving.. now I can't collab with you. Peace brother. |
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#Bananas
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Jet Swade
Groupie Joined: 23 March 2016 Location: USA Status: Offline Points: 75 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 1-2-0 Form: WLL |
Posted: 23 March 2016 at 7:04pm |
dude...that was freaking fire from beginning to end...I just joined the site today I wish this dude was still around :L |
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 29 March 2016 at 3:45pm |
First off cool pic with the black panther vs captain America. Very fitting.
Well this was dope tbh. The content and vocab were great throughout. To me it came as a social commentary piece with a cross over to how you feel about l.a to a lesser extent. Could be the other way round idk lol. I don't think many could have done a better job of this, you can tell it's a subject matter your passionate about shit was real here and as usual the execution was on that other level. Hope it's not the end.... Would be a shame for this to be your last and to bow out over the shit that went down. |
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#bananas
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H4ZE
Standard Member Joined: 13 July 2013 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1859 Crew: eNtiTy Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-6-0 Form: WWLLLL |
Posted: 04 April 2016 at 9:54pm |
Yeeeet bro this cant be your last OM. Lol. I really hope its not man fr.
This shit is really dope homie, your style has always been crazy to me man. The way you put rhymes together is mad crazy. The flow is dope as always. The content is dope as well, i love pieces like this. You've always been one of my favorite writers on this site and it sucks to see you go. I hope you're pullling a hopsin lmao. |
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-Que-
Standard Member Joined: 22 April 2010 Status: Offline Points: 2745 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 13-4-1 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 21 April 2016 at 12:29am |
Fuck it!... This shit right here had me noddin my head. Line after line spewed truth. Controversial undenying truth.
Fire Fonze!!! Fuckin FIRE!! |
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Mission
Standard Member Joined: 13 September 2014 Location: Madison. MS Status: Offline Points: 2291 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 8-9-1 Form: LWLLLN |
Posted: 21 April 2016 at 11:27am |
Bro, "Half a 16 will get you ate like an octet." This whole piece was just amazing. The content was deep, and the flow butter smooth as usual, this was a great way to go honestly. Hate for it to be your last, but farewell man, you killed it again.
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Storm $hadow
Groupie Joined: 25 July 2015 Location: Abuja Status: Offline Points: 329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:00pm |
I must feed this when i'm free
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 22 April 2016 at 2:32pm |
Nah nah nah nah nah nah.. You can't drop shit like this, as i'm getting back active, and just leave. You're gonna have me like the bitch in Titanic, clinging to a the OM's like it's a door - I'LL NEVER LET YOU GO CHAIN.
In all seriousness, the fuck is this: The beef has turned into a different kind of ox flesh The bull’s the cash cow of their next project. You're disgusting, too disgusting to hang up yet, not until we've had one last collab anyway. You selfish piece of shit. The rhyme scheme in this is why you're at least top 3 OM writer of all time. No questions. Keep up, and inbox me. |
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Storm $hadow
Groupie Joined: 25 July 2015 Location: Abuja Status: Offline Points: 329 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-4-0 Form: LLLL |
Posted: 24 April 2016 at 11:22am |
Opener: Not sure of what it entails but when it comes to flow and rhythm, you were riding it here.
Content: I only managed to grasp few of what this piece is all about; Somewhat talking about bad governance(unfair judiciary judgement). Wish i could understand this fully and throw more light on it.. Rhyme scheme; Always the beast when it comes to aspect, guess that's what usually makes your OMs earn much respect: Achmed/ yacht deck), really shocking how you came about with that rhyme man, delicious multiz, even throughout the whole verse. Flow: They already said it and you already know it, very tight! Vocabulary: You're the 'Dictionary' man! Closure: Whoever said my people ain’t gorgeous can drop dead Popping mad shit like Storm Front shock threads Hope i'm not the only seeing this?.. Gor/Stor, Geous/ Front(the 'o' sound had effect), Drop/Shock, Dead/Threads. Much respect for this work.. 10 fucking years? No wonder you are always killing it and by 'Last OM', that doesn't mean your 'Last collab' with people, right? Cause i'm Still hoping to read more from you honestly. |
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