Open Mic: writing to Little Richard

You ain't no Jeremy wade but these sure are the fishin waters
the way I flow, I'm known to be the clone of a river monster.
                                              The zone I'm in? Ballistic. Like a drone or a missile launcher.                                              
I'll run up on your home with the chrome and a liquor bottle.
                                Better hit the ground bro and run like a timid boxer.                                
Shots across the brow remind yourself of a livid father who
never wasnt drunk or cockin back just to hit your mama and
always thought of you as not his son but his little daughter..
Drop me on a site where i am hated, my scripts'll prosper.      
I'll give you all a chance to sing my praises.
A simple offer.      
I'm sitting wring rhymes on special k and a hit of acid
Listing to Little Richard ballads and Cindy Lauper

An example of a good hype verse, man! A short but good piece.. The flow was thorough and rhymes were good.. I personally like that 'i will prosper aspect'! Make it longer next time to get a detailed feed!

I don't know your alias to well,but I have read the slurs,and I have
also commented in some too,but I've also commented time is a healer,
your gonna have to ride this bull for awhile,but if your true to
what you say,then be strong.....anyways,nice piece,and I'd be lying
if I said I didn't like it,although short,it was an easly digested
drop,and your contents along with vocab was nice...good verse...

Crimson Juice wrote: I don't know your alias to well,but I have read the slurs,and I have also commented in some too,but I've also commented time is a healer, your gonna have to ride this bull for awhile,but if your true to what you say,then be strong.....anyways,nice piece,and I'd be lying if I said I didn't like it,although short,it was an easly digested drop,and your contents along with vocab was nice...good verse...

My alias?