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Just Belief 
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 Topic: Just Belief vs Sky Scrapur [Text] [0-3]Posted: 05 June 2016 at 7:44am |
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Sky Scrapur
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Posted: 07 June 2016 at 5:26pm |
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Kid get this straight, fuck what ya say, think or spit,
cause you nothing much, JUST a MYTH like Ridley's sig, It's either this battle will make him famous or leave him with a loser's scar, since against Sky It's J.B then an L cause all rookies wannabe superstars,...(WWE JBL) The more i eat these noobs the more Beans starves quite fast, cause clearly on sight kid you are as good as his only breakfast, Dude you are fulla mistakes before ya god and his blessings you won't receive, so since you got faith and your names a typing error, JUST BELIEVE, |
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Just Belief
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Joined: 03 June 2016 Location: L.A County Status: Offline Points: 54 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 0-1-0 Form: L |
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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 2:40am |
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"Scrapur" don't worry about typos, bloody your pussy must be on it's cycle,
You got tight flows, like a virgin about to be my hoe, Give it up "kid" like i'm "Michael",(Jackson) Your not "Hip Hop" that was "Easter Sunday" with kids and a "Bunny" on the block, Who are you to talk? I couldn't find a line that you would walk, besides my cock, You've been eating too many noobs your gased up, Like the "Special Class" you've been passed up, Beef you fucking Bovine you must've had too much fertelizer THC, so grassed up, You've been losing so much you pray just one (won) oneday, On any given Sunday, You aint going nowhere in this snowstorm you best to die upon the "Runway" |
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AxyRocker
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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 6:37am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Sky Kid get this straight, fuck what ya say, think or spit,cause you nothing much, JUST a MYTH like Ridley's sig, I see what you were tryna do here, with Just-a-myth play but you gotta be more aggressive than this, it came out kinda statementish It's either this battle will make him famous or leave him with a loser's scar, since against Sky It's J.B then an L cause all rookies wannabe superstars,...(WWE JBL) Again, you lacked the aggression, in the setup you basically said this one can go either way? You not confident enough to win? Thats sad! I see the name flip you tried in next line but it didn't quite connect, the first part of the punch and second part had little relation. The more i eat these noobs the more Beans starves quite fast, cause clearly on sight kid you are as good as his only breakfast, Ohkay, so you dissed yourself and beans and called him Beans' breakfast? Ya know beans has been regularly blamed that he is only good against noobs? Thats a bad thing if you're connecting to that aspect of him, Also you gotta show your strength not beans' , why his breakfast, why not yours? Dude you are fulla mistakes before ya god and his blessings you won't receive, so since you got faith and your names a typing error, JUST BELIEVE, I see what you were tryna do here, but is he supposed to be offended cause you said he wont be gettin any blessings from GOD? Again the name flip wasn't hard hitting. JB "Scrapur" don't worry about typos, bloody your pussy must be on it's cycle, You got tight flows, like a virgin about to be my hoe, Give it up "kid" like i'm "Michael",(Jackson) This is embarrasing, you called his flow tight? Bad wordings , also you gotta complete your bars just it wasn't complete till the Michael part writing Jackson in a bracket doesn't make it that way. Your not "Hip Hop" that was "Easter Sunday" with kids and a "Bunny" on the block, Who are you to talk? I couldn't find a line that you would walk, besides my cock, This is so gay, If I were you, I would refrain from the use of these kind of bars. You've been eating too many noobs your gased up, Like the "Special Class" you've been passed up, Beef you fucking Bovine you must've had too much fertelizer THC, so grassed up, Man! flipping is an art that very few people do justice to, you tried but failed, bring in some heat, some aggression. You've been losing so much you pray just one (won) oneday, On any given Sunday, You aint going nowhere in this snowstorm you best to die upon the "Runway" Not hard but okayish though one oneday didn't work out. Overall - both of you need to add in aggression or else it comes out rather statementish MVGT - Sky for trying name flips and stuff and actually attacking his opponent with personals as compared to JBs mostly generic bars
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Crimson Juice
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Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
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Posted: 15 June 2016 at 10:51pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Sky i thought your opener was OK,kind of on the light side of a punch,but still relevant really,I also think you using Ridley's sig didn't increase the power to much,but I do get what you was thinking and aiming for,your next bar was decent and did have a punch/play within it,it wasn't a bad shot really the lack of a real personal held it back,and that pretty much sums up your verse Overal,some light jabs one decent punch and some wierd wording.. JB i do see where you was trying to take the opening bar,but it was flat to read,the play and punch (kid/Michael)came off as a half attempt really,in fact your is verse mediocre to be honest, you did atleast try and make a punch connect,but your plays were on the basic side and didn't really back your punches/personals up, you did have a decent tempo though,but the sexual references let you down too,they weren't creative enough to work well,and since atleast 2 of your bars contained it,it hurt you Overal.. Overal there is a winner and for me thats Sky,he did out the 2 have the stronger piece,although not the best or the prettiest battle,I did have a moment or two within it,JB you need to look at your plays,they let you down and turned what punch you had to a jab.. Vote..Sky..peace. |
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Fentanyl
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Posted: 15 June 2016 at 11:56pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Sky Bar-1- cool refrence but not really a punch, you need to be more aggresive in ur attack Bar-2- i didnt like how you were saying he could become fameous if he beats you, this is a battle that shouldnt be in your marerial because your kinda giving him some credit in a wierd way, wwe line was just ok Bar-3- i like the first line, im new here but know beans is a high ranked member and that he has bodied a lot of noobs, second line wasnt really hitting for me Bar-4- wasnt really a punch, you need too have punchs to assert ur self in battles Just belief Bar-1- i didnt care for this much seemed like a child wrote this but maybe you are a youngin Bar-2- again this seems like it was written by a younger person, you should look at some high ranked writers on here and see what there doing to get a idea of how proper bars should be Bar-3- i just dont get this Bar-4- again this is not clicking with me Sky Keep practicing man, ur not horrible, you will get it JB Look at some of the higher ranking guys on here to see how its done MVGT (Sky) |
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Posted: 09 July 2016 at 1:45am |
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Sky wins via 3-0 KO
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