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Exoduzt
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Posted: 12 June 2016 at 6:17am |
Law your whack & its a fact that your flow is slow mo to your rivals- spinning in circles like netflix loading, how many times you gonna no show a title... Neek is my boy, so my deadly spits I guess I won't be givin' the same- .......Fuck that I'll fuck him up worse than Endev did at that video game!- plenty of shame, to go around like the 2 pussies who hoe showed,...Nigma & Law- Cus they couldn't come up with dope lines if they were given a straw- Cuba acting like hes gifted & raw, like hes not missin' the flaws- His only verse in mad long was against me , my diss musta been pissin' him off- (Golden Era!) So when I responded again he went and just shit in his drawers, Like an infant in awe- acted like I didn't hurt him twice, and in an instant he just shifted his gauze- In heat wave Scotty got 2 votes on me, he still lost but thought he was rhymin' fluid- challenged me again and when I accepted all of a sudden he didn't have time to do it!- Ya mind is stupid, cus I'm the kind of nusance, To find ya 2 cents- Use it against you so you feel like death, but I'm nice enough to tie your nooses- I'm hangin'n Art! Cus for real I need to make sure the picture is perfect- So what do I 'title it' when I cut him down & his face 'tags' the 'concrete' ? MISSING HIS PURPOSE- All in fun homies.... Edited by Exoduzt - 12 June 2016 at 6:48am |
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Beans
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Dope read duster.
to go around like the 2 pussies who hoe showed,...Nigma & Law- Cus they couldn't come up with dope lines if they were given a straw- Cuba acting like hes gifted & raw, like hes not missin' the flaws- His only verse in mad long was against me , my diss musta been pissin' him off- (Golden Era!) So when I responded again he went and just shit in his drawers, Like an infant in awe- acted like I didn't hurt him twice, and in an instant he just shifted his gauze This shit was dope tbh. Couple parts went off flow could tell this jus a key... But still dope read |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Rutter knows best
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Law your whack & its a fact that your flow is slow mo to your rivals- spinning in circles like netflix loading, how many times you gonna no show a title... decent start Neek is my boy, so my deadly spits I guess I won't be givin' the same- .......Fuck that I'll fuck him up worse than Endev did at that video game!- cool plenty of shame, to go around like the 2 pussies who hoe showed,...Nigma & Law- Cus they couldn't come up with dope lines if they were given a straw- Cuba acting like hes gifted & raw, like hes not missin' the flaws- His only verse in mad long was against me , my diss musta been pissin' him off- (Golden Era!) So when I responded again he went and just shit in his drawers, Like an infant in awe- acted like I didn't hurt him twice, and in an instant he just shifted his gauze- this was nice segment, flows nice, and some nice shots In heat wave Scotty got 2 votes on me, he still lost but thought he was rhymin' fluid- challenged me again and when I accepted all of a sudden he didn't have time to do it!- Ya mind is stupid, cus I'm the kind of nusance, To find ya 2 cents- Use it against you so you feel like death, but I'm nice enough to tie your nooses- another nice segment shots were heavier in this one I'm hangin'n Art! Cus for real I need to make sure the picture is perfect- So what do I 'title it' when I cut him down & his face 'tags' the 'concrete' ? MISSING HIS PURPOSE- i liked the closer went with a more intricate play and it worked well. good shit I enjoyed this it was put together nicely and i like how your mixing up the "talking to 'em style with more plays intertwined" always good to beef up the arsenal , props |
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#bananas
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Endeavor
Senior Moderator Wiggle wiggle said the bun that jiggle Joined: 03 April 2009 Location: Your kitchen Status: Offline Points: 10000102 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 5-4-0 Form: WWLWLW |
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You know something is the best read when it includes my name in the verse lol. I jest, this was pretty funny and you had some dope lines in it. Can't really give a detailed feedback cuz I'm on the phone right now but this was sweet bro!
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#Bananas
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Neek
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I gotta say exo. out of all the ones so far, this has still remained my favorite. flow was constant. content was really well crafted. but beyond that: it lacked the salt and pent up emotional pain from period strains. you wasnt in your feels, you was just giving the real. I think above all that is what makes a OM King. you craft a certain truth, even if its not absolute. as writing is so subjective, but you painted your assertiveness without being emotional and salty - when you have reasons to be. I truly loved this joint and my favorite line was the one aimed at me. really good man. ten stars out of five.
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#Bananas
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Exoduzt
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good looks everyone much appreciated
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Stalin
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Flow was insane in this. The multis were on another level. And you had some nm hard punches in there.. I liked this shit.
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+Sick-Witted+
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JackBarz
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Lol niggas just got fucked Yo Axo dope G!
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