Open Mic: "I Got The Keys" - Trizzy Tre ft. Beans |
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Trizzy Tre
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Posted: 27 August 2016 at 8:13pm |
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Thanks for the look Jimmy...
I see you're new, so keep feeding work and stay active man |
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Jimmy badass
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This was dope. Real nice 1-2 duo. Beans had some stand out bars and trizzys verse was just so consistent and smooth. A few of the bars were over my head, I don't know any of the members but it still came off nice.
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks Endeavor.
Outstanding breakdown as always bro... |
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Endeavor
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My bad guys, completely forgot lol.
LEGGO!
Beans n Dip:
Drop'n heat - None sweat! No matter a Deadline We got Keys On Deck! Pre-post, the last line of this segment went over my head... But I got it now lol. You really got stabbed with keys, eh? Talk about that Khaled dedication lol. Fire flow.
Clockin rounds, in time, I'm Kickin fucks in the dick & nuts..I'm sick as fuck I liked the scheme here, second line *feels* wordy but lo and behold, it actually works!
foolish chumps, Taking lifes a given. my lines snipe W/Precision I like how you worded the punch here. Real effective blow forreal.
What I mean is my Meaning is Right, 84 fights, meaning I'm Mean W/The rights.. Ha, last segment of second line is mad fire. Food bars bruh!
beleive beans is nice, my lethal lyrics leaving you weak hoes Bodybag. You win. Especially where you said NEEK.
yall fake fucks get in my face Till my knife scrapes & rakes guts Pretty potent closer, was hoping for something more scheme heavy as the entire verse was filled with that but we can't have it all right? Overall: I liked the verse a lot. Trizzlefish:
Call me Frankenstein how bodies create my genetic make-up! Okay... You're not playing here, eh? Flow was extra smooth here bruh!
Word, I like this right here. Nice play on Lord Kobe too.
Disliked this one the most. First line wording is weird and the second is a bit of a stretch for me. But that's because I don't believe ya'lls FBI.
I liked the section right here. Some personals and any Ye reference is always good.
Lmao....
Sheesh, that was brutal.
PUT SOME RESPEK ON IT! Dope closer. Overall: Really solid verse with a lot of punches. I've enjoyed this piece gents!
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#Bananas
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Trizzy Tre
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LOL Outstanding Beans, outstanding. Thanks Endeavor. |
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Beans
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oh yeah and for the record...i did get stabbed with car keys back in the day. 4 times. theres a personal for yall
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Endeavor
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Ok, I wanna break this down but ıma need a laptop for that. Check back in a few hours and ıma edit this post. Smh, been sleeping on this.
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Beans
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thanks for the feed yall
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks Juice. Always respect your feed and detailed breakdown...
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Shit guys only just saw this..
Beans done what Beans does,this was good man i liked it,to say you keyed this it was impressive really,the shots were good and aimed well,that Mission bar was witty,the contents are better than some ppl's writtens,this piece had a statement feel to it like some things needed to be pointed out and said,the tempo was also good,it bounced along in an effortless fashion,plus the vocab and plays seemed to back up what your typing,good shit here I believe...peace. Trizzy you got at a few members here too,like Beans you came with a verse that acted like a statement also,that Zin bar made me smirk for real,plus not an ounce of subtleness either,straight into firing off the shots,this was a good alround drop,your contents and direction were well aimed and your punches we're present too,this was a good collab on the face of it,plus I feel it's purpose has been served too,i liked it..peace. Overal this was a decent collab,your verses were battle orientated,but that just helped to back up what you guys wanted to be read,there were some real highlights to be had from both pieces here,plus I like the way your crew just rolls up and draws the line for ppl to cross,if they wish too that is,you guys do March as one as crews go,that I find kind of refreshing really,you have each others backs,Ripe work guys..peace. |
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"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance". |
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Trizzy Tre
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Thanks for the look Storm.
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Beans - Your delivery went well, the aggressiveness well felt. Coming down to your rhyme scheme, you went really good at this point even with some internals. Btw, i won't pretend to understand your verse(i'm not really familiar with most things). Would have added more if i understand it.
Trizzy - Your first bar was insane man, it was really good. I also dig the Kobe aspect. And the Zin? Heh, he was clearly the main focus. I like the way you first started with self hype before going into delivering some punches towards him. |
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Trizzy Tre
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Check back in a day or two? Is there something you're expecting to happen?? Medic, glad you picked up on the Life Of Pablo punch, wasn't sure everyone would get it. lol |
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a lot of shots fired in here fellas.
Beans crazy run of schemes in this. i like that the flow and the content weren't at all weighed down by the volume of repeat rhyme sound. takes a steady hand to pull that off. each turn of phrase had a really fresh feel to it too. Tre. some people really served notice in this one. some scathing attacks on Zin et al. these are sone hard ass shots to weather. you were hiring from all angles, liked the lee harvey oswald ref...like you had 8 shooters on the grassy knoll... well done guys...just an all around solid effort. impressive as fuck. very imperial. I'ma check this again in a day or two. |
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Beans
This had that raw grime feel to it I dig how you illustrate shit the flow here was dope and Pretty smooth I like how you Use a solid set up approach to them keys nice work Trizzy Mad respect to the high intensity of tension in these bars here the heat wave reference was unbelievable lol the smooth tung diss was funny too the flow was also smooth Nice collaboration here fellahs liked the work |
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Beans you came with it man.
What I mean is my Meaning is Right, 84 fights, meaning I'm Mean W/The rights.. kids Just a KEY feeding in sight. if Anything Raw Meats W/Beans I cut'em to Shashimi & Rice ^^^^^^..... This shit right here was fire |
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It's no sweat to drop heat. Idk I keyd this lol
Thanks for the feed yall |
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I'll drop a more detailed review on this later. Overall good job to both of you.
Altho, beans, there was part of a line that really kinda messed up the start for me. Maybe I misinterpreted the meaning, but if that's the case, it's something you need to be sure doesn't get misconstrued. "Drop'n heat - None sweat!" To me this is saying that you are dropping heat, but when you drop your heat it ain't hot. No one sweats literally/ also no sweats your drops. |
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Beans- Liking the opener. flow is smooth throughout this piece. I really liked your internals and your multi end rhymes. Helped the flow drastically. Transitions rhymes were all nice in some areas. Mission line was funny.
Trizzy Tre - Right off the bat i loved the choice of vocabulary. You always have a really punchy delivery and its unique. The LA meta with Kobe, it was dope and well worded here. That Zin/ Elite line was funny and hit pretty hard. Dope shit. Overall, great references, great delivery and nice choise of vocabulary throughout my friend. Good work Overall - Nice collab people. keep it up |
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Beans - Nice smooth verse. lol @ the mission bar and the sashimi & rice bar was real dope also.
Tre - Opening two bars were killer. lol @ the little zin and smooth fires. Both of ya'll had real consistent, aggressive verses. Definitely something that may get some people in the writing mindset after reading it. Also, I Co-sign what neek said about the getting hyped for Crewsades.
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