1-2 Punch League: Stalin vs Jackbars (1-2 week 6) |
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 Topic: Stalin vs Jackbars (1-2 week 6)Posted: 06 October 2016 at 12:28am |
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Due Friday midnight
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#bananas
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JackBarz
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Posted: 06 October 2016 at 9:17am |
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This Stalin fly nigga move off his own trajactory betrayal turned royalty that's my job to dethrone that treahery,
All I need is to dial homie I got Ya number like a phone Directory |
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Stalin
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Posted: 07 October 2016 at 12:27am |
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Jack bars? That's odd that you have no wins if your so hard
You couldn't take whats in the lines I ride if you stole cars Expos should be self explanatory |
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+Sick-Witted+
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MiMiX
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Posted: 07 October 2016 at 2:23am |
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Both use are tragic... like a bad habits... N that's it a habit no one else to rap slip I'm back kids....jump on ya face mouth stops more shots taken at for saken shit we just have taken time to here those lines those words spoken twice...close adive throw ya lyric n hit the limit make cunts feel it not just hearing...any way do ya queer thing clearly u feel it
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Scotty32
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Posted: 07 October 2016 at 11:27am |
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This is why newbies are blocked from getting access to the fields straight away.
MiMix, you can't post randomly, look around the site, see what others are doing, read the rules and the forum names. |
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Slecht
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Posted: 09 October 2016 at 2:50am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. jack, was ok. saying u have his number though, isnt harsh imo. stalin, decent, thought ur bar was more direct n thought it was a jab that landed more tbh vote stalin
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Posted: 09 October 2016 at 10:47am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. JackBars bar had merit, it rhymed and flowed well, but not much of a concept here and didn't hit at all hard. Stalin's was decent put together bar, below his usual standard, and not a great fan of the play here, but good enough. But there's only one winner here so, MFVGT ... |
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Posted: 10 October 2016 at 3:07pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Lmao @ Mimix Jack: Rhymes were ok but the bar was quite muddled. Kinda rambled a bit and 'got your number' lines are best avoided unless really original or relevant to the person you're battling. Stalin: I'm sensing a connection between 'Jack' and 'stole' but the punch on its own was good anyway. A bit light but overall with the mention of his record, clearness and rhymes the bar and punch were better in every category. Vote - Stalin
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Posted: 10 October 2016 at 6:46pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ko÷Jackson 5x Jack, gotta say bruv you got a rare talent there, cos even though I don't get what you're saying it's still good reading Gotta judge it on battle criteria though so it's not a good punch.... keep doing you it's arguably better some might say Stools Stalin, being honest I gotta say that I didn't get this one either It's not really trying to say anything that I can see, this falls short of landing on the target also Hard to pick a looser here.... Not much in it IMO Vote jack for looking like he tried harder |
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Posted: 10 October 2016 at 10:28pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. ok...better offering from jack than we've tended to see.. seems like he's getting a handle on it. ..not tremendously clear. ..but I'll translate as though you were referring to a despot's overthrow. Stalin: clean little shot here. not sure if you rushed cuz you didn't take jack overly seriously. anyhow i think you did enough to win here. .. +1 stalin... but maybe jack won amnesty |
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Posted: 12 October 2016 at 3:13am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Jackbarz- your lines were a bit to dragged out for me aka a bit to wordy and the point of the concept was lost. Not very smooth choppy and your concept was not powerfully direct personal or aggressive was to much like a statement with to little creativity. I caught the metaphor but I don't see how that's a punch, still statmentish Stalin- your bar was more direct and your concept was more interesting and better executed. Your metaphor stood out more and your multistory were tighter. All and all your bar was just better with a punch that connected much cleaner. Therefore, MVGT-STALIN |
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