Text Battle Archive: Beans vs jackbars (3-0)

Can't go back cus Im in
Too deep,
Snooze on me I permanently put Ya into sleep,
You have no Idea what I been through holmes,
This cat claim dope?,that's just lyrical fraud,
That sickness he claims lands em'in a clinical ward,
A fucked up brain I came out before 9months right after I ripped my own
UmbilicaL ward,
Modern day Messiah the fuck beans needs a
Miracle for,
This is a race and Im never tired,
You be burning rubber with bad
Tyers,
Slipping all over the place consequences are
Dire,if You and Ya mates ever try to conspire

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Can't go back cus Im in
Too deep,
Snooze on me I permanently put Ya into sleep,

Weak Opener,  No direct way to take this . 1/5


You have no Idea what I been through holmes,
This cat claim dope?,that's just lyrical fraud,
That sickness he claims lands em'in a clinical ward,
I Couldn’t Catch and the Flow the punch lacked any substantial key points (like what claims ECT..) 1/5

A fucked up brain I came out before 9months right after I ripped my own

UmbilicaL ward,
Modern day Messiah the fuck beans needs a 
Miracle for,
Um, this seemed more of a hit on you more than on beans. No punch or directness to beans. 1/5

This is a race and Im never tired,
You be burning rubber with bad
Tyers,

Yea again not seeing any direct punches , or maybe im just not getting the concept. 1/5
Slipping all over the place consequences are
Dire,if You and Ya mates ever try to conspire

Ok clearly this one needs work. To what are you directing this towards? I have to say this is a terrible closer. Point Blank  1/5

 Beans 16 October 2016 at 12:30pm  Quote   Reply

Jackbars


See...
Brother I think all wack writers should die & you a non threat
That's jus an easy way of saying that you & I are NOT friends

Ok, Beans I can see the hostility, and I get the picture. Decent opener. 3/5

You on point? Nah kid, we all know you gay boy $ ya cliques not the hardest
Its known that Jack crews off to the point they use him as a bukkake target

Ha, this one made me laugh,  Unfortunately the picture was painted. 4/5

I'll beat ya lifeless, I'm jus addressing that I can't deny you'll
Leave this battle folded backwards & torn up if you cramp my style

Ok I see the punch, it  needed a little corrected  imagery but I see it. Decent. 2.5/5

Ya bars will never be sharp, even in text you choke up
You can try to start from scratch, but battling you'll get ya throat cut

Nice punch and it was direct. Clearly the research was done on this one. 3/5

Fuck this key style. I'm in jersey for a funeral, ya text won't drop me
Come to this state today & I'll make the hole big enough to fit an extra body

Ok, decent closer. I see the hostility and punch. 3/5

JACK-5

Beans-15

All in all, this was a clear beat down. Jack your flow was hard to catch and it seemed you rushed this battle or something. Ive looked at some of your other battles and this is clearly a bad drop for you.  Keep yo head up and keep at it. Beans, ive seen much better from you actually but due to the circumstances of the other drop you clearly had this won from the get go.

 

MVGT; Beans, for flow, and the imagery with punches.

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jack, you still refuse to listen to the advice given to you repeatedly. there was not a single personal in there, you didn't have anything clever/witty/ or even lightly hitting.

beans, this was an easy win, your verse wasn't bad, but its clear you made it quick and easy, no need to overexhaust yourself.

 

honestly, I don't see a point in jack battling until he proves he will listen. these all seem to just be as usefull as no showing. not to be a dick, but you need to listen, otherwise you wasting ppls time when they got to read your ish.

 

 

hands down vote goes to beans