1-2 Punch League: [1-2 Shit Creek] Rid vs Con vs Rut [wk12] |
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 16 November 2016 at 3:47am |
lets paddle boys...
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Rutter knows best
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I been built from skill n greatness, some kills are sick n heinous
I'll torture Console...But in comparison rids your'll be quick n painless Cons soul/ console |
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#bananas
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Ridley Squat
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Apparently, we only diss just 1 opponent ... then he didn't.
No shows so far have been : Kich, Fox, Jimmy, Exo, Law, Zin, BEANS, Skep, Vellum, Intrikit, BEANS, Jay, Ashley, BEANS, Slecht, DJ Flame, Hawksdevil, Droidian (not his fault), Slecht, and BEANS ... and almost all don't get to stay in ... except ... Listen Rutter, The League your rocking's great ... but I must be insistent ... Please wipe the Bean juice off ya face and try and be consistent! |
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Concrete
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Concrete in shit creek is just dumb to start with, I been stomping em' calmly
if I'm "in the same boat" as rid and rut, it's only cos I'm dumping their bodies!
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spume corrupt
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Loved this shit creek battle 3 dope ass writers, heavyweight league performers throwing it down I'm just gonna do me here and give 100 to the facts according to me! Rutter throws back Honestly I think you already know bruv.....the con/sole thing has too much mileage, so was gonna be hard to make work.. decent attempt though Rip the spot Humour/Insult/Recently Relevant with a dope sharp short sweet delivery and strong rhyming......That shit is hard to beat Con served Nice aggressive approach overall, plus good use of the shit creek theme to invoke visuals, just felt not directly going after either opponents held this back Gotta vote Ridley here, he had the best bar in this match because displayed his verse with more classic battle elements than the others Nice battle guys Everybody had strong points here |
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Goryo.
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Rutter: Rhyming was on point. I think if you went with the Console play and added more depth instead of the dig at Ridley the bar would've hit more effectively. It lost momentum towards the end for me. Rid: It was nice and personal. Almost felt like you were scolding him. It was also a creative way to make a Beans nameplay with it being relevant to current events. Con: As usual we have smooth flow and rhymes. I appreciate the humour in your approach and the way you can add depth to the most simple angles. A nice little dig at your opponents. Overall: Everyone came correct with rhymes and flow and we saw 3 different styles of punch. I'm gonna go with Concrete though cause the bar had every element I appreciate when it comes to punchlines. Ridley wasn't far off and his had a little more ... sass behind it. But I preferred Concrete's angle and the way he disrespected both using the 'shit creek' play. Vote - Concrete
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Lord Puente
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. rut, I will say im a bit disappointed here. you have been one of the most consistent in the league with nice hard bars, but I felt as if you dropped the ball here... slick rhymes, but nothing beyond that. rid, your exo is longer than your bar... and that after you made it super small font... but none the less... in regards to the bar, it was a jab, no haymaker. altho it carries a lot of truth, as beans has no showed once again, and that's the second time against me in the 1-2 league... so bonus points for it ending up being a extra fresh situation (albeit not known at the time of posting). con... damn man, you have been hot this whole time in the league and you did not disappoint here. I loved the continuation of the theme, making that your concept for the bar and how you were able to change the perception of why this si occurring. what made this extra strong was the fact that in this case you bodied them both... and your in shit creek, and you will make it out after dumping the bodies. vote: con
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SiQ
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. 1St off i gotta say this was a dope 3way battle!!! Rut- cool bar, but the outdated wordplay made it less impact full Rid- funny bar but it was only towards 1 opponent. Con- dope fukin bar bro. I loved how u tied in the title of this battle "shit creek" and directed it towards both opponents!!! Nicely done, sir. Vote- con |
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