1-2 Punch League: Kiki Spirez vs Lorde Puente [w14] |
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 Topic: Kiki Spirez vs Lorde Puente [w14]Posted: 01 December 2016 at 1:26am |
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Due Friday Gents
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Lord Puente
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Posted: 02 December 2016 at 2:42am |
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its all downhill from here motherfucker, look at you now,/
locked down the crown one round turned around then lost it a week down./ |
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Kiki Spirez
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Posted: 02 December 2016 at 9:41am |
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Imma stab this weakling - watch him sway as his knees knock, He'll struggle with an LP leaking, like it's Dre with a Detox.. |
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Posted: 02 December 2016 at 1:23pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Puente yeah I liked the concept of your offering here,turned into a nice personal/punch that landed aswell,the wording seemed awkward in the 2nd line,due to the double word exposure and sounding vowels,but it didn't hamper the bar on the whole though,a good directed and aimed shot here I feel,plus it was a current concept which for me just aided the punch... KiKi now this was a smooth well crafted punch here,on many fronts really, it was tailored made so to speak,nice wordplay to tie in the punch and personal,and a good tempo running along side it too,the whole concept was good to be honest,yet it all came off as simple,which shows how fluent it was,from set up to punch... Overall good tussle here,both did well with directed and tailored bars,but there is a winner here and that was Kiki,here's why,he's offering was just that bit cleaner on landing a blow,plus it had a strong concept backed by good wordplay, Puente you did well,just Kiki was the better man here today, Props though for stepping in and dropping a bar.. Vote..KiKi...peace. |
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Posted: 03 December 2016 at 3:12pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. LP: Aggression on point. It was relevant and it was personal. But what lessened the impact for me is that it was more of a statement. I mean as part of an OM it would be fire but the content didn't translate into a punch and that ruined the momentum for me. Kiki: Less personal than LP's but it was a clear and creative punch. The wording wasn't as good as previous offerings but I still got what you were saying and didn't have trouble keeping up with the bar. Overall: A polarizing battle and I think if LP put more of a twist on his punch he would've taken it because his raw materials were on point. Kiki came with a more traditional punch that was less personal but to me it just felt like it catered to what the league is about more. Good battle guys but I have to go with the more punchier punch. Vote - Kiki
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Posted: 03 December 2016 at 5:53pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Lorde - nice personal but no play in there. It works as a straight diss but without the play in there it's was just a statement. Still good ammo to use. Kiki- bit of a dated reference but I haven't seen an lp play since I did one on do flame. It wasn't your best but it worked and the execution was good enough to edge it. Mvgt kiki |
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Posted: 04 December 2016 at 11:40pm |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Wow, this battle was lop-sided in my opinion... Lord- Seemed to me like you focused mainly on your flow and rhyme scheme then hitting your opponent... You through in a nice little personal on how kiki held the belt but instantly lost it, but the punch just didn't connect hard enough.... Good attempt, good concept, just not enough affect... 6.5/10 Kiki- Nicely executed, good nameplay, nice metaphore, well done... This was a solid bar... good set up and a nice delivery..... Good choice in punching... the flow and rhyme scheme was together nicely.... There's not much I can say on the tip side, looking forward to seeing more bars from you.... 8.5/10 Overall- Kiki actually punched harder and hit solidly... Lord had a good idea just didn't follow through with the punch properly, if worded and delivered differently I definately feel this battle could have turned out differently, good punches looking forward to seeing your next week punchlines.... Vote- Kiki
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Posted: 05 December 2016 at 10:24am |
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This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Punter Don't think the concept had enough going for it man Maybe if you had been a champ on this site for longer in any capacity but you haven't so it's not enough to call him out on that front Kiks Aggressive start I liked but how you worded the start of the second line was not working, the tie in was pretty clever though with stabbed and leaking Just the he'll struggle bit I didn't like Gotta vote Kiki here for having the better play |
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Posted: 09 December 2016 at 3:52pm |
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Lord Puente - the punch itself didn't feel hard enough ..the execution of the concept was shaky ..should've taken more time framing it . Also the multies weren't smooth enough .
Kiki - Good set up and Punchline ...the build to the punchline was smooth and the line hits u clear and is a clever play . Mvgt - kiki |
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Posted: 09 December 2016 at 3:53pm |
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We are on week 15.
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