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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 25 January 2017 at 1:15am |
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 25 January 2017 at 7:48am |
3-0 KO...onto the next one.
RKB vs Kiki. RKB drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. Kiki has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when Kiki drops (min 3 votes required). Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 28 January 2017 at 6:11pm |
RKB? Will move on if not tonight...
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 29 January 2017 at 2:03am |
Ahem...
The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) expo's Beat by Spume in the champ match I beat him in pic match, he wore a cap in both pics "the binder of titans" is their slogan He's the leader n couldn't get enough people for Crewsades
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#bananas
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Kiki Spirez
Superior Member Joined: 30 December 2008 Location: Chesterfield Status: Offline Points: 4374 Crew: Kratos Kind Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 68-26-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 30 January 2017 at 11:00pm |
Created 1-2. Started verse with 'ahem'. Beans knocked him out of 1-2, and is in his crew. Did mags with lots of jifs. Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. |
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S Dubb
Groupie Joined: 03 December 2016 Location: Cincinnati Status: Offline Points: 404 Crew: Alter Egos Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 2-7-1 Form: LLLLNL |
Posted: 05 February 2017 at 10:33am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. RKB: The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body Decent opener, okay personal, light jab Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi Okay, nice little punch, another decent personal I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask Decent personal but poor wording in this bar, the wording hurt the affectiveness of the punch Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) Nice wordplay resulting in a solid punch, your best bar Overall this was a good showing from you..... This was one of your better battle verses, good work on this one..... You came with personals, and you used them to land some decent punches..... The wordplay was dope and that was an affective punch...... This was one of the best verses I've seen from you.... Good drop, and solid punches..... Kiki: Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! Okay personal, but a played concept, in my last battle against Rut I used something similar about him running the league/tourney and not making it no where. I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, Decent punch, also a decent personal You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, This was the best bar, solid punch, and a good personal 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. eh, not feeling this closer, poor choice in wording and the flow was shakey... Not feeling this bar Overall this was a pretty decent verse...... Your opener was a played bar though, the fact he runs the 1-2 so many people have used against him, them bars aren't really affective no more..... Now the bar about Beans eliminating him was hard, the best bar of the battle, from both of you actually in my opinion..... The last bar, the wording was poor and the flow was off, so I wasn't feeling it either..... This isn't one of your best verses, but it was an okay drop overall.... Punches- RKB Personals- Kiki Wordplay- RKB Flow- RKB Creativity- Kiki Enjoyment- RKB Vote- Rutter Knows Best The reason I'm voting for RKB is because his verse was more consistent...... Every bar had atleast a light jab within it..... Plus his Mutiny line was very affective..... The fact that he landed more punches is what got him the win...... Kiki didn't come as hard as usual, he only produced one actual solid punchline..... The rest of Kiki's bars were either played concepts or he just worded it too poorly...... I feel had he came more consistent it could have went the other way..... Due to RKB being more consistent landing some kind of a punch in every bar he gets my vote...... good battle though both of you.......
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Topical Twist League= 1-0
1-2 Punch League= 0-3 Regular Text= 0-1 Alias= 0-1 Topical= 1-0 Horrorcore= 1-0 Overall= 3-5 |
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Posted: 10 February 2017 at 2:37am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Ok, here we go.... Rut: The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body ...... Cool play, nice angle and set up. Solid opener - 3.5/5 Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi ...... Ok, 2.5/5 I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask ...... Decent personal and punch - 3/5 Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) ..... Nice closer, good wording and set up to punch - 3/5 Overall - 12 Ki: Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! ...... Ok opener, think it could have been worded better to inflict more damage. 2/5 I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, ...... Decent, but nothing overly hard hitting - 2.5/5 You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, ........ Ok, but no real angle on this punch, more of a statement - 2/5 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. ...... This was solid. Strong punch..Nice concept and whine personal. lol best bar of the battle. - 4/5 Overall - 10.5 Good battle. Thought Ki missed on a few just trying to flip bars, but had the bar of the battle. Rut was more consistent with his punches that gave him the edge. Your opener was nice.... MVGT - Rutter |
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 10 February 2017 at 11:27am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Hmmm,tough one this.. RKB.. Ahem... The champ put you to sleep, wishing you never entered this hobby To my memory foam plays made you lose n boy we all remember that body (Yep that'll work,nice wordplay here a good direct personal/punch with a little humour entow,the set up was tied to the punch well with the sleep/memory foam aspect also, a good opening bar that had some gusto about it..) Set ups just sloppy, pic match you got bullied killed n cooked Ki We watched u fall flat pictured in all caps like a rookie with a multi (OK i see the intentions here,and to be fair this didn't quite damage him much,this bar came off more as a clowning/diss for me really,there was a light punch,or should I type jab here but it didn't hit as hard as your opening bar,still it carried merit on the whole..) I mean fuck me, being in Kratos no wonder you tryina act The Binder of Titans? Getting 4 guys for Crewsades wasn't a giant ask (lol..this made me snigger,this bar is deeper than it first appears really,the cheeky little personal with his acting,and then the direct personal on his crew status,then it hit me, you highlighted the same problem I had trying to muster up ppl from my crew to get in on the act at the crewsades which then wiped the smile of my face,as I felt the blow along with Kiki here,good shot..) Just silence..that speaks volumes n he still thinkin he a soldier Crews mute n he just stood there while his kinship fucked him over (Mutiny) (again solid wordplay here,the punch/personal landed well also i thought, and again directed via his crew more than an all out personal,but hey it is what it is,plus to be honest it still worked well,although the play here carried the whole bar for me really, a good closing shot..) KiKi.. Remember I beat you last, let's throw that match inside of the mixture, How can you NEVER see a final, when you fucking decide all the fixtures?! (this was quite a clever punch/personal really,clowning him via his eyesight and battle abilitys,I liked the no messing approach here also just straight into it with the factual content too,like stay in your place bitch vibe running through it,nice and direct here..) I was spotted at 3 of them, so you can go and 'ahem' a lot, Cos that aint a cough - it's the choke every time that you get a shot, (again with the factual content that for me is working for you,the punch and personal were good,and this attacking slant i like too,I also like the subtle play here aswell,like he's mistaking his intro cough as arrival,rather than a gag,good bar..) You diss my crew too? Do you think i'm alone in this mission? At least I lead - You follow, and Beans owned you in your own competition, (a very smooth and directed punch/personal here,that says fuck you,you ain't shit, plus coupled with some dry humour this bar ticks the boxes for me,the vibe here was aggressive which i like to read in battles,and in truth this aggression has been tagging along from the opening bar really,well played..) 1-2's got you thinking you're 'in the frame', so let this Vet assist ya', This time you won't get jifs to whine how voters didn't 'get the picture'.. (again humour raises its head within,coupled by a good and well aimed punch that hit with weight,again some good subtle wordplay that backed up the personal approach here,and again aggression came into play with a sarcastic vibe entow,that just adds to the bar,good work..) Overall solid battle were the decision is a hard one to call,I liked both pieces that are on display,and because of this fact i read both verses twice as to help with a choice, this didn't really work as I still found it hard to separate you both,because the contrast between the drops seems to cancel each other out,so i broke up each piece and looked for what appeals to me more,and the only thing that separated you both was the aim/ aggression,so I'm going to go against the grain here and give Kiki the nod here.props to both here and solid outings from both.. Vote...KiKi..peace. |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 14 February 2017 at 7:45pm |
2-1 RKB
3-0 KO...onto the next one. Triz v RKB Triz drops first. Within 48hrs of this post. RKB has 48hrs to respond. 48hr voting window opens from when RKB drops. Voting closes on 48hrs or if KO or best of 7 rule is activated first. |
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Trizzy Tre
Superior Member Joined: 28 March 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5101 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 30-7-1 Form: WLWLWW |
Posted: 15 February 2017 at 3:02am |
Yo....
1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! Empire. Edited by Cuba - 18 February 2017 at 1:26pm |
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 16 February 2017 at 1:02am |
..This guy Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body Expo's = rnb rutter n beans/text battle rank
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#bananas
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Crimson Juice
Site Moderator Joined: 20 December 2015 Location: U.K. Status: Offline Points: 3258 Crew: Lyricist Inc. Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 6-11-0 Form: LLWLW |
Posted: 17 February 2017 at 12:10am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Trizzy.. 1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! (nice opening bar here,the set up line tied in well with the punch, and the personal wasn't to bad either,the wordplay was also solid here which just gave this bar more weight on landing,i liked it good shot..) Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! (lol..this bar was quite witty and a good personal to boot too,I like the way your going at him via the crew angle,i also like how your creating your punches via this course, again the wordplay was good also,so far 2 thumbs up here..) That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! (hmm now whilst this is a good bar,it had a feel of been forced,I mean the punch/ wordplay was nice,but the personal was lacklustred I thought,comparing them to your previous bars it seemed like a filler,but it did have merit still..) Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! (yep another solid bar where everything was in order,from punch to personal and wordplay,the set up was loosely linked to the punch via the word stomp,which tallied with the film reference clicking heels so nicely done,again going at him via the crew angle (which is working for you may i add) which was aimed well on the whole,a good strong closing bar here..) RKB.. Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act (lol..i do like to read humour in a verse,it adds heaps to the strength of a punch in battles,and to be honest this bar curled my lips in one corner on reading,not the best personal in my opinion,but the punch did land here,so a good opening bar..) Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy (this personal here was directed and aimed well,the punch although present was no haymaking really, but it did hit home all the same,I liked the angle of sarcasm in this bar too,a good inclusion which also helped aswell,good bar..) N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon (very clever this punch here Rut's,linking Lyons to Trizzy being leader of Empire,and RnB as in Rut's and Beans as the talent,which also translated into a heavy punch,a well thought out one at that,the wordplay was also good,your strongest bar yet..) Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body (yeah good closing bar,nice punch/wordplay too,the personal was present also,and the twist on the whole was a nice inclusion aswell,also the set up was ripe in the way of linking the 2 lines here,although this bar had some elements of selfhype,it was done in a discreet fashion that it didn't come off as smug,and ended up working well also,i'll even say now,well played..) Overall good battle,and good strong shots from both too,this is truly a hard battle to pick a clear winner,both were pretty even for me and if I could i would call draw, Trizzy had the better alround personal,whilst Rut's had the better wordplay via creativity, both were even in the punch department for me,hmm I think by the width of a coat of paint I'm going to go with RKB,(JUST,& I MEAN JUST).. Vote...RKB..peace. |
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 18 February 2017 at 1:34pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. I thought this was a really good battle between two guys who clearly know what they're doing. For me, both verses were solid and landed consistent hits. Triz highlights were the closer & the background punch. RKB highlights were the counter offensive (which I thought was the best line of the battle) and the closer. For me what it came down to was really impact, I think on the whole RKB did a better job of cutting into Triz, with sharper disses which just gave him the edge overall when it came down to evaluating whose punches landed the hardest. So on that basis my vote goes to RKB. Good battle guys, this is the type of quality I wanted to see when I setup the event. |
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 February 2017 at 10:50pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Yo.... 1,2 Punch semifinals u 'choked against Beans', ...bro it's timeless... So I'll keep "pumping his gut" with fists n I don't know the Heimlich! Dope personal here...Nice Idium punch here but could have been worded better by not saying "idk the heimlich" Don't deny it! ur LA jester, crew jokester ...skills what u lack Clown... Makes him Empire's Green Screen, how ur always 'play'in the background'! thought this was another dope personal That's facts pal! Fuck your forced personals, ...he'll try harder... Cuz ur notorious to fabricate-a-line worse then Lebron's barber!! this was a cool punch W/the fabricate a line but as a personal this is a stretch Ruts garbage, everyone in our crew Stomped u out once, just face it bro... You'll always be on the "cliques heels" like there's no-place-like-home! Dope play here but felt it was worded poorly(the punch its self). i liked the concept but it came off weird tbh. vs ..This guy Said he'd put " Swords in a box " he was pretty clear with that, We told him work his magic...This faggot pulled a disappearing act This was dope Manc n Orions the same story, even his crews respect has died, Fuck a "Counter offensive"...its hard enough to defend this guy DOPE play right here man. nice flip on a played personal this was nice N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon I liked this wordplay here bro. solid hit Claims I'm in his shadow, bitch you get the hands ya try n stop me Punches light up ya front, you said it ...I'm the man behind this body Bit of a basic play here man i wasnt a fan of this tbh Overall - this was a dope battle here. Felt both came with personals and some creative angles. felt both their closers were light tho. Trizz had a few more lighter bars than RKB and RKB used a played personal on Trizz but his angle on them were dope. I gotta edge this to RUTS with the more consistant verse here. Deff battle of the tourney. V/Enbombz
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 20 February 2017 at 10:50pm |
***RUTTER***
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1-2 Season 1 Final Champ
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The Law
Site Moderator God of the Minions Joined: 15 June 2013 Status: Offline Points: 5504 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 64-8-8 Form: LNWWWW |
Posted: 20 February 2017 at 11:19pm |
3-0 KO RKB moves on
Beans vs RKB
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Beans
Superior Member Joined: 12 October 2013 Location: MA Status: Offline Points: 6718 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 95-24-5 Form: WWWWWW |
Posted: 22 February 2017 at 9:55pm |
Expos: his bar vs Trizz "N every time you try pull that leader crap, I swear dude we're dying Cos Empire's only top ten talents R'n'B, ya past ya prime like Lucius Lyon " RNB aka Rut N BEANS Listen fuck boy... You needed help in a 1 bar battle league! pathetic production of course Ironic you brought in 'LORD for the long run'.. while real battle HE had you commin up short! & while we on that subject? Ya bars all season werent bout gettin heavy! Day in & day out You put work into that league! Till I Clocked you out in the Semi's Vs trizz you hardly edged a win, You've never beat me so go & Tell SYN I sent you No matter if its 'Votes or bars', YOU've always had to Mention BEANS to see WIN credentials!!^^ I King shit! while you survive off my scraps - RUT, you not a leader We could 'recruit DTK while he goes ghost' & still you'd always be Empires Bottom feeder
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Rutter knows best
Senior Moderator Joined: 15 March 2014 Location: Manny hood Status: Offline Points: 4529 Crew: EMPIRE Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 44-12-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 24 February 2017 at 12:43am |
LP was a food battle, 2nd bars a statement..fake stop that trash Lies can get you killed n you Always die against Concrete FACTS Levi came in fancy dress as a Mexican n still properly clowned kid Jokes aside..how you lost that made Empire look like the comedy outfit I didn't vote on you n Ki, it's a good thing i hadn't bothered Funny you dropped Bombz in your votes, That day you were cannon fodder King? Been chasing the thrown for 3 years, n this cunts got destroyed Only way dude get a turn in the chair's as a fucking judge on the voice |
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#bananas
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Cuba
Senior Moderator Legendary Assassin Joined: 14 June 2004 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 12327 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 47-22-0 Form: WWWWLW |
Posted: 26 February 2017 at 10:31pm |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator. Come on guys, you need to support shit like this with votes (and quickly!!) to make us continue to provide these types of things. What is it, nearly 30 people signed up to IC2 but nobody bothered to vote on this? I'll get this started... Beans I thought this was solid without having anything remarkable in there. Foundations were all solid but although you utilised a lot of personal content I felt the edge was lacking. Good example was the opener, I get the punch but it feels a bit meh/'so what' that he got beat off LP...it was a "food battle" so doesn't really feel like it has much relevance, so I think you need to be sharper in the setup to make it really work for you...the core concept should be "LP is shit & he walloped you" but it didn't really come across like that & ended up being a bit statement-ish. That was the weak point...the next two I liked, pretty straight forward but good, personalised, solid hits...the second was a bit statement-ish to an extent, but I think you got away with it to an extent. The closer I really liked, you got the balance way better...you really got the oneupmanship style diss in there...so you kind of dismissed DTK & by association hit RKB harder, plus it was a real nice (very fresh) wordplay to boot. So that one was real nice. So overall I think you had 1 weaker punch, 2 good ones, and 1 very good one. Would've really liked to see 2 good, 1 very good & 1 great from a guy of your calibre...but I get that it's hard to motivate yourself to rip into someone you're cool with. Ultimately you come out with a "good" rating for me here. RBK Lol...gotta give you big props for that opening flip, you basically said what I just said...then you span that into a real nice punch in the second line. I get someone might say it's a 'played' diss to throw the Concrete thing at him...but you combined it with your flip/play combo to really deliver an excellent hit off the bat. Plus it compares favourably to his opener as it's a similar style assault. Those are the type of details that really separate a top tier battler in my eyes. Second punch was another superb one...real great use of the personal to get a 1-2 punch in there & make a connected wordplay into a big hit. Was a real great combination of a comedy hit & a disrespectful hit. Next one continued in the same vein of tenacity...I thought the Enbombz element was a little crowbarred in there to add an element, as ultimately the Ki battle isn't really connected to the Enbombz vote...but that said, I loved the punch & I felt the disdain in the filler line, so think you get away with that one & you landed another quality hit. Closer was a nice hit...good personal diss in the filler. The ultimate punch was ok, I liked the 'turn in the chair' setup but the ultimate punch wasn't as nice as the rest so looked a bit weak by comparison. Still good, but just not as heavy hitting as the rest. Overall for me I felt you had 1 great hit in there, 1 very good one, 1 that was somewhere in between & 1 that was good. You also generally just came across sharper, and I think that's a function of your succinct style & utilisation of your syllable count...you really keep the 'fluff' down to a minimum and it results in verses that deliver. For me I think this was pretty similar to the Triz battle...nothing particularly wrong with Beans verse, it was a good one, but I think Rutts just had the edge and brought more tenacity and slightly stronger punches delivered in a slightly prettier package that mean he came out on top in this one. Vote = RKB |
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Lord Puente
Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
Posted: 01 March 2017 at 12:44am |
This vote has been accepted by a moderator.
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beans, i liked the first bar (although, come on... of course i beat him, no surprise). n i like the multi at the endsecond bar was better, i like the clock in/out ref that you added as well, this was my fav bar of yours, solid job. 3rd bar could have been wrded better, end rhyme a stretch for me, maybe in audio you can get away with it, but not text or if you got an accent, but fuck your accent, this is text. none the less it still had a punch with other rhymes, so def still a hit. 4th was semi dope, but didnt quite hit hart. like an open hand slap maybe.
up, i won the battle). the play is on point tho with the Concrete facts. second bar, you got a big fat ugly "that" smack dab in the middle of the punch that is making my eyes bleed... none the less this was a solid hit, really nice. you guys and your research. now i know all the notes you must be jotting down in your notepad. third bar isnt connecting for me, i dont really care for this bar at all. then your final bar was dope, i liked that one a lot, funny. mvgt ruttere, he was more consistent with harder punches (minus that one bar... which is 25% of your drop). he had the hardest bar of the match, and was more consistent with hard punches, altho there were some hiccups.
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