Audio Mic: here's an interlude from 'thejoyride' |
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harrydirtface
Newbie Joined: 23 April 2017 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 7 |
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Posted: 23 April 2017 at 1:54pm |
sup guys,
for the last year i've been working on a project called 'thejoyride', it started with a few tracks that had a similar feel so i put them together and decided to make it 8-10 tracks long. so far i have 4 tracks mastered, ready to go. so im going to be uploading them on my soundcloud over the next couple of months. the concept of the project is nothing deep. just a reflection of my life over the past 4-5 years. driving around with my friends, smoking, taking psychedelics and being hedonistic anyways, here's the first drop. let me know what u think.. https://soundcloud.com/harrydirtface/pink
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Lord Puente
Newbie Final Boss Joined: 05 July 2016 Location: Florida Status: Offline Points: 1814 Text Rank: Unranked Stats: 4-2-0 Form: LWWWLW |
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If you go feed others, they will likely feed you back. We all hungry, we all gotta eat
In the meantime, I'll embed this for you https://soundcloud.com/harrydirtface/pink |
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Kairo
Newbie Joined: 29 March 2017 Location: CAD/US Status: Offline Points: 19 |
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Yo the production on this is fire. I really like your lyrical style, way more straightforward, catchy, and relatable. More about songwriting rather than technical prowess and this is way more in touch with what I like about hip hop. Nice play on words, flow is pretty cool, and the vocal production/mix is great.
The only thing I'd say is to further distinguished your hook with a couple more layers (even if it's subtle). The cadence change is dope and it's a nice hook, love the little melody, love that it repeats but maybe boost the ad libs a bit more or something! Great work, can't wait to hear your full project. Like LP said, share the wealth and don't just dip after posting a track.
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harrydirtface
Newbie Joined: 23 April 2017 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 7 |
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thanks LP. wasn't sure on how to embed after trying multiple times lol.
i see you're a member of the street team and i was wondering, have u guys ever considered having a feedback system? i use another forum to find & share music and they have a system where you must comment detailed feedback on 2 other posts before you can share your own music. you have to provide a link to both of your feedback comments within your own thread of music too. i was just wondering as it prevents people sharing their music and being inactive... it makes for a very active forum, although yours seems pretty active already. you shouldn't have to worry about people posting and not coming back. |
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harrydirtface
Newbie Joined: 23 April 2017 Location: England Status: Offline Points: 7 |
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thanks for the feedback man, glad you like it! you have a good point about the hook, could definitely have been more layered!
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