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    Posted: 27 April 2017 at 12:00am

https://soundcloud.com/elite-14/natashas-book

natasha's book.

the second single.

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gave you feedback personally, but id like to add:



took some bravery to tackle this topic, let alone the raw way you executed the emotion. as I said to you, we all know this girl so its a very relatable song. social commentary is a hard thing to tackle. because someone always has a view, its why they say never talk about religon or politics...it gets heated.

as far the rest, that was for you so ill keep it there. good shit fella.
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Lmao, thank you man.

Master didn't come out as loud as I expected.

Reposting w a louder master volume


EDIT: New master is uploaded.


Edited by Elite - 27 April 2017 at 12:14am
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No more looks on this??
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Well that was nice,i was liking beat simple but it effective,it was like a drummer doing
paradiddles or warming up,then in enters the piano which came off as sombre,then the
rhyming cuts in about a person who is outside the social net a victim,you delivered
some nice contents within this track,your pitch was nice (especially when you brought
the emotion along with your tone from the mid section until end),impressive,a solid
track that i liked everything was in order,your presence,timing and delivery,ripe work
but you know this already as quality is a trademark for you..peace.
"You need to learn how to make an exit,
before you can dare make an entrance".
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Thanks for the love man!
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This was dope man reminded me of Keisha's song from Kdots Section 80. Loved the way you did this and the imagery was great. Really different I dig it.
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Post Options Post Options   Likes (0) Likes(0)   Quote Slip Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 30 April 2017 at 12:52am
This was different homie but it was dope that part where the beat cut out a little at the end you were going in hard
Reminds me of a show I was watching called 13 reasons why, all n all nice track
See no evil speak no evil silent echo alter ego
inner demon violent beast so
warn the mother fucking people
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You kinda nailed this. Being completely honest not a subject matter i'd go out to listen to. You really projected the emotion in this and really got inside the character. I hope your alright, she went through some shit. Not something i'd normally listen to but i can respect it. I preferred ya chilled tone but i get why you built up as you went along. The dropping the beat bit was brave and nothing wrong with it but i'd preferred it shorter or you just took the beat to a more minimal part. I thought the beat was pretty dope and like i said when you had that chill vibe it went really well together. A mature piece and you could tell you were into it, your at an age where your not sick of women's shit yet and that made this more enjoyable.


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Thanks for the love everyone! @rut nah man im fine this isnt a true story (though it may be for someone else), just my way of touching on an important subject that i havent rapped about yet
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I agree with Mission. This has a Section.80 feel to it. The story was told well, and your voice matched the emotional content. I'm not too big a fan of the beat, but you gave it a narrative that fit the mood.
Insert something rappy here
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To me this had a TPAB vibe as far as the beat. The hook seemed like you it wasnt much time put in it. The verses made up for it though. Pretty decent story telling. The lyrics were very good! And the delivery displayed emotion in the form of pain. You killed it bro
I can only fall off in space...
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Thanks guys!
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Yo the flow you're pushing on here is MAD sick. I think you did a fantastic job on the track ~ hook was sick I just wish it was a little louder and your verses a little quieter but the lyrics x flow is on point. Great job and great beat choice. I'm also hearing some Kendrick vibes on this (y) but reminds me of S80 more than anything.
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