Audio Mic: Doom-11pm in Chicago (Return fire)

Cheeseburger Eddie wrote: Yeah that was smooth as fuck Doom. I mean you were good when I left for a bit but you sound like you got even better. God damn man.

Thanks bro, I've been working on it

D.Von Doom wrote: @DTK thanks man, I appreciate the feed. Maybe we can drop something when you get your equipment.

Yo dude,

This whole track was in the pocket. I think in terms of production you're one of the dopest dudes here. Everything sounded fine tuned and polished. I like how you controlled the beat, instead of letting it dictate your rhymes th and flow. Real conversational type delivery, where what you say is meant to be heard, as oppose to just riding the instrumental. Your articulation is next level. Every word is clean and crisp. Your tone on this joint was also pretty dope. It sounded like you meant business and had an air of confidence arounded that was evident in your mic presence. Lyrically you did what you always do on these sorts of tracks. You had s lot of slick talk and clever plays scattered here and there. Dope shit Doom Bot, I fucks wit it.

 Ok even tho I'm a text head and I don't do audio I still know rap/ hip hop and know what I'm talking about.  You don't have to be a rapper to know rap/ hip hop.   In my opinion when it comes to flow / delivery it is 2 seperate things.  I was ignorant to this in the past so don't get me wrong....Delivery is how you sound emotionally and just basically how you sound on the beat when your spitting.   You can't have delivery in text.   You may read text and spit it out loud and thats your own delivery but when you post it in text form that is flow.   Yes both text and audio can have flow.  But text can't have delivery.   

Lol i would hope not

If it ain't on wax don't bother.

Lord Puente wrote: This was sold man. The first quatrain was hands down my favorite part personally. I just loved how that came out. I also like the 3rd section of lyrics (3rd not including that one solo line). Hope to see an audio come from empire to come back at you. I think these ppl confusing flow and delivery. Delivery is how someone says it. Extreme example, jkwon on hood hop, you'd never guess his delivery from reading the lyrics (not saying I liked it).

EXACTLY LP...text cannot have delivery. Thanks for the feed

I feel like that GIF has a deeper meaning but I dont wanna get banned.


but just to play devils advocate doom..simply because I dont think these guys are articulating it well.

I think by "delivery" theyre comparing it to general disrespect. I asbolutely get where youre coming from.. where tone is often lost in translation even in text messages, someone can take a joke the wrong way by not being audible to pick up on the sarcasm.

flip side of the coin would be a meme of it was some shit and the caption was "this bitch... " and its someone doing some fuckshit.. you mentally know the tone its read in.. right? so I think by delivery theyre meaning its some disrespectful shit that can only come across one way.

on a sidenote I have no idea what verse this even is but crims "mental note" made me realize what theyre trying to articulate

Edited by Neek - 17 May 2017 at 6:42pm

Crimson Juice wrote: I've got to say i liked it,i thought your presence and tone was solid here,I didn't care for the beat to be honest,but hey watcha gota do eh,I also thought it felt like you had some thing to say too,for me it came off as raw and straight out rhyming,you had a few good jabs in there to,and not to piss on your burger,but Dizzle does have a point as such,as when reading text,the commers make it easy to grasp delivery via the voice in your head,OK we can argue I don't know what the persons voice sounds like,but then my inner voice doesn't sound like my voice,if that makes sense..solid work,in which from you I expect nothing less,as quality is your trademark..peace.

Tbh that doesn't make sense. If that's the case you would have the strong delivery reading it...if you cant actually hear it coming from the emcee himself how does he have strong delivery. Thats where lines get crossed betwen text opinion and audio. There are certain aspects text just doesnt contain